高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習收養小狗的善舉：換來生命守護的暖心回饋1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文Formany,anactofkindnessisitsownreward.ButEvaHacheyfoundherselflessnessansweredinwaysshecouldneverhaveimagined.Forweeks,EvaHacheyhadimaginedadoptingagoldenChihuahuawithawhitespotonitsforehead.Andtherehewas,atherlocalSPCAinFredericton,NewBrunswick.Thedoghadbeenabusedbyhispreviousownersandwastimid.“He’dcometome,thenbackawayandgrowl,thencomebacktome,”Hacheysaid.“After15minutes,theattendantpickedhimupandputhiminmylap.Hestartedgivingmekisses.Hestolemyheartinthatmoment.”Sheadoptedtheten-month-oldpuppyonthespotandnamedhimBruno.4續寫原文BrunolivedhappilywithHacheyandher35-year-olddaughter,AngelHutchinson,forfivemonths.Then,ontheeveningofSeptember26,2016,Hachey,52atthetime,returnedhomeasusualat8p.m.fromherjobasachiropracticassistantandofficemanager.Andasusual,sheatesupperinfrontoftheTVinthelivingroom.Around10:30,afriendcalled,justasBrunowentintoHutchinson’sroomtogotosleepforthenight.Hacheyandherfriendchattedabit,andasHacheyhungup,shenoticedthetimewas11:08.“ThenextthingIrememberwasamalevoicesaying,‘Eva,Eva,wakeup.’Itwasanemergencydoctor,”saidHachey.“Ilookedaround,andtheroomwasjustfullofpeople.AndIsaid,‘Whatareyoudoinginmyhouse?’”Whattheyweredoingwassavingherlife.BythetimeHacheyhadhungupwithherfriend,HutchinsonwasfastasleepinherbedroomandBrunowasinhisusualspotnexttoherundertheblankets.HacheybelievedBrunoheardsomethingoddthenandpossiblywenttothelivingroomtoinvestigate.5段首句Paragraph1：Unexpectedly,BrunoranbacktothebedroomandtriedeverymeanstoawakenHutchinson.Paragraph2:Ayearlater,Hacheyfinallyfullyrecovered.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8很多時候，善舉本身就是一種回報，而伊娃?哈奇的無私行為所收獲的回報，遠遠超出了她的想象。伊娃?哈奇一直渴望收養一只額頭上有白色斑點的金色吉娃娃，終于在當地的動物保護協會找到了它。這只小狗曾遭受前主人的虐待，十分膽小怕人，一開始對哈奇既親近又警惕。但15分鐘后，工作人員將小狗放到哈奇的腿上，小狗開始親吻她，瞬間就俘獲了她的心，于是她當場收養了這只十個月大的小狗，并給它取名為布魯諾。布魯諾和哈奇以及她35歲的女兒安吉爾?哈欽森一起快樂地生活了五個月。2016年9月26日晚上8點，52歲的哈奇像往常一樣下班回到家，她在客廳邊看電視邊吃晚餐。大約10點半，一位朋友打來電話，這時布魯諾去了哈欽森的房間準備睡覺。哈奇和朋友聊了一會兒，掛電話時是11點08分。之后她就失去了意識，等再次醒來時，發現房間里全是急救人員，醫生正在呼喚她。原來，大家正在拯救她的生命，而這一切的開端可能與布魯諾有關。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Paragraph1:Unexpectedly,BrunoranbacktothebedroomandtriedeverymeanstoawakenHutchinson.出乎意料的是，布魯諾跑回臥室，想盡一切辦法叫醒哈欽森。它先是用鼻子不停地拱哈欽森的臉，發出急切的嗚嗚聲，可哈欽森睡得太沉，絲毫沒有反應。布魯諾急得在床邊來回踱步，隨后又跳上床，用爪子輕輕抓撓哈欽森的手臂，還時不時地用頭去頂她的肩膀。見哈欽森還是沒有醒來的跡象，布魯諾開始大聲吠叫，聲音又高又急，在安靜的房間里顯得格外刺耳。終于，哈欽森被布魯諾的叫聲吵醒，她迷迷糊糊地睜開眼睛，看到布魯諾如此反常的舉動，心中涌起一股不安。布魯諾見哈欽森醒了，立刻跳下了床，一邊叫著一邊向客廳跑去，還時不時回頭看哈欽森有沒有跟上來。哈欽森意識到一定發生了什么事，趕緊起身跟在布魯諾后面。來到客廳，她看到母親躺在地上，一動不動，頓時嚇得臉色蒼白。她急忙跑到母親身邊，呼喊著母親的名字，可母親沒有任何回應。哈欽森顫抖著雙手撥打了急救電話，在等待救護車的過程中，布魯諾一直守在哈奇身邊，時不時用舌頭舔舔她的手，似乎在給她傳遞力量。10續寫思路分析Paragraph2:Ayearlater,Hacheyfinallyfullyrecovered.一年后，哈奇終于完全康復了。回想起那天晚上發生的事情，她依然心有余悸，同時也對布魯諾充滿了感激。她知道，如果不是布魯諾的機智和勇敢，自己可能就無法再醒來。為了表達對布魯諾的感謝，哈奇專門為它舉辦了一場盛大的派對，邀請了許多親朋好友來參加。派對上，哈奇為布魯諾準備了它最喜歡的食物和玩具，還親手為它戴上了一條漂亮的項圈。哈奇含著淚對大家說：“布魯諾不僅是我的寵物，更是我的救命恩人。是它給了我第二次生命，我會永遠愛它、照顧它。”在場的人都被哈奇和布魯諾之間深厚的感情所感動，紛紛為他們鼓掌。從那以后，哈奇更加珍惜和布魯諾、哈欽森在一起的時光，他們的生活也變得更加幸福美滿。布魯諾也依然像以前一樣，陪伴在哈奇身邊，用它的方式守護著這個家。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現Unexpectedly,BrunoranbacktothebedroomandtriedeverymeanstoawakenHutchinson.First,heusedhisnosetonudgeHutchinson'sfacerepeatedly,makingurgentwhimperingsounds.However,Hutchinsonwasinadeepsleepanddidn'trespondatall.Brunopacedanxiouslybesidethebed.Then,hejumpedontothebedandgentlyscratchedHutchinson'sarmwithhispaws,andfromtimetotime,hebumpedhisheadagainsthershoulder.SeeingthatHutchinsonstilldidn'twakeup,Brunostartedbarkingloudly,hisvoicehigh-pitchedandurgent,whichwasparticularlyharshinthequietroom.Finally,HutchinsonwasawakenedbyBruno'sbarking.Sheopenedhereyessleepilyand,seeingBruno'sabnormalbehavior,asenseofuneasewelledupinherheart.AssoonasBrunosawthatHutchinsonwasawake,heimmediatelyjumpedoffthebed,barkingandrunningtowardsthelivingroom,andlookingbackatHutchinsonfromtimetotimetoseeifshewasfollowing.HutchinsonrealizedthatsomethingmusthavehappenedandquicklygotuptofollowBruno.Whentheyarrivedatthelivingroom,shesawhermotherlyingontheground,motionless.Shewassofrightenedthatherfaceturnedpale.Sherushedtohermother'ssideandcalledhermother'sname,buthermotherdidn'trespondatall.Hutchinsondialedtheemergencynumberwithtremblinghands.Duringtheprocessofwaitingfortheambulance,BrunostayedbyHachey'ssideallthetime,lickingherhandfromtimetotime,asifpassingonstrengthtoher.13范文呈現Ayearlater,Hacheyfinallyfullyrecovered.Recallingwhathappenedthatnight,shestillfeltlingeringfear.Atthesametime,shewasfullofgratitudetoBruno.Sheknewthatifithadn'tbeenforBruno'sintelligenceandcourage,shemightnothavewokenupagain.InordertoexpresshergratitudetoBruno,Hacheyspeciallyheldagrandpartyforhimandinvitedmanyrelativesandfriendstoattend.Attheparty,HacheypreparedBruno'sfavoritefoodandtoysforhimandputabeautifulcollaronhimwithherownhands.Withtearsinhereyes,Hacheysaidtoeveryone,"Brunoisnotonlymypetbutalsomysavior.Hegavemeasecondlife,andIwillloveandtakecareofhimforever."ThepeoplepresentwerealltouchedbythedeepaffectionbetweenHacheyandBrunoandapplaudedforthem.Fromthenon,HacheycherishedthetimewithBrunoandHutchinsonevenmore,andtheirlifebecamehappierandmorefulfilling.BrunostillaccompaniedHacheyasbefore,guardingthisfamilyinhisownway.14升級版范文呈現Unexpectedly,Brunodashedbacktothebedroom,determinedtorouseHutchinsonfromherslumberbyeverymeanspossible.Initially,henuzzledHutchinson'sfaceincessantlywithhisnose,emittingaseriesofurgentwhimpers.However,HutchinsonwassosoundlyasleepthatsheremainedcompletelyoblivioustoBruno'sefforts.Bruno,growingincreasinglyanxious,begantopacerestlesslybesidethebed.Then,heleapedontothebedandgentlyscratchedHutchinson'sarmwithhistinypaws,intermittentlynudginghershoulderwithhishead.Ashisinitialattemptsprovedfruitless,Brunoresortedtobarkingloudly,hisshrillandinsistentcriescuttingthroughtheotherwisesilentroom.Atlonglast,HutchinsonwasjoltedawakebyBruno'spersistentbarking.Sheopenedhereyesgroggily,anduponnoticingBruno'sunusualbehavior,awaveofuneasewashedoverher.ThemomentBrunosawthatHutchinsonwasawake,hepromptlyjumpedoffthebed,barkingallthewhileashesprintedtowardsthelivingroom,frequentlyglancingbacktoensurethatHutchinsonwasfollowing.Realizingthatsomethingwasamiss,HutchinsonquicklygotupandtrailedbehindBruno.Uponenteringthelivingroom,shewashorrifiedtofindhermotherlyingmotionlessonthefloor.Herfacedrainedofcolorassherushedtohermother'sside,desperatelycallingouthername,butreceivednoresponse.Withtremblinghands,Hutchinsondialedtheemergencynumber.Throughouttheagonizingwaitfortheambulance,BrunoremainedsteadfastlybyHachey'sside,occasionallylickingherhand,asiftryingtoimpartsomeofhisownstrengthtoher.15升級版范文呈現Ayearlater,Hacheyhadfinallymadeafullrecovery.Whenevershethoughtbacktothatfatefulnight,ashiveroffearstillcoursedthroughher,butalongsideitwasanoverwhelmingsenseofgratitudetowardsBruno.ShewasacutelyawarethatwithoutBruno'squick-wittednessandbravery,shemightneverhaveregainedconsciousness.ToshowherappreciationforBruno,Hacheywentalloutandorganizedagrandparty,invitingnumerousrelativesandfriends