1、江西省蓮花縣2017高考英語一輪寫作專題品析一2016書面表達訓(xùn)練假如你是李華。你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復(fù)友情，特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議。請你根據(jù)以下要點給Tom回一封郵件：1禮物選擇；2.你的理由；3.其它和解建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Tom，I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter._Best wishes，Li Hua【參考范文】

2、Dear Tom，I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go ou

3、ting by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally­friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, havin

4、g dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.Best wishes，Li Hua【廣東省高三考前沖刺卷】基礎(chǔ)寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)廣州日報就中學(xué)生閱讀問題在廣州市6所中學(xué)的653位學(xué)生中進行了一次調(diào)查，以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：百分比態(tài)度74.5%課外閱讀不可取代7.6%每天閱讀課外書的時間能達到至少1小時77.8%想閱讀，但時間都被功課擠滿寫作內(nèi)容根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一

5、篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：1調(diào)查組織者、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對象；2三種不同的比例及其各自的態(tài)度；3在閱讀內(nèi)容上，休閑類和娛樂類雜志受到熱捧。寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，語篇連貫。_基礎(chǔ)寫作【參考范文】Recently 653 students from six middle schools in Guangzhou took part in a survey organised by Guangzhou Daily about students reading problems.According to the survey,74.5% of the s

6、tudents agree to read after class，saying that out­of­class reading can never be replaced by other activities.7.6% of the students also think its a good idea to read after class and insist on doing so for at least one hour every day after class.However,77.8% of the students cant have time t

7、o read after class because of too much homework though they would love to.Besides，leisure and pleasure magazines are really popular among all the reading contents.2016書面表達訓(xùn)練假定你是張華，在報紙上看到暑假期間有一場籃球聯(lián)賽在招聘兼職英語翻譯。請你用英語寫一封求職信，內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2. 介紹自己和此工作有關(guān)的能力或條件； 3. 表達希望應(yīng)聘成功的期望。注意：可根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。詞數(shù)：不少于100（短文開

8、頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Sir, I learned in the newspaper that you are looking for a part-time translator for a basketball match. 【參考范文】Dear Sir, I learned in the newspaper that you are looking for a part-time translator for a basketball match.I want to apply for the job. My name is Zhang Hua. Im an 18-year

9、-old student at Yingsheng Middle School. I believe Im qualified for the job. First, Im so interested in basketball that I know all the basketball terms well and all the famous teams and basketball players around the world. Second, I often practise English with foreigners and can speak English fluent

10、ly. Third, Im fast and can deal with all kinds of urgent cases on the spot. Last but not least, I have worked as a translator before. In a word, Im confident that I can do the job well, so Im eager to get the opportunity.Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Hua【2014高考英語廣東省梅州市質(zhì)檢試卷】基礎(chǔ)寫作 (共1小

11、題，滿分15分)以下是網(wǎng)上走紅的 “低碳哥”的基本情況.時 間: 2011年。人物介紹: “低碳哥”, 用行動宣講環(huán)保概念的年輕人,主張少用能源,減少二氧化碳的排放。主要做法: 1. 撿起廢紙,用空白一面寫字； 2. 不開燈看電視,還把電視亮度調(diào)到最低(minimum)； 3. 上班騎自行車,不開車等。人們的看法: 做秀,不現(xiàn)實。你的看法: 我完全支持他的想法和行為，盡管他的行為未能對全球氣候變暖造成很大的影響，但他至少可以享受健康的生活。【寫作內(nèi)容】根據(jù)以上“低碳哥”的基本情況寫一篇介紹,內(nèi)容包括:“低碳哥”的簡要介紹及走紅的時間;他的主要做法及人們的看法3、你的看法【寫作要求】只能使用5個

12、句子表達全部內(nèi)容。【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。參考詞匯: 低碳哥Low-carbon Brother 二氧化碳 carbon dioxide【參考范文】Possible version:A young man called Low-carbon Brother became a hit one on the Internet in 2011, who suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce

13、carbon dioxide in the air. For example, he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something and while he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Besides, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some peop

14、le think that what he is doing is just a show and impractical. But as far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior because although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.基礎(chǔ)寫作評分說明基礎(chǔ)寫作主要考查考生的語言結(jié)構(gòu)的應(yīng)用能力：能夠應(yīng)用正確、規(guī)范的語言表達特定的內(nèi)容。本試題要

15、求考生根據(jù)所提供的信息，使用5個句子表達寫作內(nèi)容所提供的全部內(nèi)容。在評分時，應(yīng)注意以下幾個方面：1按照評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，實行分析法評分：按語言、內(nèi)容和連貫三項標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別給分；2在語言方面，重點評判句子的語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確、用詞是否規(guī)范；考生是否使用了合適的句型結(jié)構(gòu)；3在內(nèi)容方面，重點評判考生是否表達所提供的全部信息；如果考生在表達完整的內(nèi)容時，適當(dāng)添加一些內(nèi)容，不扣分；4在連貫方面，重點評判5個句子是否構(gòu)成一篇連貫的短文。三、基礎(chǔ)寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):語 言7-8具有很好的語言運用能力；語法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確性高，詞匯方面使用較好，只有少許錯誤。5-6具有較好的語言運用能力；語法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確性較好，有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或

16、詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。3-4語言運用能力一般；語法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)基本準(zhǔn)確，語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤不影響理解。1-2語言運用能力較差；語法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)基本不夠準(zhǔn)確，語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤較多，而且影響了對句子意義的理解。0語言運用能力很差；語法、句子結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯錯誤很多，句子意義無法理解。備注每多或少寫一個句子，扣1分。內(nèi) 容5包括了所有信息內(nèi)容。4包括了大部分信息內(nèi)容。3包括了基本信息內(nèi)容。2包括了小部分信息內(nèi)容。1包括了少許信息內(nèi)容。0沒有包括所提供的信息內(nèi)容。連 貫2內(nèi)容連貫，而且結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。1.5內(nèi)容連貫性比較好，而且結(jié)構(gòu)比較緊湊。1內(nèi)容連貫性較差，而且結(jié)構(gòu)不夠緊湊。0內(nèi)容缺乏連貫性，

17、而且結(jié)構(gòu)松散。備注文不對題，給0分。閱讀下列短文, 從給的四個選項 (A、B、C和D) 中, 選出最佳選項。(2013·蘇錫常鎮(zhèn)四市二調(diào)，C)Global Positioning Systems are now a part of everyday driving in many countries. These satellitebased systems provide turnbyturn directions to help people get to where they want to go. But they can also cause a lot of proble

18、ms, sending you to the wrong place or leave you completely lost. Many times, the driver is to blame. Sometimes a GPS error is responsible. Most often, says Barry Brown, it is a combination of the two.Barry Brown is with the Mobile Life Centre in Stockholm, Sweden. The center studies humancomputer in

19、teraction, or HCI, especially communications involving wireless devices. We spoke to Mr Brown by Skype. He told us about an incident involving a friend who had flown to an airport in the eastern United States. There he borrowed a GPSequipped car to use during his stay.Barry Brown：“And they just plug

20、ged in an address and then set off to their destination.” And, then it wasn't until they were driving for thirty minutes that they realized they had put in a destination back on the West Coast where they lived. They actually put their home address in. So again, the_GPS_is_kind_of_“garbage_in_gar

21、bage_out”Mr Brown says this is a common human error. But, he says, what makes the problem worse has to do with some of the shortcomings, or failures, of GPS equipment.Barry Brown：“One problem with many GPS units is they have a very small screen and they just tell you the next turn. Because they just

22、 give you the next turn, sometimes that means that it is not really giving you the overview that you would need to know that it's going to the wrong place.”Barry Brown formerly served as a professor with the University of California, San Diego. While there, he worked on a project with Eric Lauri

23、er from the University of Edinburgh. The two men studied the effects of GPS devices on driving by placing cameras in people's cars. They wrote a paper based on their research. It is called “The Normal, Natural Troubles of Driving with GPS.”Barry Brown: “One of the things that struck us, perhaps

24、the most important thing was that you have to know what you're doing when you use a GPS. There are these new skills that people have developed. There are these new competencies that you need to have to be able to use a GPS because they sometimes go wrong.”Barry Brown says this goes against a com

25、mon belief that GPS systems are for passive drivers who lack navigational (導(dǎo)航) skills.“The Normal, Natural Troubles of Driving with GPS” lists several areas where GPS systems can cause confusion for drivers. These include maps that are outdated, incorrect or difficult to understand. They also includ

26、e timing issues related to when GPS commands are given.Barry Brown says to make GPS systems better we need a better understanding of how drivers, passengers and GPS systems work together.文章大意：本文是一篇說明文。GPS全球定位系統(tǒng)可以幫助人們找到想去的地方，但GPS也會帶來許多問題，所以使用GPS全球定位系統(tǒng)是否可靠變得不確定。1What is the best title for this passage

27、?AIs GPS system reliable to use?BWhat is the use of GPS?CHow to make the most of GPS?DBlame! GPS or Passengers?答案：A標(biāo)題概括題。文章第一段是全文的主旨段。根據(jù)第一段可知，GPS全球定位系統(tǒng)可以幫助人們找到想去的地方，但GPS也會導(dǎo)致許多問題，所以使用GPS全球定位系統(tǒng)是否可靠變得不確定。所以A項最適合做文章的標(biāo)題，故答案選A。2What is the implication of the underlined part?AGPS is just a garbage device.B

28、GPS will not correct human errors.CGPS adjusts your wrong destination.DGPS is just as smart as human beings.答案：B句意理解題。根據(jù)畫線句子后面一句“Mr Brown says this is a common human error.”并結(jié)合上下文可知，畫線句子所包含的意思是：GPS不能糾正人類的錯誤。故答案選B。3Which is NOT mentioned as a GPS shortcoming in the passage?ASmall screen.BTiming of co

29、mmands.COutdated maps.DDear cameras GPS uses.答案：D細(xì)節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)文章第五段第一句可知，A項是GPS的缺點；根據(jù)文章倒數(shù)第二段可知，B、C兩項均是GPS的缺點。所以只有D項不是GPS的缺點。故答案選D。4According to the passage, people commonly believe that _.Ayou have to know where to go when using GPSByou need to have new competencies to use GPS wellCGPS is proper for driv

30、ers with little sense of directionDGPS is fit for people having good understanding of maps答案：C推理判斷題。通讀全文可知，人們普遍認(rèn)為，GPS全球定位系統(tǒng)適合方向感差的人。C項符合文義，故答案選C。【2016高考訓(xùn)練】閱讀下列短文, 從給的四個選項 (A、B、C和D) 中, 選出最佳選項。A new study shows students who write notes by hand during lectures perform better on exams than those who use

31、 laptops(筆記本電腦)Students are increasingly using laptops for note­taking because of speed and legibility(清晰度)But the research has found laptop users are less able to remember and apply the concepts they have been taught.Researchers performed experiments that aimed to find out whether using a lapt

32、op increased the tendency to make notes“mindlessly”by taking down word for word what the professors said.In the first experiment，students were given either a laptop or pen and paper.They listened to the same lectures and were told to use their usual note­taking skills.Thirty minutes after the t

33、alk，they were examined on their ability to remember facts and on how well they understood concepts.The researchers found that laptop users took twice as many notes as those who wrote by hand.However，the typists performed worse at remembering and applying the concepts.Both groups scored similarly whe

34、n it came to memorizing facts.The researchers' report said，“While more notes are beneficial，if the notes are taken mindlessly，as is more likely the case on a laptop，the benefit disappears.”In another experiment aimed at testing long­term memory，students took notes as before but were tested a week after the lecture.This time，the students who wrote notes by hand performed significantly better on the exam.These two experiments suggest that handwritten notes are not only better for immediate learning and understanding，but that they also lead to superior revision in the futu