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讀后續寫閱讀下面短文,根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。Thatnight,Iquarreledwithmymother,thenstormedoutofthehouse.Whileontheroad,IrememberedthatIdidnothaveanymoneyinmypocket,andIdidnoteventakemycellphonewithmetomakeacallhome.Atthesametime,Iwentthroughanoodleshop.Pickingupthesweetfragrance,Isuddenlyfeltveryhungry.Iwishedforabowlofnoodles,butIhadnomoney!Thesellersawmestandingbeforethecounterandasked,“Hey,littlegirl,youwanttoeatabowl?”“But…butIdonotcarrymoney…”Ishylyreplied.“Okay,I’lltreatyou.”thesellersaid.“Comein,Iwillcookyouabowl.”Afewminuteslatertheownerbroughtmeasteamingbowlofnoodles.Aftereatingsomepieces,Icried.“Whatisit?”Heasked.“Nothing.Iamjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”IsaidasIwipedmytears.“Evenastrangeronthestreetgivesmeabowlofnoodles,andmymother,afteraquarrel,chasedmeoutofthehouse.Sheiscruel!”Thesellersighed,“Girl,whydoyouthinkso?Thinkagain.Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyoufeltthatway.Yourmotherhasbeentakingcareofyousinceyouwerelittle,whywereyounotgratefulandwhydidyouhurtyourmom?”Iwasreallysurprisedafterhearingthat.Whydidn’tIthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,andmymotherhasraisedmesinceIwaslittleandIhaveneverfeltso,notevenalittle.Ithoughtshewassupposedtotakecareofmeandloveme.Onthewayhome,IthoughtinmyheadwhatIwouldsaytomymotherwhenIarrivedhome:“Mom,I’msorry,Iknowitismyfault,pleaseforgiveme…”注意:1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150詞左右:2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Meanwhilemanymemoriescamebackintomymind.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________與母親和解的故事續寫續寫分析(兩段)?第一段:此段以“我”的回憶展開,“Meanwhilemanymemoriescamebackintomymind.”直接引出下文對母親日常關愛的回憶。通過描述“thecountlessmorningswhenmymomwokeupearlytoprepareawarmbreakfastforme”“theeveningsshepatientlyhelpedmewithmyhomework”以及“thetimewhenIwassick,andshestayedupallnightbymybedside”這些具體場景,從生活的不同方面展現母親的愛,使讀者能真切感受到母親對“我”無微不至的關懷。“HowcouldIhavebeensoblindtoherkindness?Ifeltadeepsenseofguiltformythoughtlesswordsandactionsduringthequarrel.”這兩句則是“我”內心的反思,從情感上強化了“我”對自己行為的懊悔,為第二段回家后的情節發展奠定了情感基礎,讓故事在情感上更加連貫且富有層次。?第二段:開頭“Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.Hereyeswerered,andIcouldtellshehadbeencrying.”通過對母親狀態的細致描寫,直觀地呈現出母親在“我”離家后的擔憂與傷心,進一步突出母親對“我”的愛。“我”的道歉“Mom,I’msosorry,”Isaid,myvoicechokingwithtears.“Iwaswrong.You’vealwayslovedme,andIdidn’trealizeit.”以及母親的回應“Shestoodupandhuggedmetightly.‘It’sokay,honey.I’mjustgladyou’rehomesafe,’shesaidsoftly.”,這一對話和動作的描寫,生動地展現了母女之間的和解過程,將故事推向溫馨的高潮。“Inthatwarmembrace,Ifelttheunbreakablebondofourmother-daughterrelationship,andIknewthatourlovewouldalwaysovercomeanyquarrel.”最后一句則從“我”的內心感受出發,升華了故事主題,強調了親情的強大力量,使整個故事更加完整且富有感染力。?故事線?“我”與母親吵架后離家,身無分文且未帶手機,在路邊面館因饑餓被店主請吃一碗面,“我”因店主的善意而感動,同時抱怨母親的狠心。?店主的話讓“我”反思,“我”開始回憶母親在生活中對“我”的諸多關愛,如早起做早餐、耐心輔導作業、生病時徹夜照顧等,意識到自己對母親的忽視與誤解,內心充滿愧疚。?“我”決定回家向母親道歉,到家后看到母親坐在餐桌前,滿臉擔憂與疲憊,眼睛發紅,顯然哭過。“我”鼓起勇氣向母親道歉,母親驚喜又欣慰,緊緊擁抱“我”,母女倆和解,“我”深刻感受到母女間深厚的情感紐帶,相信愛能戰勝一切爭吵。?短語?comebackintoone'smind回到某人的腦海?wakeupearly早起?preparebreakfastfor為……準備早餐?rushtoschool匆忙去上學?helpsb.withsth.幫助某人做某事?stayupallnight整夜未眠?byone'sbedside在某人床邊?beblindto對……視而不見?feelasenseofguilt感到愧疚?walkupto走向?chokewithtears哽咽著流淚?lookupat抬頭看?standup站起來?hugsb.tightly緊緊擁抱某人?主旨升華句?Thisheartwarmingnarrativeofreconciliationbetweenmotheranddaughternotonlyshowcasesthepowerofself-reflectioninmendingbrokenrelationshipsbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthattheloveofamother,oftenhiddeninthemundanedetailsofdailylife,isawellspringofunwaveringsupportandunconditionalaffection.?這個關于母女和解的溫馨故事,不僅展示了自我反思在修復破裂關系中的力量,還深刻地提醒我們,母親的愛,常常隱藏在日常生活的平凡細節中,是堅定不移的支持和無條件關愛的源泉。?Throughtheprotagonist'sjourneyfromamomentofangerandestrangementtoaprofoundrealizationofhermother'sloveandasubsequentreconciliation,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofempathyandthebeautyoffamilybondsthatcanwithstandthetestoftimeandconflict.?通過主人公從憤怒和疏遠的時刻到深刻認識到母親的愛并隨后和解的歷程,我們生動地看到了同理心的變革力量以及能夠經受時間和沖突考驗的家庭紐帶的美好。?Thestoryofthequarrelandreunionbetweenthemotheranddaughterisnotmerelyataleofacommonfamilyconflict;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanheart'scapacitytorecognizeitsmistakes,toappreciatethesacrificesoflovedones,andtorebuildrelationshipsbasedonunderstandingandforgiveness.?母女之間爭吵與重聚的故事不僅僅是一個常見的家庭沖突故事,它是對人類心靈認識自身錯誤、感激親人犧牲以及在理解和寬恕基礎上重建關系的能力的深刻探索。?Inaworldfilledwiththehustleandbustleofdailylife,whereweoftentaketheloveofourparentsforgranted,thisstorystandsasapowerfulstatement,illuminatingthepathtowardsamoregratefulandharmoniousfamilylife.Itremindsusthateveryactofkindnessfromourparentsisapreciousgiftthatdeservesourrecognitionandreciprocation.?在一個充滿日常生活喧囂的世界里,我們常常把父母的愛視為理所當然,這個故事是一個有力的聲明,照亮了通往更感恩、更和諧家庭生活的道路。它提醒我們,父母的每一個善良舉動都是一份珍貴的禮物,值得我們認可和回報。?Fromtheinitialstormofangertothefinalembraceofreconciliation,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepoweroflovetohealwounds,andtheunwaveringbeliefthatfamilyrelationships,nurturedwithloveandunderstanding,canweatheranystormandemergestrongerthanever.?從最初的憤怒風暴到最終和解的擁抱,這個故事體現了成長的本質、愛治愈傷口的力量,以及堅定的信念,即家庭關系,在愛與理解的滋養下,可以經受任何風暴的考驗并變得比以往更強大。?寫作示范?示范一??Meanwhilemanymemoriescamebackintomymind.Irememberedthecoldwinterdayswhenmymomwouldwaitformeattheschoolgate,herhandsredfromthechillbutalwaysreadytowrapmeinawarmscarf.Thereweretheweekendsshespentbakingmyfavoritecookies,fillingthehousewithasweetaroma.AndthecountlesstimesshecomfortedmewhenIwassad,listeningintentlywithoutjudgment.Herlovewaslikeagentlestream,alwaysflowing,alwaysthereforme.IfeltalumpforminmythroatasIrealizedhowungratefulIhadbeen.HowcouldIhaveletasimplequarrelovershadowallherlove?Theguiltgnawedatmyheart,makingmeeagertomakeamends.?Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.Herhairwasabitdisheveled,andherfacewasmarkedwithfatigue.Itookadeepbreathandwalkedtowardsher,mystepshesitant.“Mom,”Isaid,myvoicebarelyaboveawhisper.“I'msosorry.Iwaswrong.You'vealwaysbeensogoodtome.”Mymotherlookedup,hereyeswideninginsurprise.Foramoment,shejuststaredatme.Then,herfacesoftened,andsheopenedherarms.Irushedintoherembrace,sobbing.“It'sokay,mydear.I'mjusthappyyou'reback,”shemurmured.Inthathug,Ifeltallthepainandangermeltaway,replacedbythewarmthofourlove.?示范二?Meanwhilemanymemoriescamebackintomymind.IthoughtaboutthetimesIwasrunninglateforschool,andmymomwoulddrivemethere,neveroncecomplainingabouttheinconvenience.Irecalledherhelpingmepickouttheperfectdressforimportantevents,sharinginmyexcitement.TherewasalsothesummerIsprainedmyankle,andshepatientlynursedmebacktohealth,doingeverythingfromcookingspecialmealstohelpingmewithmyexercises.Herlovewasconstantandselfless.IfeltapangofregretasIrememberedmyharshwordsduringthequarrel.HowcouldIhavebeensothoughtless?IknewIhadtogohomeandmakethingsright.?Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.Hershoulderswereslumped,andsheseemedlostinthought.Islowlyapproachedher,myheartheavy.“Mom,”Isaid,myvoiceshaking.“I'mreallysorry.Ididn'tmeanwhatIsaid.You'vealwayslovedmesomuch.”Mymotherlookedup,amixtureofsurpriseandreliefinhereyes.Shestoodupandpulledmeclose.“Oh,mychild.I'mjustgladyou'resafe.Weallmakemistakes,”shesaidsoftly.Inthatembrace,Ifeltthestrengthofourbond,abondthatnoquarrelcouldbreak.Iknewthenthatourlovewasthemostpreciousthingintheworld.?【答案】Meanwhilemanymemoriescameback
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