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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Intoday'sworld,wherenegativityoftentakescenterstage,it'seasytooverlookthesimpleactsofkindnessthatcanbringjoytosomeone'slife.Irecentlyhadapersonalexperiencethatremindedmeofthisduringaparticularlychallengingweek.Myweekhadbeenfilledwithproblems,fromwork-relatedstresstounexpectedbillsandbrokenitems.BythetimeIneededtogotothestoreforafewessentials,Iwasalreadyfeelingoverwhelmedandatmybreakingpoint.Despitemydesiretojustgohomeandrelax,Imadethetripacrosstowntothestore.WhenIarrived,Ifoundtheparkinglotpacked,whichonlyaddedtomyfrustration.Tomakemattersworse,thepersonnexttomyintendedparkingspotseemedtothinktheirsmallcarwasentitled(有資格)totakeuptwospaces.Afterfinallyfindingaspot,IrealizedthatIhadleftmypurse,includingmydebitcard(借記卡)andcheckbook(支票簿),athome.Fortunately,Ihadasmallamountofcashandmycoupon(優(yōu)惠券)book,soIdecidedtogoinsideandmakethebestofit.Thestorewasbustlingwithpeople,butImanagedtofindtheitemsIneededandgotinlinetocheckout.However,thelineseemedtomoveatasnail'space,andmypatiencewaswearingthin.AsIwaited,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelmystresslevelsrising.That'swhenInoticedanoldladystandingbehindmeinline.Sheseemedtosensemyanxietyandcastakindsmileatme.Iawkwardlyreturnedthesmileandcontinuedtowait.Afteraseeminglyendlesswait,itwasfinallymyturntocheckout.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。However,whathappenednextwasoutofmyexpectation.AsIwasabouttoreturnformorecash,Isuddenlyfeltataponmyshoulder.我與老太太的故事續(xù)寫要點第一段:詳細(xì)描述“我”錢不夠時的窘迫,包括表情、動作等細(xì)節(jié),如“我”臉漲得通紅,手忙腳亂地翻找口袋。接著重點刻畫老太太幫忙付款的場景,描述她的神態(tài)、語氣,如她微笑著,眼神中滿是關(guān)切,溫柔地說“別著急,孩子”。最后寫“我”當(dāng)時的震驚與感激之情,可描述“我”呆立當(dāng)場,眼眶微微泛紅,嘴唇顫動卻不知如何表達(dá)感謝。第二段:先寫老太太輕拍“我”肩膀后的動作與話語,比如她拉著“我”到一旁,認(rèn)真地看著“我”的眼睛,語重心長地鼓勵“我”。然后描述“我”聽了她的話后的心理變化,從最初的感動,到內(nèi)心陰霾逐漸消散,再到下定決心傳遞這份善意。最后可簡單描述“我”之后在生活中是如何踐行的,如在公交車上給老人讓座,幫助同學(xué)解決難題等。情感線(150字)起初,“我”因諸事不順心情糟糕,在商店遭遇各種狀況后焦慮和沮喪達(dá)到頂點。當(dāng)發(fā)現(xiàn)錢不夠時,“我”滿心窘迫與無助。老太太幫忙付款的瞬間,“我”震驚之余,感激之情如潮水般涌上心頭。之后老太太的鼓勵讓“我”內(nèi)心的陰霾漸漸散去,取而代之的是溫暖與力量,“我”不僅被這份善意打動,更決心將這份溫暖傳遞下去,情感從極度低落逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槌錆M希望與力量。故事線商店偶遇:在商店排隊結(jié)賬時,“我”與老太太初次相遇,她察覺到“我”的焦慮,投來友善的微笑。付款危機:輪到“我”結(jié)賬時,發(fā)現(xiàn)錢不夠,陷入尷尬困境,內(nèi)心充滿窘迫。善意相助:老太太主動伸出援手,幫“我”補足差價,讓“我”順利完成購物,“我”對她充滿感激。暖心鼓勵:老太太輕拍“我”肩膀,給予安慰與鼓勵,她的話語觸動了“我”的內(nèi)心。決心傳遞:深受感動的“我”,決定將這份善意傳遞下去,在生活中積極尋找?guī)椭说臋C會。善意延續(xù):“我”開始主動幫助身邊的人,如為鄰居提重物、在社區(qū)做義工等,讓善意在更多人之間傳遞。主旨升華句Eventhesmallestactofkindnesscanbrightensomeone'sdarkestday,anditisavirtuethatshouldbepassedonfromonepersontoanother.(即使是最微小的善舉,也能照亮他人最黑暗的日子,這是一種應(yīng)該在人與人之間傳遞的美德。)Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatinaworldfullofchallenges,thekindnessofstrangerscanbeapowerfulsourceofhopeandstrength.(這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白,在一個充滿挑戰(zhàn)的世界里,陌生人的善意可以成為強大的希望和力量源泉。)Fromthatmomenton,Irealizedthatweallhavetheabilitytomakeadifferenceinsomeone'slifebysimplyshowingkindnessandcompassion.(從那一刻起,我意識到我們都有能力通過展現(xiàn)善意和同情,在他人的生活中產(chǎn)生積極影響。)ThekindnessIreceivedthatdaynotonlyrelievedmyimmediatestressbutalsoinspiredmetobemoreawareoftheneedsofothersandofferahelpinghandwheneverpossible.(那天我所得到的善意,不僅緩解了我當(dāng)下的壓力,還激勵我更加關(guān)注他人的需求,并在可能的時候伸出援手。)Itisthroughactsofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,thatwecancreateamorecaringandharmoniousworld,onethatisfilledwithloveandunderstanding.(正是通過這些無論多么微小的善舉,我們能夠創(chuàng)造一個更有愛心、更和諧的世界,一個充滿愛與理解的世界。)寫作示范一Paragraph1However,whathappenednextwasoutofmyexpectation.Whenthecashierannouncedthetotal,Irummagedthroughmywalletinapanic,onlytofindIwasshortofmoney.Myfaceflushedwithembarrassment,andIstammered,tryingtocomeupwithasolution.Justthen,theoldladybehindmesteppedforward.Shehandedthecashiertheexactamount,smilinggentlyatme.“Thereyougo,dear.Everyonehasthosedays,”shesaid.Iwascompletelytakenaback,myeyeswidewithgratitude.WordsfailedmeasItriedtoexpressmythanks.Icouldonlywatchinastonishmentasshesavedmefromanawkwardsituation.Paragraph2AsIwasabouttoreturnformorecash,Isuddenlyfeltataponmyshoulder.Itwastheoldladyagain.Shelookedatmekindlyandsaid,“Don'tletthedifficultiesgetyoudown.Alittlekindnesscangoalongway.”Herwordswerelikeawarmbreeze,dispellingthedarkcloudsinmyheart.Inodded,touchedbyherthoughtfulness.Fromthatdayon,Imadeapromisetomyselftoalwaysbeonthelookoutforopportunitiestohelpothers,justasshehadhelpedme.WheneverIseesomeoneinneed,Irememberherkindnessandstepinwithouthesitation,believingthatsmallactsofkindnesscancreateabigdifference.寫作示范二Paragraph1However,whathappenednextwasoutofmyexpectation.WhenIwastoldtheprice,Ireachedintomypocket,onlytofindmyheartsink.Iwasafewdollarsshort.Istoodthere,frozen,mymindracing.Theoldlady,noticingmydistress,immediatelytookoutherwallet.“Here,thisisforyou,”shesaid,placingthemoneyonthecounter.Iwasstunned,lookingatherindisbelief.“Thankyousomuch.I'mreallysorry,”Imanagedtosay,myvoicefilledwithgratitude.Shejustsmiledandreplied,“It'snobigdeal.Weallneedahandsometimes.”Hersimpleactofkindnessmademyday.Paragraph2AsIwasabouttoreturnformorecash,Isuddenlyfeltataponmyshoulder.Itwastheoldlady.Shetookmyhandandsaid,“Remember,lifeisfullofupsanddowns,butkindnesscanalwaysturnthingsaround.”Herwordsresonateddeeplywithinme.Ithankedheragain,andasIwalkedoutofthestore,Ifeltanewsenseofhope.Fromthenon,ImadeitapointtobekindtoeveryoneImet.Whetherit'sgivingacompliment,holdingthedoorforsomeone,orofferingalisteningear,Ibelievethatthesesmallactscanbringwarmthandlighttoothers,justliketheoldladydidforme.參考答案However,whathappenednextwasoutofmyexpectation.
Asthecashierscannedmyitems,IdiscoveredthatthetotalcostexceededtheamountofcashIhadonhand.EmbarrassmentandconfusionfilledmeasIattemptedtoexplainmysituationtothecashier,whoseemedincreasinglyfrustrated.Meanwhile,thepatienceofthepeoplewaitingbehindmeinlinebegantowearthin.JustwhenIthoughtthingscouldn'tgetanyworse,asenseofhopelessnessbegantoseti
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