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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IworkedatalocalstationoftheBerlinfiredepartment.Wegotanalert(警報(bào))around8:25pmthatFridayandrushedtothefireengine,wheretheprintoutfromthedispatcher(調(diào)度員)saidtherewasanine-year-oldboylockedinasafe(保險(xiǎn)箱).Iaskedmyself:ifitwereasafe,woulditbeairtight?Iwasawarethatitmightalreadybetoolatebythetimewearrived.Ihadtoplanforabadoutcome.Ontheotherhand,ifwewereintime,howlongwouldittakeustoopenthesafe?Iknewitwouldbeanincrediblydifficulttask.It’swhatsafesaredesignedfor—nottobeopened.Ittooklessthanfiveminutestoreachtheproperty.WhenIsawawomancryingonthestreet,Iknewthesituationwasserious.Shewastheboy’smotherandsheledusintothebasement.Shetoldustheboywasaliveandwestartedtalkingtohim;hewasverycalm.Weaskedhowithadhappened:duringagameofhideandseekwithhisfive-year-oldbrother,hehadthoughtthesafewouldbeagoodplacetohide.Theboy’sparentshadgotthehousefromhismother’sfather.Theunlockedsafehadbeentherewhentheymovedinandwasinanareatheydidn’tusemuch.Theboy’slittlebrotherhadshutthesafe,then,whenhecouldn’topenitagain.Theonlypersonwhoknewthecombinationwastheboy’slategrandfather.Fromtheoutset,thebiggestprioritywasgettingoxygentotheboy.Wegotoxygenfromthehospital.Theboysaidthathecouldfeelathinstreamofair.Iaskedhisparentsifanyonehadopenedthesafebeforeandtheysaidno.Sowehadtoguessasix-digitcode(密碼).Westartedtypingthemin—butwehadtowait10minutesbetweeneachattemptbeforewecouldtryagain.Soquicklywetriedthemall.Noluck.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卷的相應(yīng)位置作答。Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.解救被困保險(xiǎn)箱男孩的故事續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段:在嘗試密碼失敗后,消防員們決定強(qiáng)行打開(kāi)保險(xiǎn)箱。詳細(xì)描述他們準(zhǔn)備強(qiáng)行開(kāi)啟的過(guò)程,如檢查并調(diào)試鉆孔工具,確保工具能正常運(yùn)作;與男孩再次溝通,安撫他即將聽(tīng)到巨大噪音,讓他做好心理準(zhǔn)備。同時(shí),描繪周圍環(huán)境,母親焦急踱步,雙手緊握,眼神中滿是擔(dān)憂;弟弟在一旁自責(zé)哭泣,不斷喃喃自語(yǔ)。消防員們神情專注而堅(jiān)定,汗水從額頭滑落,但目光始終緊盯著保險(xiǎn)箱,為強(qiáng)行打開(kāi)保險(xiǎn)箱做最后準(zhǔn)備。第二段:當(dāng)同事輸入正確密碼打開(kāi)保險(xiǎn)箱時(shí),著重刻畫(huà)眾人的反應(yīng)。男孩先是驚訝地瞪大雙眼,隨后露出驚喜的笑容,如釋重負(fù)地松了一口氣。母親瞬間沖過(guò)去,緊緊抱住男孩,泣不成聲,嘴里不停地說(shuō)著“感謝上帝”。弟弟也跑過(guò)來(lái),拉著哥哥的手,滿臉愧疚地道歉。消防員們則欣慰地笑了,互相擊掌慶祝,之前的緊張與疲憊一掃而空。之后,大家圍在男孩身邊,關(guān)心他的身體狀況,男孩雖有些疲憊,但狀態(tài)良好,對(duì)消防員們連連道謝,整個(gè)氛圍從緊張轉(zhuǎn)為溫馨與喜悅。情感線(150字)起初,消防員們得知男孩被困保險(xiǎn)箱,內(nèi)心充滿擔(dān)憂與緊張,深知救援難度極大。嘗試密碼失敗,準(zhǔn)備強(qiáng)行開(kāi)啟時(shí),他們的焦慮感達(dá)到頂峰,同時(shí)又堅(jiān)定決心一定要救出男孩。而男孩母親從最初的驚慌失措,到看著消防員行動(dòng)時(shí)的滿心期待與忐忑不安。當(dāng)保險(xiǎn)箱被打開(kāi),男孩安然無(wú)恙,眾人的情感瞬間轉(zhuǎn)為喜悅與欣慰。消防員們?yōu)榫仍晒Ω械阶院溃赣H和弟弟的愧疚與擔(dān)憂化作喜悅和對(duì)消防員的感激,情感從壓抑緊張逐漸過(guò)渡到輕松愉悅,充滿溫情。故事線(6條)救援準(zhǔn)備:消防員到達(dá)現(xiàn)場(chǎng),了解情況后,迅速準(zhǔn)備救援,包括獲取氧氣、嘗試密碼開(kāi)啟保險(xiǎn)箱。嘗試密碼失敗:多次嘗試密碼均未成功,大家陷入焦急,氣氛愈發(fā)緊張。決定強(qiáng)行開(kāi)啟:因密碼嘗試無(wú)果,消防員決定采取強(qiáng)行打開(kāi)保險(xiǎn)箱的方案,開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備鉆孔工具。輸入正確密碼:就在準(zhǔn)備鉆孔時(shí),同事根據(jù)母親提供的重要日期,嘗試輸入密碼,成功打開(kāi)保險(xiǎn)箱。解救男孩:保險(xiǎn)箱打開(kāi),男孩被成功救出,母親和弟弟激動(dòng)不已,與男孩相擁。后續(xù)關(guān)懷:眾人關(guān)心男孩身體狀況,男孩對(duì)消防員表達(dá)誠(chéng)摯感謝,消防員們帶著成就感離開(kāi),社區(qū)也因這次救援更加團(tuán)結(jié)。主旨升華句Thisrescuenotonlyshowcasestheunwaveringdeterminationofthefirefightersbutalsohighlightsthepowerofhopeandthevalueofeverylifeinthefaceofdanger.(這次救援不僅展現(xiàn)了消防員堅(jiān)定不移的決心,也凸顯了在危險(xiǎn)面前希望的力量以及每一個(gè)生命的價(jià)值。)Intimesofcrisis,thecombinedeffortsofthecommunityandtheselflessdedicationoftherescuerscanovercomeseeminglyinsurmountableobstacles,justlikeinthiscaseofsavingtheboy.(在危機(jī)時(shí)刻,社區(qū)的共同努力和救援人員的無(wú)私奉獻(xiàn)能夠克服看似不可逾越的障礙,就如同這次解救男孩的事件一樣。)Thesuccessfulrescueoftheboyfromthesafeservesasareminderthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,aglimmerofhopecanleadtoamiraculousoutcome.(從保險(xiǎn)箱中成功解救男孩這件事提醒我們,即使在最絕望的情況下,一絲希望也能帶來(lái)奇跡般的結(jié)果。)Thisincidentdemonstratesthatwheneveryonecomestogether,whetherit'stherescuers'expertiseorthefamily'ssupport,theycanturnapotentiallytragicsituationintoaheartwarmingstoryofsurvivalandgratitude.(這一事件表明,當(dāng)所有人齊心協(xié)力,無(wú)論是救援人員的專業(yè)技能還是家人的支持,都能將一場(chǎng)潛在的悲劇轉(zhuǎn)化為一個(gè)關(guān)于生存與感恩的溫馨故事。)Therescueoftheboyreflectsthespiritofhumanityandtheimportanceofnevergivingup,asthefirefightersandthefamilypersevereduntiltheboywassafelyfreed.(對(duì)男孩的救援體現(xiàn)了人性的光輝以及永不放棄的重要性,因?yàn)橄绬T和男孩的家人堅(jiān)持不懈,直到男孩被安全救出。)寫(xiě)作示范一Paragraph1Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Thechiefcarefullyinspectedthedrill,makingsureitwasinperfectworkingorder.Iwalkedovertothesafe,croucheddown,andgentlytoldtheboy,“Son,we'regoingtouseadrillnow.It'sgoingtobeverynoisy,butwe'llhaveyououtsoon.Coveryourearstight.”Theboy'smotherstoodnearby,herhandswringingnervously.Thelittlebrotherwascryingsoftlyinthecorner,filledwithguilt.Weputonoursafetygogglesandstartedthedrill.Theharshsoundechoedthroughthebasement,makingeveryone'sheartrace.Butweweredetermined,oureyesfixedonthesafe,readytobreakthroughthebarrierthatseparatedtheboyfromsafety.Paragraph2Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.Thesafeletoutaloudclick,andthedoorslowlyswungopen.Theboy,hiseyeswidewithsurprise,emergedfromthesafe.Hismotherrushedforwardandhuggedhimtightly,sobbingwithrelief.“Thankyou,thankyousomuch,”shecried,lookingatuswithgratitude.Thelittlebrotherranover,grabbinghisbrother'shand.Weallsmiled,feelingasenseofaccomplishmentwashoverus.Wecheckedtheboy'scondition,andalthoughhewasabitshaken,hewasfine.Asweleftthehouse,theboyturnedtousandsaid,“You'remyheroes.”Hiswordsmadeourday,andweknewthatalloureffortswerewellworthit.寫(xiě)作示范二Paragraph1Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,startingwithadrill.Oneofthefirefighterscarefullyadjustedthedrill'ssettings,whileanotherdouble-checkedtheoxygensupplytoensuretheboyhadenoughair.Ikneltdownnexttothesafeandsaid,“Hey,kiddo.We'regoingtostartthisdrill.It'sgoingtobeabitscary,butwe'rerightherewithyou.”Themotherpacedbackandforth,herfacepalewithworry.Wecouldseethefearinhereyes.Theroomwasfilledwithtensionaswepositionedthedrillagainstthesafe.Thenoiseofthedrillpiercedtheair,anddustfilledthespace.Despitethedifficulty,wewereresoluteinourmissiontosavetheboy.Paragraph2Then,justaswestartedtomakethefirstcut,myworkmatetypedinthecorrectcode.Thesafe'slockdisengagedwithasharpsound.Thedooropened,andtheboysteppedout,blinkinginthebrightlight.Hismotherletoutacryofjoyandrushedtoembracehim.Theyoungerbrother,whohadbeenblaminghimself,joinedthehug,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Weallletoutasighofrelief.Wepattedeachotherontheback,happythatourlong-awaitedrescuehadfinallybeensuccessful.Theboylookedatusandsaid,“Iknewyou'dgetmeout.”Hiswordswarmedourhearts,andweleftthescenewithasenseofpride,knowingthatwehadmadeadifferenceinthisfamily'slife.參考答案Wewerefullypreparedatthispointtoopenthesafebyforce,
startingwithadrill.Theoverwhelmingtensionintheairofthebasementweighedheavilyonourhearts.Additionally,theboy’sweakbreathfromthesafebroughtour
hearts
intoourmouths,whichurgedustoactquickly.“Staybackandyou’llbealright.”
Isoothedthehelplessboyinacalmingvoice.
Sweatsstreamingdownmycheeks,Iexaminedthesafecarefully,pointedthedrilltoitsfrontdoorandturnedonthedrill.Asthedrillwasroaring,
Icouldevensensetheparents’
anxiouseyesfallonthedrill.Iknew,fromthebottomofmyheart,wewereallracingagainsttime.Meanwhile,myworkmate,
focusedanddetermined,wasmakingeveryattemptt
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