Unit10LendingaHelpingHand單元話(huà)題滿(mǎn)分范文必背基礎(chǔ)語(yǔ)篇鞏固練1．假設(shè)你是李華，上周你參加了學(xué)校組織的去養(yǎng)老院的志愿者活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文：1.介紹活動(dòng)的基本信息（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等）。2.描述在養(yǎng)老院的具體活動(dòng)（如打掃衛(wèi)生、陪老人聊天、表演節(jié)目等）。3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)這次志愿者活動(dòng)的感受和收獲，以及對(duì)未來(lái)參加此類(lèi)活動(dòng)的想法。要求：1.包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意通順、連貫；3.詞數(shù)：70—100詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lastweek,Itookpartinavolunteeractivityorganizedbyourschool.Wewenttoanursinghome.ManyofmyclassmatesandIjoinedthisactivity.Whenwegotthere,wefirsthelpedtheoldpeoplecleantheirrooms.Thenwesatdownandchattedwiththem.Welistenedtotheirlifestoriesandsharedourschoolexperiences.Someofusevenperformedshowslikesinginganddancing.Theoldpeoplewatchedwithbigsmilesontheirfaces.Thisvolunteeractivitymademefeelreallygood.Ilearnedthattheoldpeopleneedourcareandcompany.Ialsounderstoodtheimportanceofgiving.Inthefuture,Ihopetotakepartinmoresuchactivitiestobringmorewarmthtothoseinneed.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，描述了參加養(yǎng)老院志愿者活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”，用于敘述上周發(fā)生的活動(dòng)；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已明確給出，包括活動(dòng)的基本信息、在養(yǎng)老院的具體活動(dòng)以及個(gè)人感受和收獲等，考生應(yīng)確保涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容豐富且連貫。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹活動(dòng)的基本信息。開(kāi)頭簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間（上周）、地點(diǎn)（養(yǎng)老院）、參與人員（學(xué)校組織的志愿者，包括自己）等基本信息，為下文的具體活動(dòng)做鋪墊；第二步，描述在養(yǎng)老院的具體活動(dòng)。詳細(xì)敘述在養(yǎng)老院所做的幾件事情，如打掃衛(wèi)生、陪老人聊天、表演節(jié)目等，可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，使描述更加生動(dòng)；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。談?wù)劯惺芎褪斋@以及未來(lái)想法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①tookpartin參加②organizedby由……組織③nursinghome養(yǎng)老院④cleantheirrooms打掃房間[高分句型]①Lastweek,Itookpartinavolunteeractivityorganizedbyourschool.(過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ))②Thisvolunteeractivitymademefeelreallygood.(make+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)結(jié)構(gòu))③Ilearnedthattheoldpeopleneedourcareandcompany.(賓語(yǔ)從句)2．“幫助他人，快樂(lè)自己”是新華學(xué)校李薇同學(xué)的生活理念，每個(gè)周末她都在自己的小區(qū)幫助老人們做一些事情。假如你是李薇，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示信息寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)70左右的短文，介紹自己上周六做過(guò)的事情。時(shí)間事件周六上午幫王奶奶買(mǎi)菜、包水餃周六下午幫李爺爺種花，打掃社區(qū)衛(wèi)生____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hi,I’mLiWeifromXinhuaSchool.Ilikehelpingotherpeople.Everyweekend,Ialwayshelptheoldpeopleinourneighborhood.LastSaturdaymorning,IhelpedGrandmaWangbuysomevegetablesinthesupermarket.ThenIhelpedhermakedumplingsathome.Intheafternoon,IhelpedGrandpaLigrowflowers.ThenIcleanedtheneighborhood.Intheevening,althoughIfeltverytired,Iwasveryhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，首先介紹個(gè)人概況；第二步，接著具體闡述周六一天幫助小區(qū)老人做的一些事情；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①likedoingsth喜歡做某事②inthesupermarket在超市③makedumplings包餃子④growflowers種花[高分句型]Intheevening,althoughIfeltverytired,Iwasveryhappy.(although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)3．“幫助他人，快樂(lè)自己”是第一中學(xué)夏悅同學(xué)的生活理念，每個(gè)周末她都在自己生活的小區(qū)里幫助老人們做一些事情。假如你是夏悅，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格信息寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹自己周日做的事情。時(shí)間做的事情周日上午幫李奶奶買(mǎi)菜，包餃子。幫王爺爺做飯。周日下午幫劉爺爺打掃衛(wèi)生。提示詞：weekend周末；make做；dumpling餃子；dosomecleaning打掃衛(wèi)生寫(xiě)作要求：1.文中必須包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，字跡工整，不少于60詞；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和地名等相關(guān)信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Hi,IamXiaYue.Ilikehelpingotherpeople.EveryweekendIalwayshelptheoldpeopleinourneighborhood.LastSundaymorning,IhelpedGrandmaLibuysomevegetablesinthesupermarket.ThenIhelpedhermakedumplingsathome.IhelpGrandpaWangmakemeals.IntheafternoonIhelpedGrandpaLiudosomecleaning.IntheeveningIfeltverytired,butIwasveryhappy. 【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我喜歡幫助他人。”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——周日上午和下午所做的事情等均要一一闡述。第三步：書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事②makedumplings包餃子③dosomecleaning打掃衛(wèi)生[高分句型]①ThenIhelpedhermakedumplingsathome.(helpsb.dosth.的用法）②IntheeveningIfeltverytired,butIwasveryhappy.(but表轉(zhuǎn)折)4．你所在的社區(qū)正在招募志愿者，假如你是李華，想申請(qǐng)參加該活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英文向社區(qū)中心負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封自薦信。內(nèi)容包括以下三點(diǎn)：1.你的優(yōu)秀品德有哪些？（至少兩點(diǎn)）2.你為什么想成為志愿者？（至少兩點(diǎn)）3.你能為社區(qū)做什么？（至少三點(diǎn)）要求：1.信中必須包括上述所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，字跡工整；3.文章不少于80詞。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,Iwouldliketorecommendmyselfasavolunteerforourcommunity.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopethatyoucanoffermeachance.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,Iwouldliketorecommendmyselfasavolunteerforourcommunity.Ihavemanygoodqualitiestobeavolunteer.I’macleverandhelpfulboy.Iamgoodatallmylessons.Icanusecomputerswell,too.Iamwillingtohelppeopleinneed.Ithinkit’sourdutytohelpothers.Atthesametime,helpingotherscanmakemehappier.IfIbecomeavolunteer,Icanhelpchildrenwiththeirhomeworkanddosomeshoppingfortheoldpeople.Icanalsodothecomputerworkforourcommunity.Ihopethatyoucanoffermeachance.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一封自薦信，應(yīng)征去社區(qū)當(dāng)志愿者。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，承接開(kāi)頭，介紹自己應(yīng)征當(dāng)志愿者的優(yōu)秀品德；第二步，說(shuō)明應(yīng)征當(dāng)志愿者的理由；第三步，羅列能為社區(qū)做什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①helpful樂(lè)于助人的②begoodat擅長(zhǎng)……③atthesametime同時(shí)[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkit’sourdutytohelpothers.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②IfIbecomeavolunteer,Icanhelpchildrenwiththeirhomeworkanddosomeshoppingfortheoldpeople.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）5．善良的人們常以自己的善舉溫暖這個(gè)世界，把愛(ài)與希望傳遞給他人。這樣的行為不僅幫助了他人，也使他們?cè)诟冻龅倪^(guò)程中體驗(yàn)到了真切的快樂(lè)。親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，你也是一個(gè)善良的人。請(qǐng)以“BeKind,BeHappy!”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，敘述一次你通過(guò)善行溫暖他人并從中獲得快樂(lè)的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｒ螅?.語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔；2.詞數(shù)不少于80；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名。BeKind,BeHappy!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：BeKind,BeHappy!Ialwaysbelievebeingkindtootherscanmakemehappy.Here’smyexperienceofhelpingothers.Oneday,Imetaforeigneronmywaytothelibrary.Hegotlostanddidn’tfindthewaytohishotel.HeaskedmeforhelpandIshowedhimtheway.Iwasafraidhecouldn’tfindtherightway,soItookhimtothehoteldirectly.Whenwegottothehotel,hethankedmeformyhelp.Aftersayinggoodbyetohim,Iwenttothelibraryhappily.SuddenlyIrealizedthathelpingtheforeignermademehappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；③提示：要根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出用善舉溫暖他人，自己也會(huì)獲得快樂(lè)；第二步，講述自己曾經(jīng)幫助他人的經(jīng)歷及感受；第三步，總結(jié)提升，強(qiáng)調(diào)自己今后將繼續(xù)幫助他人。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①onone’swayto...在某人去……的路上②asksb.forhelp向某人求助③getto到達(dá)④thanksb.forsth.因某事而感謝某人⑤saygoodbyetosb.向某人告別[高分句型]①I(mǎi)alwaysbelievebeingkindtootherscanmakemehappy.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）②Whenwegottothehotel,hethankedmeformyhelp.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）6．繼3月7日學(xué)校組織的慈善義賣(mài)活動(dòng)后，你們班還想再組織另一個(gè)“援助之手”助人為樂(lè)活動(dòng)，走進(jìn)月牙湖養(yǎng)老院，提供力所能及的幫助。你承擔(dān)了班級(jí)本次活動(dòng)的策劃，并和你英國(guó)的筆友Mike進(jìn)行交流分享。要求：1.請(qǐng)參考表格要點(diǎn)提示，完成給Mike的英文信。2.條理清晰，語(yǔ)意連貫。3.詞數(shù)80左右，信的開(kāi)頭已提供，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。“HelpingHands”activityTimeontheafternoonof19MarchPlaceYueyaLakeNursingHomeProblemsoldpeoplemayhaveProblem1:...Problem2:...Differentkindsofhelpyouwilloffer...DearMike,On7March,ourschoolheldasuccessfulcharitysale.WeraisedalotofmoneytohelpthepoorstudentsinHaizishanMiddleSchoolinYunnan.Wefeltsohappy!Wearegoingtohaveanother“HelpingHands”activity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,WangBin【答案】例文：DearMike,On7March,ourschoolheldasuccessfulcharitysale.WeraisedalotofmoneytohelpthepoorstudentsinHaizishanMiddleSchoolinYunnan.Wefeltsohappy!Wearegoingtohaveanother“HelpingHands”activity.Itwilltakeplaceontheafternoonof19MarchatYueyaLakeNursingHome.Theoldpeopletheremayfacetwoproblems:somehavetroublemovingfreely,andothersoftenfeellonely.Tohelp,we’llcleantheirroomsandassistwithheavytasks.Moreover,weplantochatwiththemandputonperformances,likesinginganddancing.I’msuretheseactivitieswillbringthemjoy.Yourssincerely,WangBin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封信件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹學(xué)校組織的慈善義賣(mài)活動(dòng)很成功；第二步，介紹即將舉辦的“援助之手”活動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoingtodo將要做某事②takeplace發(fā)生③plantodo計(jì)劃做某事[高分句型]①Wearegoingtohaveanother“HelpingHands”activity.(begoingto結(jié)構(gòu))②I’msuretheseactivitieswillbringthemjoy.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)7．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Helpingothersishappy”為題目，寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。提示:(1)我過(guò)去常常(usedto)把零花錢(qián)花在買(mǎi)衣服和零食上。(2)三年前老師告訴我們世界上有許多貧困兒童沒(méi)有衣服和食物，更不能上學(xué)。(3)從那以后，我將零花錢(qián)捐給(donate)一個(gè)名為UNICEF的組織，它主要幫助有需要的兒童。(4)我為幫助別人而感到自豪，幫助別人很快樂(lè)。Helpingothersishappy______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HelpingothersishappyIusedtospendmostofmypocketmoneyinbuyingclothesandsnacks.Threeyearsago,myEnglishteachertoldusthattherearesomanypoorchildrenaroundtheworld.Theyaretoopoortogotoschool.Someofthemevenhavenoclothesorfood.Fromthenon,IdonatemymoneytoUNICEFthathelpschildreninneed.I’mreallyproudthatIcanhelpothers.Andhelpingothersmakesmehappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹作者過(guò)去常常把零花錢(qián)花在買(mǎi)衣服和零食上；第二步，介紹三年前老師告訴他們世界上有許多貧困兒童沒(méi)有衣服和食物，更不能上學(xué)，從那以后，作者將零花錢(qián)捐給一個(gè)名為UNICEF的組織，它主要幫助有需要的兒童；第三步，最后表達(dá)作者為幫助別人而感到自豪，幫助別人很快樂(lè)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①u(mài)sedto過(guò)去常常②aroundtheworld全世界③gotoschool去上學(xué)④inneed貧困的[高分句型]①Threeyearsago,myEnglishteachertoldusthattherearesomanypoorchildrenaroundtheworld.（賓語(yǔ)從句）

②I’mreallyproudthatIcanhelpothers.（賓語(yǔ)從句）重難語(yǔ)篇拔高練8．

假如你是Jimmy，你在海報(bào)上看到學(xué)生中心在招募志愿者的消息。每逢周末，你也想去幫助有需要的人，因?yàn)檫@既能鍛煉自己，又能回報(bào)社會(huì)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信，申請(qǐng)一份你喜歡的志愿者工作。內(nèi)容包括：1.你想去什么地方做志愿，志愿工作的內(nèi)容是什么?2.你的情況年齡，興趣愛(ài)好，性格等以及你能勝任這份工作的原因（兩點(diǎn)及以上）。3.表達(dá)想要成為志愿者的愿望。作文要求：1.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。Dearsirormadam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Jimmy【答案】例文Dearsirormadam,

MynameisJimmy.I’m15yearsold.Iamoutgoing.Ilikemakingfriendswithothers.Ilikehelpingothersverymuch.Icandosomehousework,suchascooking,washingclothes,sweepingthefloorandsoon.SoIwanttovolunteerinthenursinghome.Ihopetohelpthemcleanupandtellthemstories.Ihopetobeavolunteertohelpthem.

Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,Jimmy【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封信；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中的“提示信息”，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我是Jimmy”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——在哪個(gè)地方做志愿、志愿工作的內(nèi)容、個(gè)人情況、勝任工作的原因等均要一一闡述。第三步：書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我期待你的回復(fù)”。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dosomehousework做家務(wù)②lookforwardto期望③makefriendswith與……交朋友[高分句型]①I(mǎi)candosomehousework,suchascooking,washingclothes,sweepingthefloorandsoon.(suchas用法）②Ilikehelpingothersverymuch.(動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ))9．假如你是李華，上周六你們班組織了一次去養(yǎng)老院做義工的活動(dòng)。作為校報(bào)的小記者，你打算用日記的形式把這次活動(dòng)記錄下來(lái)，發(fā)表在校報(bào)上，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)出這篇英語(yǔ)日記稿件。1.天氣，時(shí)間，交通方式等；2.具體活動(dòng)：打掃房間，洗衣服，講故事等；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)60左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.日記格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Saturday,June29th【答案】例文：Saturday,June29thItwassunnytoday.MyclassmatesandIwenttotheoldpeople’shomebybusat8:00am.Afterwearrivedthere,someofusstartedtocleantheroomsandsomewashedclothes.Asforme,Ireadinterestingstoriesforthem.Timewentquickly,westayedthereforaboutthreehours.Thenwewenthomebybus.Iwastiredbuthappy.IthinktheoldpeopleneedloveandIwillvisitthemoften.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇日記寫(xiě)作，按照三個(gè)要點(diǎn)將班級(jí)的一次去養(yǎng)老院做義工的過(guò)程記錄下來(lái)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等；語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。10．你校團(tuán)支部組織學(xué)生在業(yè)余時(shí)間參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。上周日你參加了志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)“Volunteernowforourcommonfuture”，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向英文社團(tuán)投稿,記述本次活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｒc(diǎn)提示:①helpoldpeople②cleanupthestreet③holdacharitybazaar(義賣(mài))要求