高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習沙灘上的歡樂與挑戰：沙堡的故事1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文Onceuponatime,inthemidstofafinesummer,TomandhisyoungerbrotherJackwentonanamazingtriptoapicturesquebeachwiththeirfamily.ExcitementfilledtheairasTomandJackeagerlypackedtheirbucketsandshovels(鏟子),readytoexplorethesandywondersthatawaitedthem.Themomenttheyarrivedatthebeach,theywastednotimeandrusheddirectlytowardstheshoreline.Withthewindbrushinggentlyovertheircheeks,TomandJackdugtheirhandsintothesoftgrainsofsand,laughinghappilyastheyfeltgrainsofsandpassingthroughtheirfingers.Theirlaughterwasechoingalongthecoast.4續寫原文Thenthetwolittlebrothersdecidedtobuildasplendidsandcastlethatwouldleaveeveryoneinawe.Withthesoundofseabirdssinginginthebackground,theybegantheirgrandproject.Sidebyside,theycuppedtheirhands,dugintothesoftbeach,andstartedbuildingtheirdreamcastle.Withgreatcareandprecision,theysculptedandshapedthesandwiththeirfingers,craftingeachtowerandwall.Theboyswerelostintheirwork,feelingthewarmthofthesandbeneaththeirfingers.Theyseemedtohearwhisperingtalesofthedistant,mysteriousocean.5續寫原文Timeseemedtostandstillastheboyspouredtheirheartsintoeverydetailoftheirsandycreation.Witheachpassingmoment,thesandcastlegrewinbothsizeandbeautyanditbegantotakeshape.Together,theypatientlydecoratedtheirdreamcastlewithseashellsandtwigs,imaginingaworldofsoldiers,princesses,andmagicalcreatures.Seeingthecastlestandproudlybeforethem,thetwolittlebrothersbreathedoutasighofrelief.Theireyesshonewithexcitement.Theywerelikearchitectswhowereappreciatingtheirmasterpiecethatexpressedtheirextraordinaryimagination.6段首句Paragraph1：However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Paragraph2：Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9在一個美好的夏日，湯姆和弟弟杰克隨家人去美麗的海灘旅行。他們帶著工具興奮地奔向沙灘，在那里盡情玩沙，之后決定建造一座令人驚嘆的沙堡。兄弟倆用心雕琢，用貝殼和樹枝裝飾，沙堡逐漸成型。他們看著自己的杰作滿心歡喜。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.然而，他們還沒反應過來，海水就開始上漲了。起初，海水只是輕柔地漫過他們的腳背，帶來一絲清涼。可轉眼間，海風呼嘯起來，海浪也變得洶涌澎湃。一個個巨大的浪頭接連不斷地拍打過來，如同一頭頭兇猛的野獸，無情地沖擊著他們精心搭建的沙堡。湯姆和杰克眼睜睜地看著那些他們花費了無數心血建造的精美塔樓和堅固城墻，在海浪的肆虐下迅速崩塌，化作一堆堆散落的沙子。他們心急如焚，趕忙用手去阻擋海水，試圖保住沙堡，但海浪的力量太過強大，他們的努力顯得如此微不足道。望著即將消失的沙堡，他們的眼中充滿了失落和沮喪，心情也如同這被海浪攪亂的沙灘一般，亂糟糟的。11續寫思路分析Para2：Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.杰克點頭表示同意，他們決定重建沙堡。盡管剛才的失落還縈繞在心頭，但兄弟倆骨子里的堅韌讓他們很快就振作起來。他們對視一眼，從彼此的眼中看到了堅定的決心。于是，他們再次彎下腰，用手捧起細膩的沙子，全神貫注地開始堆砌。這一次，他們汲取了之前的教訓，不僅更加小心翼翼地塑形，還特意把沙堡建在了離海水更遠的地方。他們一邊忙碌著，一邊互相鼓勵，分享著彼此對于新沙堡的創意和想法。在溫暖的陽光照耀下，兄弟倆的身影在沙灘上顯得格外專注，仿佛周圍的一切都與他們無關，他們的心中只有那個即將再次誕生的夢想沙堡。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Atfirst,theseawatergentlylappedovertheirfeet,bringingatouchofcoolness.Butintheblinkofaneye,theseabreezehowled,andthewavesturnedrough.Onehugewaveafteranothercrashedontotheshore,likefiercebeasts,mercilesslypoundingthesandcastletheyhadpainstakinglybuilt.TomandJackwatchedhelplesslyastheexquisitetowersandsolidwallstheyhadspentsomucheffortonquicklycrumbledintopilesofscatteredsand.Theyweresoanxiousthattheyhurriedlyusedtheirhandstoblocktheseawater,tryingtosavethesandcastle.However,thepowerofthewaveswastoostrong,andtheireffortswereinvain.Lookingatthedisappearingsandcastle,theireyeswerefilledwithlossandfrustration,andtheirmoodwasaschaoticasthebeachdisturbedbythewaves.14范文呈現Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Althoughthepreviouslossstilllingeredintheirhearts,thetenacityinthetwobrothersquicklymadethemcheerup.Theylookedateachotherandsawfirmdeterminationineachother'seyes.Then,theybentdownagain,cuppedtheirhandstopickupthefinesand,andstartedbuildingwithfullconcentration.Thistime,theylearnedfromtheirpreviousexperience.Notonlydidtheyshapethesandmorecarefully,buttheyalsodeliberatelybuiltthesandcastlefartherawayfromtheseawater.Astheywerebusy,theyencouragedeachotherandsharedtheircreativeideasforthenewsandcastle.Underthewarmsunlight,thefiguresofthetwobrothersonthebeachwereextremelyfocused,asifeverythingaroundthemdidn'tmatter.Intheirhearts,therewasonlythedreamsandcastlethatwasabouttobebornagain.15升級版范文呈現However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Initially,theseawatercaressedtheirfeetgently,impartingasenseofcoolness.Yet,inaninstant,theseabreezeroared,andthewavesturnedtumultuous.Waveuponwavecrashedontotheshore,resemblingferociousbeasts,mercilesslyassaultingthesandcastletheyhadpainstakinglyconstructed.TomandJackwatchedindismayastheelaboratetowersandsturdywallstheyhadlaboredoversoassiduouslyrapidlycrumbledintoheapsofscatteredsand.Sodesperateweretheythattheyhastilyresortedtousingtheirhandstofendofftheencroachingseawater,inafutileattempttosalvagethesandcastle.Alas,themightofthewaveswasinsurmountable,renderingtheireffortsfruitless.Gazingatthevanishingsandcastle,theireyesweresuffusedwithdejectionanddisappointment,andtheirspiritswereasdisarrayedasthebeachbuffetedbythetempestuouswaves.16升級版范文呈現Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Despitethelingeringsenseofloss,theindomitablespiritwithinthetwobrothersquicklybuoyedthemup.Theyexchangedaglance,andineachother'seyes,theybeheldunwaveringresolve.Subsequently,theystoopedoncemore,scoopingupthefinesandwiththeirhands,andsetaboutrebuildingwithunwaveringconcentration.Thistime,they