1、 中考寫作評分標準：第四檔：（1513分）語言流暢，語句通順，合乎邏輯。適當使用連詞成分。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。第三檔：（1210分）語法結構或詞匯應用基本準確。使用簡單的連詞成分。達到了預期的寫作目的。第二檔：（96分）漏掉一些信息點。有些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。使用簡單的連接成分。基本達到了預期的寫作目的。第一檔：（51分）描述不清楚，內容不連貫。語法結構或詞匯錯誤影響了對寫作內容的理解。較少使用連接成分。不能清楚的表達寫作目的。2011假設你是張林，即將初中畢業，你的美國筆友Bob來信詢問你的暑假計劃，現在請你寫一封回信，告訴他你將在爺爺奶奶家度過這個假期。注意：1.

2、至少寫岀你將要做的三件事。2.回信至少不少于80詞，信的開頭結尾已給岀，不計入總詞數。3.所給英語詞匯僅供參考。參考詞匯：summer;grandparents;relaxoneself;housework;visit;oldfriendsandrelativesHi,Bob,Thesummervacationiscomingsoon.Afteratiringschoolyear,Ingongtorelaxmyself.Iwillspendmyvacationwithmygrandparents.Iwillstaywiththemforaboutthreeweeks.Ofcourse,Iamg

3、oingtohelpthemdosomehousework.Perhapswewilltakesomeshorttrips.Besides,Iamgoingtovisitsomeofmyfriendsandrelatives.Ithinkwewillhaveahappytimetogether.Whatsmore,Iwillbeaseniorstudentinanewterm,soIamgoingtomakesomepreparations.Howwillyouspendyourholiday?Bestwishes.Yours,ZhangLin2012假設你是趙銘你班來自美國的交流學生Robe

4、rt患病住院已有三周請你用英文給他發一封電子郵件主要內容包括：詢問病情；介紹班級近期活動或學習情況；表達祝愿。注意：1詞數80一100詞左右；2.可以適當增加細節.以使行文連貫；3.信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數。DearRobert,Itsthreeweekssineeyouwereill.Howareyoufeelingnow?Weallmissyouverymuch.Recentlywehavehadmanyactivities.Wetookpartinthesportsmeetinginourschoolandwonthefirstprize.Thematcheswereexciting

5、andtough.Butwetriedourbestandgotthegoodresult.Whatapity!Youdidntwatchthem.Ihopeyouandcomebackearlier.Werebusypreparingforthesingingcompetitionnow.Wepracticeasongeverydaernoordsingbest.Remembertohaveagoodrestanddontworryaboutyourlessons.Illhelpyouwiththem.Bestwishes.Yours,ZhaoMing2013假設你是周浩，你遺失了你的英國籍

6、好友Frank借給你的一本書，請根據以下提示用英語給他寫一封信表示道歉，包括以下內容：1.怎么遺失的；2.對該書的評價；3.如何補救；4.你的教訓。注意：1.詞數80100詞左右；2.信的開頭和結尾已替你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearFrank，IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookyouweresokindtolendmelastweek.IlikethehookverymuchandIreaditeverydayandplantofinishitnextmonth.LastnightwhenIcametomyroom,itwasntfoun

7、danywhere.Iwillgetanewbookforyou.Oldbooksarelikeoldfriends.Oncetheyarelost，theycanneverbereplaced.Ifeelsorryforlosingthebook.Iwassocarelesswithmythings.Thisisawarningtometobemorecarefulinthefuture.Bestwishes.Yourstruly,ZhouMao2014良好的生活與學習習慣對我們的成長是非常重要的。請從以下的習慣中選擇一個你以前做得不夠好，但現在已具備的好習慣，談一談你養成這個習慣的過程及收

8、益。要求：1）不使用真實的校名、人名等相關信息；2）內容完整，書寫整齊；3）80詞左右；4）文章的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。MygoodhabitMygoodhabitisearlytobedandearlytorise.Twoyearsago,whenIwasaGrade7student,Ilikedreadingbooksinbed.EverydayafterIfinishedmyhomework,Ilayinbeduntil24:00oclockThenextdayIcouldngetupontime.Iusedtobelateforschool,andIfelttiredinclas

9、s.Itwastoobad.Withthehelpofmyteacherandmyparents,Igaveupthebadhabit.Eversincethen,Igotobedearlyandgetupearlynevergotoschoollateagain.Asaresult,Inmuchstrongeranddoingbetterinschoolnow.2015假如你是某中學的學生會主席王東，為了配合環保教育主題活動，請根據下面所給提示，用英語寫一封倡議書，內容包括：1.環保措施和美化城市的措施（各2條）；2.你的希望。注意：1.注意文章的整體連貫；2.文章的開頭和結尾已給岀，不計入

10、總詞數；3.80詞左右。Dearfriends,Inordertomaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful,weshouldDearfriends,Inordertomaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful,weshoulddowhatwecantoprotectit.First,weshouldplantmoretreesandflowerstomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Also,alwaysremembernottothrowrubbishorpourwastewatereverywhere.Asweallknow,wat

11、erisbecominglessandless.Soit?squitenecessarytosavewater.Forexample,turnthetapoffafterwashing.Last,butnottheleast,we?dbetterrideabikeorwalkwhengoingoutinsteadofdrivingacar.Inmyopinion,ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,ourcitywillbecomenicerandcleaner!Thankyou.WangDong2016初中生活中，你有些什么改變？你是怎

12、樣改變的？請以“Howlhavechanged為題寫一篇英語小短文，描述你發生的變化，寫作內容包括：興趣愛好、行為習慣、學習習慣等方面。要求：1.用英語寫一篇短文，80詞左右。2.任選兩方面內容。3.語言流暢書寫規范，卷面整潔。4.文中不得使用你的真實姓名校名。HowIhavechangedHowtimeflies,Threeyearshasquicklypassed,andIhavechangedalotduringthesedays.Ononehand,IwasntgoodatlearningEnglishatfirst,WhenmyEnglishteacherlearnedaboutth

13、at,shetaughtmehowtomemorizenewwords,andtoreadatmanypassagesisaspossible,soonImadegreatprogressandbecameinterestedinEnglish.Ontheotherhand,Iwastooweaktodomyexercise,butwiththehelpoftheteachersandclassmates,IdoexercisewheneverIamfree,andnowIcanrunveryfastandIanalsogoodatplayingbasketballlikeotherboys.

14、Thankstothemiddleschoollife,Ihavechangedsomuch!Thankstotheteachersandclassmates,Ihavelearnedsomuch!NeverwillIforgetthevaluablemiddleschoollife!必背范文選篇感想/學習篇（一）為了交流學習經驗，提高學習效率，中學生英語輔導報舉行了一次以Howtobeagoodlearner?為題的征文比賽活動，請寫一篇80詞左右的短文談談你的看法。【Howtobeagoodlearner?】Asagoodlearner,weshouldhavegoodhabitsandw

15、aysoflearning.Weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclassandalwayslistencarefullyinclass.Itstudyingrouspgsoodtoandhelpeachother.Weshoulddomorereadinginourfreetime.Ifwehavesomeproblems,wedbhelp.Asastudent,workinghardisimportant,butdontforgettodosportsandkeephealthy.Ithinkalltheseabovewillbehelpfultous.（

16、二）親愛的同學，你的初中學習生活馬上就要結束了，請你以“MyEnglishStudy為題，談一下三年以來學習英語的心得體會。要求：1.要點包括你在英語學習中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學習感悟;2.詞數80左右。【MyEnglishStudy】Howtimeflies!Mythree-yearmiddleschoollifewillbeoversoon.Lookingback,IhavemanymemoriesofmyEnglishstudy.WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.Iwasnotablet

17、ounderstandtheteacherinclass,andIcouldntmasterthewordsandphrases.ForatimeIwantedtogiveitup.Latheer,lpwoitfhthetheteacherandmyclassmates,Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass,keptonreadingEnglisheverydayandspokeasmuchaspossible.StepbystepImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Inaword,onlywhenyoudevelopinteresti

18、nstudyingEnglishcanyoulearnitwell.情感/生活篇（一）父親節馬上就要到了，但是有些同學不知道送什么禮物給父親。請根據下面的提示進行適當擴展，并向同學們提出一些建議。80詞左右，開頭和結尾以給出（不計入總詞數）。提示：1.如果有足夠的零花錢，可以為父親買一些使用單不貴的東西，如領帶等；2.還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情（dosomethingthatyoucando），如為父親準備一杯茶等他下班后飲用等。【FathersDa】yFathersaDyiscomingandyoumustbethinkingofgivingapresenttoyourfather.Di

19、fferentpeoplelikedifferentkindsofgifts.Ifyouhaveenoughpocketmoney,youcanbuyausefulbutnotexpensivething,likeatie.Ithinkyourfatherwilllikeit.Butifyoudonthaveenoughpocketmoney,youcandosomethingthatyoucando,forexample,youcanprepareacupoftea.Whenyourfathercomesbackfromwork,hecandrinkit.Nomatterwhatyoudo,

20、themostimportantthingistomakeyourfatherhappyonFathersDay.Dontyouthinkso?（二）今天是母親節。假定你是李華，請給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談談你將如何與母親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下：1.表述你與母親間的情感；2.為母親制作一張卡片；3.幫助母親做點事；4.陪母親散步等。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發揮；3.郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearJohn,ItsMothersDaytoday.Itsaspecialday,isntit?Ithinkweshoulddosome

21、thingtoshowourlovetoourmothersonthisspecialday.MymotherandIaregoodfriends.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,sheisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.lltakeawalkwithherafterdinneranTodayIwillmakeabeautifulcardforher,withmythanksandbestwishesonit.ThenIwillhelpherwashthecarthisafternoonandcookherfavouritefoodintheev

22、ening.Besides,Ichesswithher,forshelikesitverymuch.Iermyhsauprepys.hellbevWhatsyourplanforMothersDay?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua（三）某英文報社正就青少年與父母關系這一話題開展題為Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents的征文活動。請你根據以下要點，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。要點：1.父母規矩太多，過于強調學習成績，不理解自己等問題；2.你對這些問題的看法；3.你與父母保持良好關系的做法。【Howto

23、keepagoodrelationshipwithparents】Inmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydontallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdontquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydontallowmeto

24、makemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpresure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhardandlistentothem.Italkwiththemasfriends,andalwaystellthemmytroubles.Ialsohelpthemdosomehousework.寫人/記事篇（一）假設Linda是你的好朋友，你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學

25、回來，你們很高興見到彼此。請根據提示，簡要介紹Linda的變化。提示：1.外貌：以前個子矮，短發;現在個子高多了，長發。2.愛好：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天;現在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。3.性格：以前外向;現在有些內向。要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，適當發揮；2.層次清晰，語言流暢；3.80詞左右。【Mybestfriend】Lindaismybestfriend.Shehaschangedolotinthepasttwoyears.Sheusedtobeshortandhaveshorthair.However,nowsheismuchtallerthanbefore.Shehaslongha

26、ir.Sheusedtolikeplayingping-pong,watchingTVandchattingwithfriends.Butshelikesplayingthepiano,readingbooksandtakingawalknow.Sheusedtobeoutgoing.Nowsheisalittlequite.Ithinkpeoplesurechangeastimegoesby.Eventhoughshehaschangedalot,wewillbethebestfriendsallthetime.（二）背景設定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發來電子郵件，想了解康明

27、家鄉的變化。假如你是康敏，請根據以下提示，給Miachael回一封電子郵件。過去生活條件差，道路狹窄，車輛少，住不好，吃不飽，聯系不便現在生活條件優越，道路寬，車輛多，住得舒適，手機普及要求：1.圍繞以上內容進行合理表述；2.所表述的內容必須包含表中的所有方面；3.詞數80詞左右，開頭語以給出（不計入詞數）。參考詞匯：livingconditions,narrow,becrowdedinto,communications（通訊），telegram,thanksto,rapidly,mobilephone,policyDearMichael,Youwanttoknowthechangesabou

28、tmyhometown.Youknow,greatchangeshavetakenplacesince60yearsago.Inthepast,thelivingconditionswereverypoor.Therewerenotmanybusesorcars,andtheroadswerenarrow.Usually,abigfamilywascrowedintoasmall,darkhouse.Mostfamiliescouldnnoughfood.tgeteThecommunicationsweresimpleandslow.Peoplekeptintouchwiththeirfrie

29、ndsandrelativesfarawaymainlybyletterortelegram.Thankstothegovernment,ourhometownhasdevelopedrapidlyinrecentyears.Thelivingconditionsaremuchbetterandmorecomfortable.Theroadsarewide.Somepeoplehavetheirowncars.Mostofthepeoplehavelivedinbignewhouses.Quiteafewadultshavemobilephones.Becauseofmanygoodpolic

30、ies,Ithinkourliveswillbecomebetterandbetter.SincerelyKangMin（三）假如你是李華，今年上初三了，現在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請你根據自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數：60-80。【Mylife】IamLiHua.IaminGradeNinethisyear.Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewweeks.Iusedtogetupatseveninthemorning.ButnowIgetupatsixandreadEnglishforhalfanhoureverymorning.Iusedtowa

31、tchTVandgotobedat9:30intheevening.ButnowIhavetokeepdoinghomeworkuntil11:00intheevening.Iusedtoplaytennisinmyfreetime.ButnowIhavetospendallmyfreetimestudying.Ireallymissmyolddays.風俗/禮儀篇（一）請根據提示以“TheSpringFestival為題，”寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。提示：1.春節是中國最重要的節日2.人們大多回家過年，家庭成員團聚；3家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友（friendsandrelat

32、ives）；4孩子們喜歡春節。【TheSpringFestival】TheSpringFestivalcomesinwinter.ItisthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalinChina.Peopleusuallygohometospendthefestivalwiththeirfamily.Theyhaveabigfamilyget-together.TheChinesepeoplehavebigmealsandwatchTVduringtheSpringFestival.Theyalsovisittheirfriendsandrelatives.Chil

33、drenliketheSpringFestivalverymuchbecausetheyneedntgotoschoolanimdethteoyphlayv.ealotoft（二）假如你是郭佳，你的美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信，說她想給自己的漢語老師送一份禮物來表達自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中國的送禮習俗，所以請你給她一些建議。請根據下面的提示，用英語寫一封回信給她。提示：1.要根據個人喜好選擇禮物；2.禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙（wrappingpaper）；3.不要送鐘、鞋或者梨。要求：1.語意通順，條理清楚；2.80詞左右。（信的格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）DearL

34、inda,Iamgladtogiveyouadviceonthecustomsofgivinggiftsinmycountry.Firstly,IthinkyouneedtofindoutwhatyourChineseteacherlikes.Choosingthegiftthatyourteacherisinterestedinisagoodidea.Secondly,donarentconsideredtobeluckycolors.Thirdly,donthesehavebadmeaningsinChinesewhengivingagift.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou

35、.Yours,GuoJiatpackthegiftwithbalapcpkinogrpwahpiter,wbrecauseblackandwhitetbuyyourteacheraclock,apairofshoes,orsomepearsbe（三）剛到中國來學習不久的John應漢語老師的邀請去他家里做客，因此John向Bob請教相關禮儀。假設你是Bob,請你給John回一封電子郵件，告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右，開頭已給出（不計入總詞數）。DearJohn,IknowthatyouwillvisityourChineseteachershome.Ifyoudothefollowing,Id

36、ontthinkyouwillfeeluncomfortable.First,youshouldarrivealittleearlier.Beinglateisimpolite.Second,itsalsogoodtobringagiftsuchassflowersorfruit.Third,youwillprobablyusechopstickstohavedinner.Remembernottostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Youdbetytetrhsaatthefoodisdeliciouswhileyouareeating.Finally,afterd

37、inner,showingthanksisalsonecessary.Andyouarenotsupposedtostaylongafterdinner.Goodluck!Yours,Bob社會/網絡篇（一）隨著網絡的發展，人們消費觀念轉變，購物方式也在悄然地發生變化。“網購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇網上購物的文章。優點1.足不出戶;節約時間;避免擁擠、勞累。2.價格通常比較便宜。3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。缺點1.只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身。2.容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費。注意：1.所表述的內容必須包含表格中的所有方面；2

38、.80詞左右，開頭文章已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：網購shoppingonline;避免做某事avoiddoingsth;商品goods;導致cause【Shoppingonline】WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline.Ithasbecomeafashioninourdailylife.Someofusstudentsalsojointhegroup.Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.Justbyaclickofthemouse,youcanbuywhatyoure

39、interestedinwithoutgoingoutdoors.Youcanavoidgettingtiredandbeingtrappedinthecrowdedpeopleandcarsandsavetime.Whenshoppingonline,youcanchoosefrommorevarietiesofgoods,whosepricesaregenerallylower.Everycoinhastwosides.Itsdisadvantagesareobvious,too.Ontheonehand,itsveryeasyforyoutobuygdifferentfromthepic

40、turesyouseeontheInternert.Ontheotherhand,shoppingonlinemaycausepeopletobuygoodsthatarenotbadlyneeded.Thatsawasteofmoney.Allinall,Iloveshoppingonline.（二）現在很多中學生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你根據下面的調查結果，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。【Popsongs】Nowadaysmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentslikepopsongs.Afewofthemlikequietmusicbecausetheythinkquietmu

41、sicmakesthemfeelcomfortable.Manyofthestudentslikemusicianswhocanwritetheirownlyrics.Why?Theythinkitscooltoexpresstheirownfeelings.Moststudentslikemusicthattheycandanceto.Theythinkthemusicisfullofenergy.Whentheyaretiredorbored,theycandancetothemusic.健康/生活篇（一）健康對我們來說非常重要，我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據下面表格的提示，以“

42、GoodWaystoKeepHealthy為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數，可適當發揮。GoodWaystoKeepHealthy】dbetItisveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushealthy?First,weneedtohavehealthyeatinghabits,wecaneatalotofvegetablesandfreshfruit,butwemeat.Differentkindsoffoodarenecessary,itnt

43、toesaatlasobaimlapnocetaddiet.Then,playingsportseverydaycanalsohelpuskeepfit.Wecantakewalksafterdinner,wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus,afterschoolwecanspendhoursplayingbasketballorsoccerwithourfriends.Weshouldtrytodomoreexerciseeveryday.Happinessisanotherwaytokeephealthy.Whenwearelonelyorunhapp

44、y,trytomakefriends.Itisagoodwaytokeepushappy.Ifyousmileoften,youalsofeelhappy.So,behappytobehealthy.（二）健康一直是人們關注的問題，我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為主題的主題班會，請根據以下內容談談你的看法。1.保持健康的重要性；2.保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天鍛煉一小時；;早睡早起；勤洗手；3.自己的看法（至少一條）。注意：1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴展。3.字數60-80詞;4.文章開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。【Keephealthy】Boysandgirls,I

45、tisveryimportantforusstudentstokeephealthy.Therearemanywaystobehealthy.Wedbettereatmorefruitsandvegetables.Takeexerciseforatleastonehoureveryday.Weneedenoughsleepandrestsoitisimportanttogotobedearlyandgetupearly.Besides,weshouldwashourhandsasoftenaspossible.Inmyopinion,wemustntdrinkwineorsmoke.Theya

46、rebadforourhealth.（三）近20年來，各方面的調查表明：青少年的體質不斷下降。請你以“Howtokeepheahy為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說說你的看法和建議。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。主要內容包括：1.體質下降的原因。如：eattoomuchjunkfood,havetoomuchhomework.2.合理的健康建議。如：shoulddomoreexercise,eatabalanceddiet（飲食平衡）,enoughsleep【Howtokeephealthy】Nowadaysstudentsphysicalfitnessisdecliningyearbyyear.Ithinktherearesomereasons.Studentshavetoomuchhomeworktodo,sotheyhavel