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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。AsChristmasdecorationsappearedintown,ourparentscalledmytwoyoungerbrothersandmetogether.Atfirst,Ithoughtsomeonehaddied,becauseIhadneverseenmyparentslooksosad.MybrothersandIstoodwaitingfortheawfulnews.Momhuggedmeasshemurmured,“Christmasisgoingtobedifferentthisyear.Wewon'tbehavingatreeorpresents.Wecanbarelyaffordfood.”Dad,restingonthecouch,beckoned(招手示意)theboysintohisarms.“ThingswillchangewhenIgetbacktowork.”Myfamilywaspoorerthandirt.Dad,theonlybreadearnerinourfamily,workedinacoalmine.However,soonafterreturningtoworkattheendofalongstrike,Dadwashurtinarockfallthatbrokebonesinhisfoot.Lyingonthecouchwiththeswollenfoothighonpillows,hedidn'ttalkorsmilemuch.Therewaslittletosmileabout.Nowork,noine.Atnineyearsold,Imotheredmyyoungerbrothers:Rodney,agedsix,andStevie,three.Wesharedasmallbedroom.Thatnight,afterourparents’announcement,wetalked.Rodneybegan.“Em,didyouseehowsadMommyandDaddylooked?IthoughtMommywasgonnacry.“Me,too.Daddy'sfoot’s…thisbig”whisperedStevie,holdingouthisarms.“Yeah..We'reinhardtimes,"Isaid.“ItmakesMommyandDaddysad."“Butwedon'thavetobesad,"Iadded,hopingtobrightenthemood.“Sincetherearestillseveralweekstogo,maybewecandosomethingtocheerthemup,"Isaidwithoverdoneenthusiasm.Theboysproposed,“Wecantakethemoneyfromourpiggybank...earnsomemore..andsurprisethemwithgifts!"“Icanrunerrands(跑腿)forAuntEmandneighborstoearnmoney,"Ioffered.“Yeah,"Rodneyadded,“IandSteviecanreturnbottlesandsavethedepositmoney...insteadofbuyingcandy!"HepushedSteviegentlywithhiselbow.“Yeah!”Stevieclutchedhishandstogether.Wehadaplan!Untiltheynoddedoff,Icoachedmylittlebrothers(especiallyStevie)inwaystoguardoursecret.“Don'ttalkaboutitduringtheday."注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意圣誕節將至,父母卻告知“我”和兩個弟弟今年沒錢買圣誕樹和禮物,連食物都快負擔不起,因為家里唯一掙錢的爸爸在煤礦工作時受傷,沒了收入,家庭陷入困境。“我”作為9歲的姐姐安慰弟弟們,隨后大家一起想出通過存錢、跑腿、撿瓶子賣錢等方式攢錢給父母買禮物的計劃,還約定要保守秘密,準備悄悄執行這個讓父母開心起來的重要任務。5處伏筆以及在續寫中的回應伏筆:父母告知今年圣誕節的艱難處境,一家人都很難過。回應:孩子們積極想辦法改變現狀,在續寫中通過努力準備禮物,讓父母的心情從悲傷轉為驚喜與感動,實現情緒上的轉變。伏筆:爸爸受傷沒了工作,家里沒收入。回應:正因如此才有了孩子們為改變家庭氛圍努力攢錢的情節,后續他們用自己辛苦攢的錢買禮物,讓家庭重新有了溫馨快樂的感覺。伏筆:孩子們商量好各自掙錢的辦法,如“我”跑腿、弟弟們撿瓶子存錢等。回應:續寫中可以體現出孩子們通過這些方式一點點積攢資金,最終有能力購買禮物,將計劃付諸實踐。伏筆:“我”叮囑弟弟們要保守秘密。回應:在后續情節里,秘密一直沒被泄露,直到圣誕節當天送出禮物,給父母帶來十足的驚喜,使情節更具戲劇性和溫馨感。伏筆:大家懷著期待又緊張的心情制定了計劃。回應:后續就圍繞著計劃的執行以及最終成功給父母送禮物展開,展現孩子們努力的過程和父母收獲驚喜的溫馨畫面。續寫要點第一段:寫孩子們醒來后就開始按計劃行動,“我”去鄰居家幫忙跑腿,兩個弟弟到處收集瓶子換錢,過程雖辛苦但大家都充滿干勁,為給父母準備禮物默默努力,每天都期待著能攢夠錢。第二段:描述圣誕節早上,孩子們把用辛苦攢的錢買的禮物送給父母,父母先是驚訝,隨后十分感動,一家人緊緊相擁,沉浸在幸福溫暖之中,這個特別的圣誕節讓大家感受到了濃濃的親情和愛的力量。情感線從最初得知圣誕節艱難時的悲傷、擔憂,到制定計劃后的期待、充滿干勁,再到送禮物時父母的驚訝以及一家人收獲的感動、幸福,整體情感是從低落向溫暖、喜悅轉變。故事線家庭因爸爸受傷面臨拮據的圣誕節,孩子們制定計劃掙錢,努力執行后在圣誕節送出禮物,讓家庭重歸溫馨。主旨升華句Loveinafamilycanturnhardshipintoaheartwarmingcelebration.(家庭中的愛能將艱難困苦變為一場暖心的慶祝。)Intoughtimes,theunitedeffortsofafamilycancreatethemostpreciousgiftsofall.(在艱難時刻,一個家庭齊心協力能創造出最珍貴的禮物。)Thepoweroffamilyloveshinesbrightestwhenfacingdifficulties.(面對困難時,家庭之愛的力量最為閃耀。)Afamily'sbondisstrengthenedbythesharedeffortstobringjoyinhardtimes.(在艱難時期為帶來歡樂而共同努力會使家庭紐帶更加牢固。)Eveninpoverty,thelovewithinafamilycanmakeChristmastrulymagical.(即便身處貧困之中,家庭內部的愛也能讓圣誕節變得無比神奇。)寫作示范一Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Iimmediatelywenttotheneighbors’housestoaskiftheyneededanyerrandsdone.RodneyandSteviescouredtheneighborhoodalleysforemptybottles.Everylittlebitofmoneyweearnedwascarefullysaved.Despitethetiredness,ourheartswerefullofexcitement,knowingthatoureffortswouldbringsmilestoMommyandDaddy'sfaces.OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.Theystaredatusinastonishmentatfirst,thentheireyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.Theyhuggedustightly,sayinghowproudtheywereofus.Inthatmoment,ourlittlelivingroomwasfilledwithloveandhappiness,makingthisaChristmaswewouldneverforget.寫作示范二Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!IstartedrunningerrandsforAuntEm,carryinggroceriesanddoingsmallchores.RodneyandSteviewerebusycollectingbottlesfromeverycornertheycouldfind.Daybyday,wewatchedoursavingsgrow.Thoughitwastoughworkforouryoungselves,wedidn'tplain,ourmindsfixedonthebigsurpriseforourparents.OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.MommycoveredhermouthinsurprisewhileDaddy'seyeswidened.Thentheybothbrokeintobigsmilesandpulledusclose.Theirhugswerewarmandfulloflove.ThisChristmasbecamespecialnotbecauseoffancygiftsbutbecauseoftheloveandunityweshowedasafamilyinthefaceofhardship.【答案】參考范文Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Thefollowingweekssawmedashinghomefromschooleachdaydeterminedtoearnapenny.Iwasusuallygreetedbysecretwinksandgrinsonewithamissingtooth,andtheotherwithtiny,straightteethbothassuringmeoursecretwassafe.AfewdaysbeforeChristmas,wegleefullywentshopping.WeboughtMomanewapron,andforDad,apairofleatherslippers.ThenightofChristmasEveseemedendl

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