2024年中考英語寫作?？嘉捏w講練提分秘籍專題17書信郵件類之建議信考情分析考情分析建議信是向收信人針對某事提出自己的建議或忠告，以便讓對方接受自己的想法，主張并解決有關問題。建議信可以寫給個人，針對遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法或觀點，也可以寫給某個組織或者機構，就改進其服務等提出建議或忠告。寫作方法指導寫作方法指導建議信要給出寫信的原因，建議的內容，提出建議的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要得當，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說服力。一般來說，建議信可分為三個部分：（1)開頭；開門見山，簡要陳述事由，簡單介紹自己并陳述自己的觀點，注意語氣。（2)主體；說明建議的內容，對所提出的建議進行分析、說明原因。這一部分注意要簡明扼要，目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。（3)結尾；對自己提出的建議簡單地做一小結并表達愿望。寫作模板寫作模板Dear_____,Iam______,from____________.(自我介紹)I’msorrytohearthat__________.（簡略翻譯文字資料）I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmysuggestionconcerningit.（寫信目的）Iwouldrecommendyouto___________.(提出建議)Inmyopinion,itwouldbebeneficialifyoucould___________________.（改進措施）Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionintoseriousconsideration.Iamdyingforreply.(期待回復)【范文】DearMary,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavebeenillfordaysandhopeyouhavegotbetternow.Youhavestudiedsohardthatyourhealthisfalling.I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmysuggestionconcerningit.Ifeelitwouldbebeneficialtoyourhealthifyoucouldtakemoreexerciseinfuture.Neverthinkthattimespentonexerciseiswasted.Notonlycanexerciseimproveyourphysicalhealthbutitwillrefreshyourmind.Afterononeortwohoursofexerciseyoucanstudybetter.Onlywhenyouhaveastrongbodycanyoukeeponstudyingwithoutfeelingtired.IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakeatleastonehour’sexerciseeverydayafterrecovery.Ihopeyouwouldtakemysuggestionintoseriousconsideration.Iwouldbehappytoseeyouhaveastrongerbody.Yourssincerely,John 常用表達常用表達一.篇首句1.I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto…我很高興收到你的來信。現在我寫信給你一些如何…的建議。2.I’msorrytoknowthat….I’d

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...很抱歉的知道…我想給你分享一下…的方法。3.Ihavelearntthat….Herearesomesuggestionsthathelpyou.我知道…這里是我給你的能幫到你的建議。運用了定語從句4.How'sitgoing?Youaskedmeabout…inyourlastletter.Herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.最近好嗎？在你上一封信中，你問我…這些是給你的建議。二.篇中句1.You’dbetter…你最好…2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…我認為，如果你…將會大有裨益。高級句型3.You’resupposedto…你應該…4.Mostimportantofall，youshould…最重要的是，你應該…三.篇尾句1.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.、我希望我的建議對你做決定有一定幫助。2.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.我相信你會認真考慮我的建議的。3.Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work.不管你做怎么決定，祝你學業/工作好運！4.Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!我希望這些方法對你有用，并且我相信一些都會很快好起來的。中中考真題精講（2023·遼寧鞍山·統考中考真題）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請你根據下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現真實的校名、人名等相關信息。（2）根據中文和英文提示，可以適當發揮。（3）內容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。近視原因長時間使用電子產品；讀書時間過長。建議控制使用電子產品時間；養成好習慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing（2023·江蘇無錫·統考中考真題）青少年在成長過程中會遇到各種問題，為此《21世紀英文報》開設了TeensTalk專欄，傾聽讀者的心聲，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回復。假設你是李華，最近也遇上了些煩心事，請給該專欄發一封英文郵件，講述你的煩惱并尋求建議。注意事項：（1）郵件內容須自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；（2）詞數在100左右，郵件開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；（3）郵件中不得使用真實的個人姓名或學校名稱。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua3．（2023·山東濱州·統考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過節食減肥，以更美的面貌進入新的學校學習。請你根據郵件內容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點齊全，并適當發揮；2.文中不得出現真實姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearAmy,

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LiHua4.（2022·山東威?！ぶ锌颊骖}）某英語雜志社JustAsk欄目收到一位青少年Claire的電子郵件，郵件中講述了自己的困惑，并向大家尋求幫助。認真閱讀這封電子郵件，假定你是Sarah或Kevin，請從不同角度給出合理化建議。From:Claire

To:JustAskSubject:AskingforadviceDearfriends,IfeelterribleandIreallyneedyouradvice.TheproblemisthatI’mnotinterestedinclothes.Idon’tknowwhat’sinfashionandIdon’tlikegoingshoppingforclothes.SomeofmyfriendslaughatmeandsaythatIhaven’tgotstyle.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Claire,13要求：(1)詞數100左右，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；(2)文中不得出現任何與考生相關的真實信息。DearClaire,Iunderstandyou.OnceIwasalsointhesimilarsituation.It’snoteasyforustogetthroughteenageyearssmoothly.Herearemyopinions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluck!Sarah/Kevin5．（2022·山東濱州·統考中考真題）假定你是李華，最近你的筆友劉明發來郵件，向你訴說他的困擾；他的父母不讓他用手機APP給英文電影配音，認為會影響學習和休息。請你根據郵件內容用英語給他回封郵件，內容包括：1.表示理解，并予以安慰；2.提出合理的建議；3.希望情況有所好轉。參考詞匯：dub（v.配音）DearLiHua,I’mintroublenow.YesterdayIarguedwithmyparentsbecausetheydidn’tallowmetodubforeignfilmsbyusingmobileapps.Theythoughtthatitwouldhaveabadinfluenceonmystudyandsleep.Ibroketheirheartsandmadethemangry.I’msorryforthatbutIreallythinkithelpfultolearnEnglishbydubbingtheforeignfilms.NowIdon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyouhelpme?Yours.LiuMing要求：1.要點齊全，并適當發揮；2.文中不得出現真實姓名與校名：3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當加2-3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearLiuMing.I’msorrytohearthatyouhadanargumentwithyourparentswhendubbingforeignfilmsbyusingmobileapps._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours.LiHua6．（2022·浙江紹興·統考中考真題）假設你是劉軍，在上周末的鄉村旅游中，你發現了一些游客的不文明行為。請根據下表信息給某英文報VOICE欄目的編輯寫一封郵件，反映這些問題并提出建議。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestions●threwrubbisheverywhere●pickedflowers●climbedtrees●putrubbishintobins●…注意：（1）郵件內容必須包括上表所有信息，可適當增加細節；（2）你的建議至少兩條；（3）詞數：80—100；（4）郵件開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilizedbehavior；編輯editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiuJun7．（2023·江蘇鎮江·統考中考真題）假如你是李華，你們學校整理出一塊空地，將用于拓寬學生活動和實踐的空間。校英語報登載了校方初擬的兩種方案，就這塊空地建設文化角還是菜園征求意見。請根據提示給校報寫一封信談談你的想法和建議。ACultureCornerAVegetableGarden●displayartworks●shareideasandfeelings●holdactivities(fashionshows,…)●developasenseofbeauty●…●workwithclassmates●learnfarmingskills●harvestvegetables(tomatoes,…)●formthehabitoflabour(勞動)●…要求：1.所寫內容必須包括一種方案的所有信息，可適當發揮；2.對你所選擇的方案說明理由，并對其提出建議；3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；4.文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,I’mhappytohearthatthereisanemptyareainourschoolforbuildingaCultureCorneroraVegetableGarden.Inmyopinion,it’sbetterto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（2023·江西·統考中考真題）通過閱讀理解A篇我們感受到戶外活動的有趣。本月底你校將舉辦一次戶外活動，為了更好地開展這次活動，校英語社團正在向學生征集意見。假設你是張華，請根據表格內容寫一篇短文（先介紹你喜歡的戶外活動，再說明理由，最后就活動安排提出合理的建議），向社團投稿。寫作要點參考句型1.Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?We’dbetter…Maybew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1．（2023·陜西渭南·統考模擬預測）假如你是李華，看到某英語報社將要組織勞動體驗和體育鍛煉夏令營活動的宣傳。請根據以下提示，用英語給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想參與的一種活動及理由，并對你選擇的活動提出建議。SummerCampLivingskillstrainingSportstraining

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playballgames,...要求:1.參考提示內容，可適當發揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數：不少于70詞。(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數)DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2023·四川瀘州·統考一模）你是英語校報編輯李華，校報收到初一新生Ben的來信，他提出了兩個面臨的問題。請你根據以下提示寫一封回信，說明Ben的問題，提出你的建議并且陳述理由。Ben’sproblems

Youradviceandreasons朋友少，感覺孤單1.

參加學校社團，可以結識更多朋友；2.

對別人友好，這樣別人也會同樣對待自己英語單詞難記1.

多讀英語故事，多看英語新聞，通過閱讀記單詞；2.

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應該經常復習所學過的單詞。注意：（1）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；（2）詞數100—110；（3）文中不得出現真實姓名、地名和校名。DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublesgettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Yourlettersaidthat___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluckwitheverything!

LiHua3．（2023·湖南永州·統考二模）假如你叫李華，你校英語廣播站的MissZhou向九年級學生發出征文，呼吁大家踴躍投稿談談“如何做一名新時代好少年”，請你從文明禮貌、自強自立、誠實守信、尊老愛親、助人為樂、保護環境，熱愛祖國等方面來談談你的建議和看法并投稿；并將答案填寫在答題卡上對應題號的橫線上。參考詞匯：civilized（文明的）；rude（粗魯的）；behavior（行為）；independent；cheat；tellalie（撒謊）；healthhabits（衛生習慣）；duty；disabledpeople…注意:1）語句通順，意思連貫，表達正確；2）文中不得出現自己的真實姓名，校名和地名；3）不低于60詞（短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。DearMissZhou,I’mLiHuafromGrade9.I’mwritingtotalkabouthowtobeagoodteenagerinthenewera（時代）withyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofmyideas?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua4．（2023·黑龍江哈爾濱·哈爾濱市蕭紅中學?？级＃┘偃缒闶抢钊A，五一假期即將來臨，你在上海做交換生的筆友Peter要來哈爾濱旅游。請根據以下提示，給他寫一封信，并告訴他在哈爾濱旅游期間如何做一名文明的（well-mannered）中學生。寫作要點：1.歡迎他來哈爾濱。2.介紹哈爾濱的情況。1）下周天氣：白天最高溫度超過22℃；2）交通方式：最好乘坐地鐵；3）必去名勝：太陽島……3.對他在哈爾濱旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學生提出具體建議。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2.可適當加入細節，使內容充實，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。DearPeter,

Howareyoudoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua5．（2023·黑龍江哈爾濱·統考二模）勞動教育（laboureducation）在社會發展中起著重要作用。為此，上周你們班召開了班會。假如你是李平，你的英國筆友Peter對此班會很感興趣。請你根據以下要點寫信給Peter，介紹一下班會內容，并說一說你對校內開展勞動教育活動的建議。寫作要點：1.班會的主題：勞動教育的重要性。2.班會上同學們討論了勞動教育的意義：（1）以勞健體；（2）以勞增智；（3）以勞樹德；等等。3.說一說你對校內開展勞動教育活動的建議。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2.可適當加入細節，使內容充實，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。DearPeter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing6．（2023·貴州貴陽·統考三模）俗話說，家和萬事興，家庭關系和睦對每個家庭成員都至關重要。假如你是李華，你的好朋友Mike給你寫了一封信，最近他和家人的關系比較緊張，不知道應該如何與家人相處。請你給他寫一封回信，并給他一些建議。要求如下：1.包含思維導圖所有要點；2.重點談談如何和家人相處；3.文中不得出現個人真實信息。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2023·廣東深圳·?？既＃┘偃缒闶浅跞嘲嗟陌嘀魅卫罾蠋?，你收到了學生小明的求助信。中考在即，小明情緒緊張，雖然努力學習，但成績仍不理想，他不知道該怎么辦。請你根據以下要點提示給小明寫一封回信，幫助他解決困惑。提示：1.制定良好學習計劃，及時復習；2.適度鍛煉身體；3.……（補充1-2條）要求：1.詞數80左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；2.要點齊全，可適當發揮；3.不得出現真實姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規范。DearXiaoming,

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