讀后續(xù)寫微技能無靈主語在寫作中的應(yīng)用Objective：學(xué)會在寫作中運用無靈主語。概念1.導(dǎo)入Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.1949witnessedtheestablishmentofChina.OurschoolhallwillseethelectureonTangpoetry.Thethickfogblanketedthefield.Couragedesertedher.＊句子采用“無靈主語”(inanimatesubject)，表示抽象概念、心理感覺、事物名稱或時間、地點等，但謂語卻常常使用“有靈動詞”(animateverb)。表示人或社會團體的動作和行為，這類句子往往帶有擬人化(personification)的修辭色彩。“無靈主語+有靈動詞”原因Ihavelearntfromlifethatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.________________thatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.避免重復(fù)Therehasbeenanincreaseinviolencefromillegalgunsinthepast2years._________________________anincreaseinviolencefromillegalguns.增添生動性Ifwerelytoomuchonmouseclicking,itwillmakeuslazierbothmentallyandphysically._________________________makes

uslazierbothmentallyandphysically.簡潔Wecarriedoutmoreexperimentsandfoundsomeexcitingresults.__________________________gaveussomeexcitingresults.目的II.無靈主語種類(Observe&Summarize)Group1:Panicseizedher.Despairchokedherwords.Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.Fearslowlycreepsuponher.Summary1：主語是__________________名詞(aburst/wave/sense/feelingof+)表示情感狀態(tài)的名詞+有靈動詞表示“某人感到...”或“一陣/一種....向某人襲來”常見表情緒的名詞：_______________________________________________________________常見的有靈謂語：___________________侵襲，突然控制__________________使哽咽__________________使大受感動、涌上心頭______________不知不覺地產(chǎn)生________________緊抓________________襲來、席卷________________遺棄________________撕碎______________吞淹沒__________________擊垮_______________剝奪、使喪失_______________失去缺乏Practice:1.一陣恐慌向她襲來。Awaveofpanic______her.2.我抱著禮物，興奮得什么話也說不出來。Iheldthepresent,andexcitement________mywords3.她的焦慮把她撕成了碎片。（她焦慮不安）Anxiety_________herintopieces.4.那些日子里，一種沮喪攫住了我。Adepression_______methosedays.A.chokedB.seizedC.sweptoverD.tore名著中的無靈主語:(1)____________________________,andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.JaneEyre絕望擊垮了我，我倒在門階上哭泣。(2)Maryfelt___________________________.TheSecretGarden瑪麗感到一陣憤怒。Group2：1.Huaibei_____________greatchangesinrecentyears.淮北見證了最近幾年的的巨大變化。2.Thefollowingyear____thedeathofhismother.第二年他的媽媽去世了。3.Thetown______abeautifullake.這個鎮(zhèn)引以為榮的是有個美麗的湖。Summary2：主語是表示______________名詞常見的謂語：_________(見證）,______充滿,see______________,_______有引以為榮的事物Practice:例句:1.上海發(fā)生了許多重大的歷史事件。Shanghaiwitnessedmanygreathistoricalevents.仿寫：

下一刻見證了他們做早餐的努力，最終他們做到了。______________________________theireffortstomakethebreakfastandtheyeventuallymadeit.例句2：(2021年全國I卷)早餐的香味彌漫在廚房的空氣中。Thesmellofbreakfastfilledtheairinthekitchen.仿寫：

每個人都欣喜若狂，院子里洋溢著喜悅。1)Everyonewas__________________,with__________________theyard.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))2)Everyonewas__________________,__________________theyard.(獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu))Group3：1.Thethickfog_________thefield.濃霧籠罩著整個大地。2.Anearthquake______likeathiefinthenight,withoutwarning.地震到來，猶如夜賊，不作預(yù)告。3.Therain__________touristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.雨使得游客無法欣賞到滿月。Summary4：主語是表示____________等名詞常見謂語：blanket____________,e,arrive,bring,prevent,threaten,hit,strike＊(B3U4)therewasfrostontheground,confirmingthatautumnhadarrivedinCanada.Group4：1.Herface

________________whenIgaveherthepresent.我給她禮物時，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩。2.Laughter_________aroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。3.Whenhesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tears_________inhiseyes.他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶Summary4:主語是表示___________________的名詞常見的謂語：___________/__________煥發(fā)光彩,________繼續(xù)存留、縈繞,_________涌出,_________滾下_______掠過、閃現(xiàn)Practice:1.怒火涌上他的心頭。_______(主語)___________(有靈動詞）withinhim.2.當(dāng)她看到草莓的時候,幸福的淚水從她臉頰流下。Whenshesawthestrawberries,___________________________________________hercheeks.Group5：1.Aterriblethoughtsuddenly_________________me.我突然想到一個可怕的想法。2.Thesightofthescene_____________mewithhorror.想到這個情景我心中充滿了恐懼。Summary5:主語是表示______________的名詞常見的表示行為或動作的名詞有如sight,thought,glance,look,idea,feeling等。常見謂語：________擊打,_______喚起,remind________,delight________,frighten________,____________壓倒,____________使震驚.....Practice:1.Atdusk,hewascryinginthestreet.Dusk__________himcryinginthestreet.2.Iforgothisnameatthemoment.Hisname_______________(被忘掉，被忽視）meatthemoment.3.Hesuddenlylosthisconfidencewhenhehadtospeak.Hisconfidencesuddenly____________（背離，使失望）himwhenhehadtospeak.Summary:①無靈主語可以是動作、_________、_________、_________、_________、等②表達公式：___________+______________+其他III.鞏固與練習(xí)Practice:請把下列有靈主語句改為無靈主語句。Hefeltnervous______________________________________________________.2.Hefelthorrible.______________________________________________________.3.IwassoastonishedthatIcouldn’tsayasingleword._____________________________________.4.Hefeltveryanxious.______________________________________________________________5.Ifeltsad.________________________________________6.Iwasdisappointed.一陣絕望占據(jù)了我的內(nèi)心._________________________________.7.突然之間，雙胞胎的臉亮了起來，他們的頭堅定地點著。_______________,thetwins’face_____________withtheirhead___________firmly.8.他站在門邊，臉上露出喜色。He_________bythedoorandhis___________________________withdelight/joy.9.一見到他的老朋友，一種幸福的感覺席卷了他。________________hisoldfriend,___________________________________him.10.比賽前，她突然失去了信心。（sthfailsb)Beforethecontest,her_____________suddenly___________her.11.簡臉色蒼白，一陣恐懼襲上心頭。(seize/takeholdof/sweepover)Jane’sfaceturnedpaleand______________________________________her.12.她絕望得心都要被撕碎了。Her________was_______intopieceswithdespair.=____________________herintopieces實戰(zhàn)練習(xí)八省聯(lián)考2續(xù)寫部分電梯驚魂P(guān)ara1:

Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

1.（兩個無靈主語簡單句+以時間為平行主語的再次夸張的描述：時間彷佛凝固了一樣。）Timeseemedto________andeveryminutefeltlike_____________.2.（with結(jié)構(gòu)+二連動：+回扣尾段Mrs.Lim此刻的表現(xiàn)狀況）However,withmyhelp,MrsLimmanagedtobreathesmoothlyandgraduallycontrolledheremotions.

3.(with結(jié)構(gòu)：+再次撥打911確認）Indespair,Idialed911onceagainwithmy___________(顫抖的)fingers.wordbank4.（賓語從句：+急救人員火速向我們趕來）Andwewerereassured_____emergencyresponderswere__________towardsus.（Doing非謂語：+得知救援隊在路上，大感寬慰）_________(know)arescueteamwasontheway,Ifeltaheavy______(擔(dān)子)takenoffourmind.6.(Doing非謂語：+我仍然安慰Mrs.Lim,堅信我們回脫困）Holdingherhandstightly,Iforted/consoledMrsLimconstantly,believingthatwewoulddefinitelygetout.(簡單句：+耐心等待專業(yè)救援）Wecoulddonothingbutwaitforprofessionalaidpatientlyintheliftcar.Para2:Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.1.（獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)：+激動得心都要跳出來了）Hope________(ignite),myheartalmost__________(leap)outofmychest.2.(兩個簡單句：+感嘆）Oursaviorseventuallyarrived!Mrs.Limbreathed/heavedasighof___________(relieve).3.（定語從句：我呼救，引起關(guān)注）Iscreamedforhelpatthetopofmylungs,________attractedtheirattentionimmediately.4.(無靈主語句：救援人員的安撫）Theircalmand________(assure)voicecameintoourears“Trustusandyouwillgetout.”5.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheyassessedthesituationandlaunchedtheirrescueworkinanorganizedway.6.（兩個簡單句：+電梯門打開，我們脫困）Theliftdoor______________(open)andwewerefreeagain!7.（簡單句：+回扣原文第一段今天可是多事的一天）Todaywasabsolutelyaneventfulday，__________athrillingstoryplayedoutinadarkliftcar!Wordbank:1.Witheverytickoftimepassingby2.horrormingledwi