話題八旅游與交通考情分析1寫作指導2實戰演練3考情分析1寫作指導五步寫作法——審列擴連查第一步細審題定要點［2017福建]你的美國朋友John計劃暑假來中國旅游。請你根據以下圖示，用英語在QQ中給他留言，介紹并推薦你的家鄉福建。詞數80左右。

審文體：應用文2審時態：一般現在時審人稱：第三人稱；審主題：介紹家鄉福建注意事項：1.必須包含所有提示信息，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。Hi，John.I’mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I’dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.Fujianlies

?I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou！

第二步分段落列要點首段：發出邀請：我想邀請你來我的家鄉福建游玩(已給出)。中間段：全方位介紹福建：地理位置、省會城市、人口、環境、

名勝和美食等。結尾：表達期望(已給出)。第三步擴句子精加工中間段：全方面介紹福建要點一

介紹地理位置、省會城市<錯誤句>FujianliestothesoutheastofChina.Fuzhouiscapitalcity.<一般句>FujianliesinthesoutheastofChina.Fuzhouisitscapitalcity.<高分句>1.

FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasit

scapitalcity.

?FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasitscapitalcity.

要點二

介紹人口、環境<錯誤句>Ithasover38millionpopulation.Ithasalsofreshairand

beautifulmountain.<一般句>Ithasapopulationofover38million.Italsohasfreshair

andbeautifulmountains.<高分句>2.

Ithasapopulationofover38million.Becauseofthe

niceenvironment，it’sknownasRefreshingFujian

?Ithasapopulationofover38million.Becauseoftheniceenvironment，it’sknownasRefreshingFujian.

要點三

介紹名勝和美食<錯誤句>YoucanvisitmanyplaceofinterestslikeMountWuyi.You

cantastemanydeliciousfood.<一般句>YoucanvisitmanyplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyi.You

cantastemanykindsofdeliciousfood.<高分句>3.

ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyian

dGulangIslandarewellworthvisiting.Besides，you

cantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood.

?ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyiand

GulangIslandarewellworthvisiting.Besides，youcantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood.

第四步連句子成短文<優秀范文>Hi，John.I’mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I’dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasitscapitalcity.Ithasapopulationofover38million.Becauseoftheniceenvironment，it’sknownasRefreshingFujian，

whichattractsmillionsoftouristsfromhomeandabroad.定語從句Ifyoucome，youcanenjoyfreshair，theblueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers.ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyiandGulangIslandarewellworthvisiting.說明了福建優美的環境吸引了大量游客這一事實；同時從句的使用，使句式豐富多樣條件狀語從句承上啟下，表示除了上文的相關介紹之外還有其他介紹，使文章語意緊湊，層次分明Besides，youcantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou！第五步查全文得高分首先依次檢查人稱、時態、文體、主題是否正確，要點是否齊全；然后檢查句型、單詞拼寫、標點是否正確。實戰演練［2023連云港]走進江蘇，游歷各地。眾多外國友人暑期將參加

“GoJiangsu”

旅游活動。假如你是李華，請你根據以如圖片及文字提示，以

“WelcometoLianyungang”

為題寫一篇英語短文，邀請他們走進家鄉連云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。3注意事項：1.詞數90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2.文中應包括所給內容要點，可適當發揮，使文章連貫；3.文中不得出現考生的真實姓名、校名等信息。WelcometoLianyungangI’mLiHuafromLianyungang，Jiangsu.I’dliketorecommendmyhometowntoyou.

Lianyungangliesinthenorth-eastofJiangsu.It’sfamousformanyplacesofinterest.HereyoucanvisitHuaguoMountain，thehomeoftheMonkeyKing.YoucanalsogototheSumaBaytoenjoythebeautifulsea.It’scoolinsummer.

Lianyungangliesinthenorth-eastofJiangsu.It’sfamousformanyplacesofinterest.HereyoucanvisitHuaguoMountain，thehomeoftheMonkeyKing.YoucanalsogototheSumaBaytoenjoythebeautifulsea.It’scoolinsummer.

Moreover，Lianyungangisacitywithrichculture.Localpeoplearefriendlyenoughtohelpyou.Remembertotryourlocalfood.I’msureyouwillenjoyit.

Don’tmissLianyungangwhenyouattend“GoJiangsu”.Welcometoourhometown.We’relookingforwardtomeetingyousoon.

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