高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習特別的暑假經歷：從尷尬到自豪1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文IchewedonmypencilasIwalkedbackandforthacrossmybedroom.WhatwasIgoingtodo?ItwasbadenoughthatIwasthenewkid.ButnowIwassuretogetlaughedrightoutoffifthgrade.Howcouldmyfirsthomeworkbesuchadisaster?“MynameisAnna,andthissummerI——”Istopped.HowcouldIstandinfrontofmyclassandsaythatI’dspenttheentiresummerhandlingsomethingthatmostpeopledon’tevenliketotalkabout?Poop(糞便).I’dspentthreemonthsshoveling(鏟),collecting,andanalyzingcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.ItriedtothinkofadifferentadventureIcouldshare.MaybeIcouldsayI’dspentthesummerontheWeatherControlTeampreventingfloods.4續寫原文“Timefordinner,”mymomcalled.Iwalkedslowlydownthestairsandslidintomychair.“You’vebeeninyourroomsinceyoucamehomefromschool,”Momsaid.“Whatareyouworkingon?”Isighed.“IhavetotelltheclasswhatIdidthissummer.”Myyoungerbrother,Seymour,begantolaughuncontrollably.“Noonewillwanttositnexttoyouaftertheyhearyouwerecoveredincowpoopallsummer!”“OK,that’senough,Seymour,”Dadsaid.“Anna,”saidMom,puttinggreenbeansinabowl,“beproudoftheworkwedidthissummer.Ourplanetwouldbeinsadshapewithoutscientistslikeyourgrandfather.”5續寫原文It’struethatmygrandfatherdoesimportantwork.Hedevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel.Usingthepoopisnoweasy,economical,andenvironmentallysafe.“Iknow,Mom,”Isaid,staringatmymeatloaf.“Butit’snotexactlysomethingpeoplewanttohearaboutbeforelunch.”ThatnightIdreamedaboutmoresplendidadventures:cavedivinginMexico;hikingthroughtheAmazonrainforest.Atschoolthenextday,Ibentovermydesk,listeningtoeachkidspeak.Mypalmsweresweaty,andtheknot(結)inmystomachgrewtighter.“AndthatwasmyjourneytoMountEverest,”EmberAdamssaid,finishingherreport.Shebowedandtookherseat.6段首句Paragraph1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Paragraph2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9文章講述了安娜作為轉校生，面臨首次作業分享暑假經歷的難題，因暑假在農場處理牛糞而不知如何開口，試圖編造其他經歷。晚餐時與家人提及此事，媽媽提醒她應自豪，祖父的工作意義重大。第二天上學，安娜聽著同學們分享精彩冒險經歷愈發緊張，輪到她時，她鼓起勇氣講述農場工作及祖父將牛糞轉化為燃料的成果。同學們聽完后鼓掌歡呼，有的還投來欽佩目光。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.“輪到你了，安娜，”哈蒙德老師說道。安娜緊張地站起身，走向講臺，她看著同學們，深吸一口氣，開始講述。她先提到暑假在祖父母農場度過，起初她因處理牛糞而覺得難以啟齒，但想到祖父的工作意義非凡，便鼓起勇氣繼續。她詳細說明祖父研發出利用牛糞作為燃料的方法，既經濟又環保，強調這看似平凡的工作實則對地球意義重大，她越說越自信，聲音也越發洪亮。11續寫思路分析Para2：TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.同學們歡呼著，安娜回到座位。她剛坐下，幾個同學就圍了過來，眼中滿是欽佩。他們夸贊安娜的經歷獨特且有意義，一個同學說沒想到牛糞還能有這么大作用，另一個同學則表示安娜的祖父很了不起。安娜開心地笑了，她意識到原本讓自己尷尬的經歷，現在卻成為自豪的資本，也讓她更加懂得平凡工作背后的偉大價值，她決定以后也要像祖父一樣為環保貢獻力量。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Annastoodupnervouslyandwalkedtothefrontoftheclass.Lookingatherclassmates,shetookadeepbreathandbegan.Shefirstmentionedthatshehadspentthesummeronhergrandparents’farm.Atfirst,shefeltembarrassedtotalkabouthandlingcowpoop,butthinkingofthegreatsignificanceofhergrandfather’swork,shesummonedupthecouragetocontinue.Sheelaboratedthathergrandfatherhaddevelopedamethodtousecowpoopasfuel,whichwasbotheconomicalandenvironmentallyfriendly,emphasizingthatthisseeminglyordinaryworkwasactuallyofgreatsignificancetotheearth.Themoreshespoke,themoreconfidentshebecameandhervoicebecamelouder.14范文呈現TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.AssoonasIsatdown,severalclassmatesgatheredaround.Theypraisedthatmyexperiencewasuniqueandmeaningful.Oneclassmatesaidthathedidn’texpectcowpoopcouldhavesuchagreateffect,andanotherclassmatesaidthatmygrandfatherwasamazing.Ismiledhappily.Irealizedthattheexperiencethathadembarrassedmebeforehadnowbecomeasourceofpride,anditalsomademeunderstandthegreatvaluebehindordinarywork.IdecidedthatIwouldalsocontributetoenvironmentalprotectionlikemygrandfatherinthefuture.15升級版范文呈現“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Tremblingslightly,Annarosetoherfeetandmadeherwaytothefrontoftheclass.Gazingatherclassmates,sheinhaleddeeplyandcommenced.Sheinitiallydisclosedthatshehadspentthesummeronhergrandparents’farm.Admittedly,shewasinitiallyhesitanttomentionhandlingcowpoop,yetuponreflectingontheprofoundsignificanceofhergrandfather’swork,shemusteredthecouragetoproceed.Itwashergrandfatherwhohaddevisedamethodtotransformcowpoopintofuel,whichwasnotonlyeconomicalbutalsoenvironmentallyfriendly.Emphasizingthatthisseeminglymundaneworkwas,infact,ofimmenseimportancetotheplanet,shefoundherselfgrowingmoreconfidentwitheachpassingword,hervoiceresonatingwithnewfoundassurance.16升級版范文呈現TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.HardlyhadItakenmyseatwhenseveralclassmatesflockedaround.Theylaudedthatmyexperiencewassingularlyuniqueandhighlymeaningful.Oneclassmateexclaimedthathehadne