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為了節目效果，挑戰馬上特技表演-不服輸的我原文分析讀后續寫原文審讀多篇范文呈現解題思路分析讀后續寫可積累文本1.原文賞析第二節讀后續寫（滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIpicturemyselfstandingonthebackofarunninghorse.I’mnotacowgirlanddon’tevenridehorsesforpleasure.ButIwasdoingatelevisionfitnessshow,andsomeoneinthegrouphadthebrightideathatweshouldgototherodeo(牛仔競技表演)groundsandaskthetrickrideriftheycouldteachmeastunt(特技表演)todooncamera.Wecouldusethisshortvideoasthenewopeningtotheshow.Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catchingandprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe.ThatwashowIendedupattherodeogroundswithacameragroup,watchingtheremarkableperformancesofthreetalentedyoungcowgirls.Oncetheirshowwasover,weapproachedthem,detailingourideasforthetelevisionshow.ThecowgirlsaskedmewhichparticularstuntIwasinterestedinlearning.Iespeciallylikedonestunt—oneofthegirlsledahorsetocontinuouslyandslowlyrunaroundthegroundswhileoneoftheothergirlsranacrossthegroundstowardasmalltrampoline(蹦床).Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse’sback.Asshelandedonitsback,shestoodupandstretchedherarmsoutwardasthehorsecontinuedslowlyrunning.Itlookedimpressive.Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressingthetimingsinceIwouldneedtobeintheairatthecorrecttimewhenthehorseranpast.Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime.Itwasclearlydifficult.Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming.ButIknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.2、

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紅色定從/定語；藍色賓從；黃色狀從，從句斜體；下劃線+標黃單詞+斜體

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注釋(定語從句)

NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIpicturemyselfstandingonthebackofarunninghorse.

I’mnotacowgirlanddon’tevenridehorsesforpleasure.ButIwasdoingatelevisionfitnessshow,andsomeoneinthegrouphadthebrightideathatweshouldgototherodeo(牛仔競技表演)groundsandaskthetrickrider(同位從)

iftheycouldteachmeastunt(特技表演)todooncamera(狀從).Wecoulduse

thisshortvideoas

thenewopeningtotheshow.Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catching

andprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe(賓從+賓從).ThatwashowIendedupattherodeogroundswithacameragroup(表從),watching

theremarkableperformancesofthreetalentedyoungcowgirls(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).Oncetheirshowwasover(狀從),weapproachedthem,detailing

ourideasforthetelevisionshow(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).ThecowgirlsaskedmewhichparticularstuntIwasinterestedinlearning(定從).Iespeciallylikedonestunt—oneofthegirlsledahorsetocontinuouslyandslowlyrunaroundthegroundswhileoneoftheothergirlsranacrossthegroundstowardasmalltrampoline(蹦床)(狀從).Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse’sback(狀從).

Asshelandedonitsback(狀從),shestoodup

andstretched

herarmsoutwardasthehorsecontinuedslowlyrunning(狀從).Itlookedimpressive.Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressing

thetiming(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作)

sinceIwouldneedtobeintheairatthecorrecttime

whenthehorseranpast(狀從).Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime.Itwasclearlydifficult.Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming(adj短語做補語).ButIknew

themostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand(賓從).注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.兩種構思方法“四到一行”“線索呼應”看聽想說做找出線索，前后呼應“兩法六句”1.讀后續寫分類與構思分析分析角度內容原文反應句類型分類屬于挑戰與成長型讀后續寫。通過主人公接受挑戰并克服困難，展現勇氣與毅力，同時揭示成功背后的努力和代價。"Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming."構思思路通過描述練習失敗、心理掙扎到成功完成表演的全過程，展現成長和突破，突出意志力與團隊支持。"Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground."布局與框架1.失敗起步：描述初次嘗試的失敗、身體摔傷及心理波動。

2.堅持與突破：展現主人公在團隊支持下克服恐懼并成功完成表演。"Iknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand."承接原文的事項1.繼續描寫動作與心理描寫，如恐懼、疼痛、專注。

2.保持語言風格與敘事節奏，注意銜接主人公練習情節。"Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressingthetiming."整體注意事項1.突出主人公的心理轉變，從猶豫到堅定。

2.使用細膩的描寫展現動作和環境。

3.避免語言生硬，保持敘事流暢。"Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime."巧妙設計續寫內容1.添加心理獨白，展現主人公的內心掙扎和動力來源。

2.描述團隊支持的重要性，體現人際關系的溫暖。

3.增加成功后的反思與成長。"Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse’sback."2:故事山模式分析

StoryMountain思維導圖引入背景1.

主人公初次嘗試特技表演，充滿期待和忐忑。2.

關鍵句:"Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catchingandprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe."逐漸上升1.

初次嘗試失敗，摔傷引發痛苦和恐懼。2.

關鍵句:"Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground."高潮沖突1.

再次嘗試，面對自我懷疑，付出努力。2.

關鍵句:"Iknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand."緩解過程1.

最終完成特技，克服恐懼。2.

關鍵句:"At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured."結局與反思1.

從失敗到成功，領悟毅力的意義。2.

關鍵句:"Irealizedthevalueofperseveranceandtheimportanceofteamwork."3:推薦例句與詞匯替換類別推薦英文例句高級替換詞動作描寫"Sheadjustedherpositioncarefully,herbodytremblingslightly."

"Heleapedforwardwithallhismight."

"Herhandsclutchedthereinstightlyasthehorsegalloped."leap→spring,bound心理描寫"Fearsurgedthroughherveinsasshetookadeepbreath."

"Determinationovershadowedherhesitation."

"Amixofanxietyandexcitementcoursedthroughher."fear→dread,unease環境描寫"Thecoldbreezesweptacrosstheopenfield,rustlingthedrygrass."

"Thearenaechoedwiththerhythmicthudofhooves."

"Thegoldensunlightpaintedlongshadowsontheground."cold→chilly,biting4:語法與搭配分析語法現象例句解析非限定性定語從句"Thecowgirls,whohadperformedflawlessly,guidedmestepbystep."增加句子信息，提升句式復雜度。動名詞作主語"Concentratingonthetaskwastheonlywaytosucceed."增強表達的正式性和多樣性。虛擬語氣"HaditnotbeenforLisa’sguidance,Iwouldn’thavemadeit."表達假設，提高語言高級感。5:PossibleAnswersVersion1:Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.

“Icandothis”,repeating

tomyselftoincreasemyconfidence(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),Ipickedmyselfup

andwalkedbackto

thestartingpoint.AftertryingagainandagainIfiguredoutthetimingandcouldsuccessfullylandonthehorseback(賓從).Thenanotherchallengecame(狀從),Ineededtostandonthebackofthehorsewithmyarmsstretched

asthehorsecontinueditsrun(狀從).ManyattemptsweremadeandfinallyIdidit.At6.00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.Iwassoexciteddespitethepain.Thoughthedoctorlaterreported

Imuststayinbedforawhilebecauseofmykneeinjury,Ihadnoregrets(狀從+賓從).

I’mnotatrickrider,butbeliefinmyselfmademeone.Forme,itwaslikedoingtheimpossible.Andwhentheviewerswatchedit(狀從),Iwantedthemtounderstandthatgettingintogoodphysicalshapemeanttheycouldalsodotheimpossible(賓從+賓從).Paragraph1:

Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Painshotthrough

mykneeasIlandedawkwardly(狀從),

thesoundofgaspsfillingtheair(獨立主格).Embarrassmentwashedoverme

asIlayonthedustyground(狀從),theweightoffailurepressingdown(獨立主格).Butthecowgirlsrushedtomyside,theirreassuringsmilespushingbackmydoubts(獨立主格).“You’recloserthanyouthink,”oneofthemsaidgently.Theirunwaveringbeliefinmerekindledmydetermination.Withthegroupwatching(with復合結構),Istoodup,dustedmyselfoff,andtookadeepbreath(動作串).Visualizingthemovements(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),I

replayedtheiradviceinmymind:focuson

timing,

trust

therhythmofthehorse,andstayconfident(動作串).Thistime,

Ivowed(插入語),wouldbedifferent.Isignaled

totheridertobegin.Asthehorseapproached(狀從),Ibrokeintoaruntowardthetrampoline.Myheartracedinsyncwiththepoundinghooves.Timing

myleapperfectly(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),Isprangontothetrampoline(n.蹦床，彈簧墊)

andfeltthesurgeofmomentumcarrymeupward.Asplitsecondlater,myfeetlandedonthehorse’sback.Wobblingslightly(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),Istretchedoutmyarms,andcheerseruptedaroundme.Reliefmixedwithtriumphsurgedthroughme.Ihaddoneit!Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured

butmyspiritsoaring(獨立主格).Thecrewgatheredaround,applaudingmyperseverance(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).Despitetheachinginmybody,Ifeltanimmensesenseofaccomplishment.Thecowgirlsgavemeaproudthumbs-up,theirsupporthavingmadeallthedifference(獨立主格).AsIstoodbesidethehorse(獨立主格),stroking

itsmane(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),IreflectedonwhatIhadachieved(賓從).Thiswasn’tjustabout

performingastunt—itwasalessoninresilienceandthecouragetofacechallengeshead-on.Later,whilereviewingthefootage(狀從壓縮),Imarveledat

howfluidthestuntlookedoncamera(賓從).

ThepainandfearIhadfelt(定從)

seemedtovanish,replaced

byprideandgratitude(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).Theexperienceleftanindeliblemarkonme.Inthosefleetingmomentsatopthegalloping(vi.飛馳，奔馳)

horse,Irealizedthatpushingboundarieswasn’taboutperfectionbutaboutdaringtoriseaftereveryfall.解析與亮點語法高分句式分析：1.

非限定性定語從句:1.

"PainshotthroughmykneeasIlandedawkwardly,thesoundofgaspsfillingtheair."2.

功能:增加細節，豐富畫面感。2.

獨立主格結構:1.

"Visualizingthemovements,Ireplayedtheiradviceinmymind."2.

功能:表達簡潔且富有高級感。高級詞匯與替換:1.

Pain→agony,discomfort2.

Determination→resolve,grit3.

Fall→tumble,collapse4.

Triumph→victory,achievement亮點描寫與例句:1.

情緒描寫:1.

"EmbarrassmentwashedovermeasIlayonthedustyground,theweightoffailurepressingdown."2.

替換:embarrassment→humiliation,weight→burden2.

動作描寫:1.

"Timingmyleapperfectly,Isprangontothetrampolineandfeltthesurgeofmomentumcarrymeupward."2.

替換:sprang→vaulted,propelled3.

環境描寫:1.

"Thegoldensunlightbathedthearena,castinglongshadowsthatdancedwiththemovementsofthegallopinghorse."核心詞匯表:1.perseverancen.毅力determination/

resilience

"Herperseverancehelpedherovercometheobstacle."1.

accomplishv.完成

achieve

fulfill"Heworkedhardtoaccomplishhisgoal."2.

visualize

v.想象imagine,foresee,

envision,"Shetriedtovisualizeherselfsucceeding."PossibleAnswer3:Paragraph1:

Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Thesharppain

inmyknee(定語)

andtheembarrassmentoffailinginfrontofeveryone(定語)

threatenedtooverwhelm

me.Iwantedtogiveup,buttheencouragingwordsofthecowgirls(定語)

spurredmeon."You’realmostthere.Timingiskey,"oneofthemsaid,hersmilefullofconfidence(獨立主格).Igrittedmyteeth(咬緊牙關),focusedon

herinstructions,andgave

itanothertry(動作串).Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured

butmyspiritsoaring.ThecrewcheeredloudlyasIstoodatopthehorse(定從),armsoutstretched(獨立主格).Thoughmybodyached(狀從),myheartwasfilledwith

pride.Thatday,Ilearnedaninvaluablelesson:failureisnottheend,butasteppingstonetosuccess.PossibleAnswer3:Paragraph