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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。LastSundayafternoon,Iwasreadingabookandhadjustcometothemostinterestingpartwhenmylittlebrother,Tex,
rushedintomyroom.“Look
atthesecoolpaperairplanesImade!”
Tex
exclaimed,throwingonedirectlyatmyhead.Annoyed,IaskedhimforsomepeaceandquietsoIcouldcontinuereading.“Ooh!
Iwanttoread!”
saidTex.HeclimbedontomybedandeagerlyaskedifIcouldreadthebookoutloudtohim.IrepliedthatIdidn’t
wanttoreadoutloud.Sensingmybadmood,Tex
decidedtocheermeup.Hedashedoutofmyroomandreturnedaminutelater,dumpingabasketfullofstuffed
animalsalloverme.“A
teddybearpicnic!”“No,
Tex,
nottoday.”
Igotup,draggedmyselftothelivingroomandfloppedintothechair,feelinggrumpy(暴躁的).Tex
stoodinthedoorway,adisappointedlookonhisface.AlthoughIknewTex
wasjusttryingtohelp,Icouldn’t
shakeoff
mybadfeelings.Justthen,myfriendOlliearrived,excitedlyholdingabrand-newbasketball.Hesuggestedthatweheadtotheparkandtryitout.Feelingtooabsorbedinmybadmood,IsighedandtoldOlliethatIwastoobusybeingintheworld’s
worstmoodtodoanythingatall.Curiousaboutmyannoyance,Ollieaskedwhathadhappened.ItoldhimTex
hadinterruptedmyreadingandforsomeunknownreason,ithadputmeinareallygrumpymood.Olliethenmentionedthatwhenhewasinabadmood,helikedtomovehisbody.“I’d
lovetomove,”
Isaid.“To
atropicalisland!”“Not
thatkindofmove!”
Olliesaid“I
movemybody.You
know,skateboard,basketball,goforawalk,anddojumpingjacks.Exercisemakesmefeelbetter.Comeon!”Isighed,thinkingthatexercisewasthelastthingIwantedtodoinmygrumpystate.ButOllie’s
wordsechoedinmymind,andIrealizedthatmaybehewasright.注意:1.續寫詞數應為
150左右;2.請在答題卡的相應位置按如下格式作答。Unwillingly,Iagreedtogototheparkwithhim.____________________________________________________________________________________________Atsunset,Iwasonmywaybackhome,tiredbutnolongerinagrumpymood.____________________________________________________________________________________________與弟弟的互動的故事續寫續寫要點(兩段)第一段運動中情緒逐漸釋放(如籃球/滑板)弟弟Tex意外加入,打破隔閡三人互動中的笑聲與和解第二段弟弟主動道歉,主角反思自身態度承諾彌補(如共同閱讀)結尾象征物(紙飛機)呼應開頭,點明成長情感線(150字)抗拒:主角因煩躁不愿運動,對Ollie的提議敷衍應對。松動:運動節奏帶動情緒好轉,開始享受游戲。溫暖:Tex加入后,三人互動中的童真化解主角最后的怨氣。愧疚:Tex道歉時,主角意識到自己對弟弟的不耐煩。釋然:通過反思,明白親情比個人情緒更重要。希望:結尾紙飛機象征新開始,傳遞包容與成長的主題。故事線(6條)Ollie用幽默和運動幫助主角轉移注意力。Tex從遠處觀察,鼓起勇氣加入游戲。三人合作完成“不可能的投籃”,增強情感聯結?;丶衣飞蟃ex主動承認錯誤,主角真誠道歉。當晚主角主動為Tex讀故事,彌補之前的拒絕。次日發現Tex用新折的紙飛機傳遞感謝,深化和解。主旨升華句(5句英文)"Movementhealsnotjustthebody,buttheheartwhensharedwiththosewelove.""Achild’sinnocencehasawayofdissolvinggrudges,remindingustoprioritizeconnectionoverirritation.""Inthechaosofplay,werediscoverthesimplicityofjoy—andthebeautyoflettinggo.""Sometimes,thebestinterruptionsaretheonesthatredirectustowardwhattrulymatters.""Paperairplanesmayflyaway,butthebondstheysymbolizelastfarbeyondasingleafternoon."寫作示范兩篇示范1Para1Unwillingly,Iagreedtogototheparkwithhim.Ollie’srelentlessenergywascontagious:weracedtothecourt,shothoops,andevenattemptedridiculoustrickshots.Mid-laugh,IspottedTexhidingbehindatree,clutchinghisteddy.“Wannaplay?”Icalled.Hiseyeslitup.Soon,hewasgigglingaswelethim‘win’bycatchingtheball.Thesunwarmedmyback,andmyirritationmeltedlikeicecreamonasummerday.Para2Atsunset,Iwasonmywaybackhome,tiredbutnolongerinagrumpymood.Texswungmyhand,chatteringabouthis“basketballskills.”“SorryImessedupyourreading,”hesaidsuddenly.Isqueezedhisshoulder.“Let’sreadtogethertomorrow,okay?”Henodded,beaming.Later,Ifoundhimarrangingteddybearsinacircle,whispering,“Thisisourteam.”Ismiled,realizingthatsometimes,thebeststoriesaren’tinbooks—they’reinthemomentswecreate.示范2Para1Unwillingly,Iagreedtogototheparkwithhim.Olliesuggestedskateboarding,andsoonIwasflyingdownthepath,windstingingmycheeks.TherushofspeeddrownedoutmythoughtsuntilIheardatiny“Wow!”Texstoodbythefence,eyeswide.Iskiddedtoastop.“Wannatry?”Iasked.Forthenexthour,wewobbledtogether,Olliecoachingusboth.Myangerfaded,replacedbyprideasTexfinallybalancedontheboard.Para2Atsunset,Iwasonmywaybackhome,tiredbutnolongerinagrumpymood.Texclutchedtheskateboard,chatteringnonstop.“I’mgonnabesogood,”hedeclared.“I’llteachyounexttime,”Iteased.Later,asItuckedhimin,hewhispered,“You’remyfavoriteteacher.”Mythroattightened.Outside,hispaperairplanesflutteredinthewind—remindersthatsometimes,thebestinterruptionsleadtothe最美memories.參考答案Unwillingly,Iagreedtogototheparkwithhim.
Whenwearrivedatthepark,Olliehandedmethebasketballandchallengedmetoagameofone-on-one.Atfirst,Iwasnotinthemood,butOlliekeptonencouragingme.Aswedribbledandshottheball,Ifoundmyselfslowlygettingintothegame.Focusingonit,Ibegantofeelaglimmerofjoyandexcitement.Afterawhile,wewerebothlaughingandenjoyingourselves.Thefreshair,thelaughter,andthejoyofplayingbasketballmadeusforgetaboutthetime.Atsunset,Iwasonmywaybackhome,tiredbutnolongeringrumpymood.
WhenIenteredthehouse,Texlookedupatmewitheagereyes,yethesitatedtoapproach.“Hey,buddy.”Ismiledathim,ruffling
hishair.“Howaboutreadingthestorytoyoube
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