2023江蘇省中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞第六期專題10書面表達熱點話題16篇一、材料作文1．（2023·江蘇徐州·統考二模）最近網上流行這樣一句話：要么旅行，要么讀書，身體和靈魂總有一個在路上。旅行和讀書一樣重要，它是一種學習和體驗，能給我們帶來身心的愉悅。某青少年英文網站舉辦了一場主題為“Awonderfultour”的征文比賽。假如你是王平，你準備投稿參加這次比賽，內容包括：1.分享一次你難忘的旅行經歷及感受；2.闡述旅行的好處（至少兩點）3.呼吁更多的同學外出旅行。要求：1.100詞左右，已給出的句子不記入總詞數；2.必須包括全部要點，但不能逐條翻譯，可適當發揮；3.文章不要提及真實的校名和人名。Travellingtenthousandmilesisasgoodasreadingtenthousandbooks.Ilovetravelling.Lastsummervacation,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Travellingtenthousandmilesisasgoodasreadingtenthousandbooks.Ilovetravellingverymuch.Lastsummervacation,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Onthefirstday,weclimbedtheGreatWall.Ifelttiredbuthappy.Thenextday,wevisitedthePalaceMuseumandenjoyedmanybeautifulworksofart.IlearnedmoreaboutthehistoryofMingandQingDynasties.ThenItastedBeijingduckinWangfujingStreet.IreallyhadagoodtimeinBeijing.Ithinktravellingcanopenupourminds.Wecanmeetallkindsofpeopleandlearnmoreaboutdifferentcultures.Dearguys,let’sgotravellingandlearnmoreabouttheworld!【詳解】[整體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：要求包含所有提示內容，并適當發揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：具體描述自己難忘的旅行經歷；第二步：闡述旅行給你帶來的好處；第三步：書寫結語，呼吁更多同學出去旅行。[亮點詞匯]①haveagoodtime過得開心②allkindsof各種各樣的[高分句型]①Ithinktravellingcanopenupourminds.（省略that的賓語從句；動名詞作主語）②Dearguys,let’sgotravellingandlearnmoreabouttheworld!（祈使句）2．（2023·江蘇揚州·統考二模）假如你叫李明，是南京陽光中學學成會成員之一。該校的國際部要組織學生下周三來揚州瘦西湖開展研學活動。請你以學生會的名義，根據以下提示，為國際部的學生們擬一則英文通知。提示如下：Time,transportation&placesWhen&howwillyougo?Wherewillyougo?ActivitiesWhatcanyouseethere?Whatcanyoudothere?…Tips(Atleast3points)MannersSafetytips參考詞匯：studytour,theSlenderWestLake要求：（1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發揮；（3）詞數：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；（4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。

Dearschoolmates,

It’smygreathonortoinformyouthatwewill…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Students’UnionofSunshineMiddleSchool【答案】例文Dearschoolmates,It’smygreathonortoinformyouthatwewillgototheSlenderWestLakeinYangzhouforastudytournextWednesday.We’llmeetattheschoolgateat6a.m.andthengototheSlenderWestLakebycoach.Springisthebesttimetovisitthelake.Therewecanenjoybeautifulviewsandhaveachancetoseebeesandbutterfliesplayamongdifferentkindsofflowers.Wecanalsowalkalongtheriversideandgoboatingwithourfriendsifweareinterested.What’smore,whilewalkinginthepark,wecanhearbirdssinghappilyinthegreentrees.Whenweenjoythebeauty,weshouldmindourbehaviors.Alwaysremembernottopickflowersordroplittereverywhere.Besides,itisimportantforustokeepsafetyrulesinmind,especiallywhenwerowaboatorplayintheamusementpark.Itwillbeafineday.Ihopewecanenjoyourselves.Students’UnionofSunshineMiddleSchool【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：以一般現在時為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生不要遺漏表格中提示的每一項內容，適當增加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開篇點題介紹國際部要組織學生下周三來揚州瘦西湖開展研學活動。第二步，具體介紹活動的時間、交通方式、具體活動及注意事項等情況。第三步，書寫結語，表達期許和祝愿。[亮點詞匯]①haveachancetodosth.有機會做某事②differentkindsof各種各樣的③mindourbehaviors注意我們的行為④keepsafetyrulesinmind牢記安全規則[高分句型]①What’smore,whilewalkinginthepark,wecanhearbirdssinghappilyinthegreentrees.（省略句）②Besides,itisimportantforustokeepsafetyrulesinmind,especiallywhenwerowaboatorplayintheamusementpark.（“Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.”句型）3．（2023·江蘇宿遷·統考二模）勞動實踐對學生的成長有著至關重要的影響，它不僅可以培養學生的生活技能，增長生活見識，還能讓學生在勞動中體會到付出的價值和收獲的喜悅。比如為父母做一餐飯；幫助班級打掃一次衛生；在社區里做志愿服務等等。五一勞動節即將來臨，請你寫一篇英語短文，介紹你在生活中或課堂中的一次勞動實踐。要點：1.你經歷的一次勞動實踐是什么？2.你是如何完成這次勞動的？3.你的收獲和感想是什么？注意：1.內容須包含所有要點，語句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數90個左右；3.表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Nowadays,ourparentsalwaysprepareeverythingforus.Soweseldomhaveanchancetodosomethingforthem.

Mymotherwasilllastweekend.Ithoughtitwasmyturntocookbreakfastforher.Idownloadedacookingapp.Ifollowedtheinstructionsstepbystep.Aftermymothertastedit,shesmiledatmeandsaidthatwasthemostdeliciousmealshehadeaten.

Fromthisexperience,Irealizedoinghouseworkisimportantforus.Itcannotonlydevelopourbasicskills,butalsoteachushowtotakecareofourselves.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節完整表述內容。[寫作步驟]第一步，講述當今父母為孩子安排好一切，所以孩子沒有機會做一些勞動實踐，以此來引出本文主題；第二步，講述自己如何完成這次勞動的；第三步，講述自己的收獲和感想。[亮點詞匯]①perparefor為……準備②stepbystep逐步地③beimportantfor對……重要[高分句型]①Aftermymothertastedit,shesmiledatmeandsaidthatwasthemostdeliciousmealshehadeaten.（after引導時間狀語從句）②Fromthisexperience,Irealizedoinghouseworkisimportantforus.（動名詞作主語，賓語從句）4．（2023·江蘇南京·統考一模）Inourgrowth,wemaymakepromisestoourfriends,toourparents,toourteachers,andeventoourselves.Pleasewriteapassagetotalkaboutanunforgettablepromise.Kitty,“Ipromisetokeepsecretsforyou,Lucy.”Tom,“Ipromisetodothethingsmyself,dadandmum.”Ben,“Ipromisetostudyharderinthecomingterm,MissWang.”注意：1.題目自擬，詞數80左右；2.文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱；3.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inourgrowth,wemaymakepromisestoourfriends,toourparents,toourteachers,andeventoourselves.Iusedtobeveryfat,andwhenIwasinphysicaleducationclass,Iwasverytiredafterrunningforawhile.IpromisedmyphysicaleducationteacherthatIwouldstrengthenphysicalexerciseandmakemyselfhealthier.Sincethen,Ihavebeenrunningforhalfanhouronmyowneverydaybeforegoingtoschool.Ialsoenjoyplayingbasketballverymuch.IfIhavetimeonweekends,Ioftengototheparkwithfriendstoplaybasketball.Iamveryhealthynow,andmysportsareverygood.Ijustdidit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；③提示：根據提示內容，介紹你做出的一次難忘的承諾，可適當發揮，注意語句通順，條理清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，通過介紹我們成長過程中可能做的承諾來引出話題；第二步，介紹自己難忘的一次承諾；第三步，介紹做出承諾后的結果。[亮點詞匯]①usedtobe過去是②enjoydoingsth喜歡做某事③onone’sown獨自[高分句型]①whenIwasinphysicaleducationclass,Iwasverytiredafterrunningforawhile.（when引導時間狀語從句）②IfIhavetimeonweekends,Ioftengototheparkwithfriendstoplaybasketball.（if引導的條件狀語從句）5．（2023·江蘇淮安·校聯考二模）2023年4月9日上午，隨著發令槍響，2023淮安馬拉松暨大運河馬拉松系列賽（淮安站）激情開賽，來自14個國家以及全國31個省市的1.5萬名選手陸續通過起跑點。賽道途經缽池山公園、森林公園、河下古鎮、周恩來紀念館等49個淮安當地地標。這次賽事依舊秉承“運河三千里，醉美是淮安”這一主題，現在請你圍繞這一主題，向你的外地朋友介紹這次賽事和淮安這座城市，內容包括以下要點：1.描述這次馬拉松比賽（舉辦時間、參賽人數和來源、我市人民在現場表現、……）；2.介紹淮安這座城市（運河之都美譽、地理位置、景點、……）3.表達你對這次賽事的感受和對這座城市的喜愛。參考詞匯：選手runner

省province

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紀念館MemorialHall注意：1.詞數在100左右，已給出的文字不計入總詞數；2.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；3.補齊要點，適當發揮；Mydearfriends,I’mgladtointroducesomethingaboutThe2023Huai’anMarathonandtheHuai’ancitytoyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Huai’anwelcomesyou!【答案】例文Mydearfriends,I’mgladtointroducesomethingaboutthe2023Huai’anMarathonandtheHuai’ancitytoyou.TheracewasheldonApril9,2023.Fifteenthousandrunnerstookpartintheraceandtheycamefrom14countriesand31provincesorcities.Localpeoplecheeredforthembydancingandshouting“Comeon!”whentherunnersranby.Moreover,someevenplayedtheroleoftheMonkeyKingforthem.Huai’aniscalledthecapitalofcanal.ItliesinthenorthofJiangsuProvince.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchasBochishanPark,HexiaAncientTownandZhouEnlaiMemorialHallt.Itisalsofamousforitsdeliciousfood.TheraceissuccessfulandIfeelhappytolivehere.Huai’anwelcomesyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；③提示：根據所給提示向外地朋友介紹2023淮安馬拉松和淮安這座城市。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題。表明本文要介紹淮安馬拉松和淮安這座城市；第二步，具體介紹淮安馬拉松的舉辦時間、參賽人數和來源以及市民在現場表現；第三步，介紹淮安的地理位置和著名景點等；第四步，總結對這次賽事的感受和對這座城市的喜愛。[亮點詞匯]①tookpartin參加②camefrom來自③liesin位于[高分句型]①TheracewasheldonApril9,2023.（被動語態）②Localpeoplecheeredforthembydancingandshouting“Comeon!”whentherunnersranby.（when引導的時間狀語從句）6．（2023·江蘇宿遷·統考二模）初中生活就要結束了，同學們即將開始新的征程，規劃新的人生。請根據下表提示以“Myplanforthenewlife”為題，給你們校報寫一篇英語短文，介紹你的計劃。學習制定計劃，努力學習；多讀好書，……生活早睡早起，勤做鍛煉，如……做做家務，感恩父母；聽聽音樂，放松自己；外出旅游，參觀名勝；愿望……注意：1.詞數90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2.內容須包括所給要點，可適當發揮，條理清楚、語句連貫；3.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名等信息。MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway.Iplantodolotsofthingsforthenewlife.First,Iwillmakeaplanandtrytokeepabalancebetweenworkandrest.I’llworkhardonallsubjects.Inmyfreetime,Ihopetoreadmoreusefulbookstolearnaboutdifferenthistoriesandcultures.Readingcanopenupanewworldtome.Second,I’dliketohaveahealthylifestyle.It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.Exercisemoreeveryday.I’llgojoggingintheparkorplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Moreover,I’mgoingtodosomehouseworkformyparentstothankthem.Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.Ialsowanttogotravellingtoenjoythenaturalbeautyandvisitthepalacesofinterest.Inaword,I’mlookingforwardtohavingameaningfulnewlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文寫作；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：本文要求從學習、生活和原文等方面介紹新生活的計劃，注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，先介紹學習計劃；第二步，介紹生活計劃；第三步，介紹自己的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①begoodfor對……有好處②Inaword總之③wanttodosth想要做某事[高分句型]①It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.（it固定句型）②Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.（動名詞作賓語）7．（2023·江蘇南京·統考一模）你在學校英文校刊KIDSMAG上看到征文啟事。請根據征文要求，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。注意：1.內容涵蓋要點，全文連貫通順。2.不少于80詞（已給出的文章開頭，不計入總詞數）。3.文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。AnAmazingFestivalI’mgladtosharemyideasabouttheamazingfestival.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnAmazingFestivalI’mgladtosharemyideasabouttheamazingfestival.IwanttonamethefestivalGreatestChefsandcelebrateitonMay8.Ilikeitbecauseitcanenrichourschoollifeandprepareusforabetterfuture.Tomakethefestivalinterestingandcolorful,afoodDIYcompetitioncanbeheld.Firstly,wewillencouragestudentstomakeoneortwodishes.Afterthat,parentsandteacherswillbeinvitedtotastewhatwehavecookedforthem.Finally,ourteacherswillvotefortheBestDIYCookinourschool.Asforthewinners,theycangetabigprize—onedaywithouthomework!Isn’tthatamazing?I’msureeveryonecanhavealotoffunonthatamazingday!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要求已給出，學生不要遺漏題目中的要求，適當添加細節，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字數要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先談談你把這個節日命名為什么，以及在什么時間慶祝；第二步，具體闡述組織哪些活動來慶祝這個節日；第三步，談談這個節日為何令人驚喜。[亮點詞匯]①encouragesbtodosth鼓勵某人做某事②beinvitedtodosth被邀請去做某事③alotof許多[高分句型]①Ilikeitbecauseitcanenrichourschoollifeandprepareusforabetterfuture.（原因狀語從句）②I’msureeveryonecanhavealotoffunonthatamazingday!（賓語從句）二、話題作文8．（2023·江蘇泰州·統考二模）隨著智能手機的普及以及網絡的快速發展，觀看短視頻成為人們的熱門消遣方式。假如你是某中學九年級的一名學生，你班進行了主題為“Areshortvideosgoodforteenagers?”的英語辯論。請你根據正、反方的觀點及提示寫一篇總結報告。寫作提示：1.同學們對青少年觀看短視頻的看法；2.你的看法及建議。注意事項：1.要點齊全，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規范；2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。Nowadays,shortvideoshavebecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.Aretheygoodorbadforteenagers?Thestudentshavedifferentopinions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nowadays,shortvideoshavebecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.Aretheygoodorbadforteenagers?Thestudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinkwatchingshortvideosishelpfultoteenagers,asit’sagoodwaytogetknowledgeaswellasrelax.However,othersdisagree.Intheireyes,watchingshortvideosisawasteoftime.What’sworse,spendingtoomuchtimeonscreenmaycausepooreyesight.Inmyopinion,wecanwatchshortvideos,butwehadbettermakeagoodchoicefirst.Weshouldchoosevideosthatcanhelpimproveourselves.Besides,weneedtocontrolthetimethatwespendonthem.Halfanhoureachdayisenough.Aslongasweuseshortvideosproperly,wecannotonlyhavefunbutalsolearnsomethingusefulfromthem.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態：以“一般現在時”為主；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏要點提示中關于正反方的觀點的內容，需補充不同觀點所對應的理由，以及個人看法與建議。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明主題，不同人對短視頻的看法不同；第二步，闡述正反兩方對“短視頻是否對青少年有益”的不同看法及理由；第三步，表達個人看法及“看或不看短視頻”的建議。[亮點詞匯]①aswellas以及②inone’seyes在某人看來③what’sworse更糟糕的是④inone’sopinion在某人看來⑤hadbetterdosth.最好做某事⑥aslongas只要[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkwatchingshortvideosishelpfultoteenagers,asit’sagoodwaytogetknowledgeaswellasrelax.（省略that的賓語從句）②What’sworse,spendingtoomuchtimeonscreenmaycausepooreyesight.（動名詞作主語）③Weshouldchoosevideosthatcanhelpimproveourselves.（that引導定語從句）④Aslongasweuseshortvideosproperly,wecannotonlyhavefunbutalsolearnsomethingusefulfromthem.（“notonly...butalso...”句型）9．（2023·江蘇蘇州·統考二模）“是角色，有光芒。”小組合作中，你通常會擔任什么角色？請從以下情境中任選一個，談談你喜歡承擔的角色及理由，并描述你承擔該角色的經歷，寫一篇約100詞的英語短文，在學校英語公眾號WeDo,WeShow板塊分享。注意：文中不得出現真實姓名、學校等信息。TheroleIliketoplay_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheroleIliketoplayIprefertoplaytheroleofleaderingroupdiscussions.Asthenamesuggests,leadersarepeoplewhocanleadtheprocessanddirectionofthediscussion.Sometimestheleadershouldsolvetheproblemsbetweengroupmembers.Asforme,Ithinkbeingaleadercanhelpmelearnhowtoarrangethingsproperly,whichmeansalottome.Lastweek,wediscussedthetopicofhowtheinternetaffectedourlife.Theteacheraskedustoworkingroupsandmakepresentationsthenextday.Asthegroupleader,Iassigneddifferenttaskstodifferentmembers.Weallcompletedourowntasksinanorganizedwayanddidthepresentationsuccessfully.Whatawonderfulexperience!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態：以“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”為主；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏題干中所給出的提示“喜歡承擔的角色及理由，相關經歷”，注意正確拼寫單詞，避免出現語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己喜歡承擔的角色及理由；第二步，闡述承擔該角色時的經歷；第三步，表達個人感受。[亮點詞匯]①prefertodosth.更喜歡做某事②asfor至于③asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事④inanorganizedway有組織地，有條理地[高分句型]①Asforme,Ithinkbeingaleadercanhelpmelearnhowtoarrangethingsproperly,whichmeansalottome.（動名詞作主語，which引導非限制性定語從句）②Whatawonderfulexperience!（what引導感嘆句）10．（2023·江蘇揚州·統考二模）你校將組織英語作文比賽，請根據所給提示，以“LiveaMeaningfulLife”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須包括所有要點內容，并適當發揮；3.詞數在100詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)；4.不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。LiveaMeaningfulLifeLifeisagift.Weshoulddowhatisinterestingandcolourfultomakeitmeaningful.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LiveaMeaningfulLifeLifeisagift.Weshoulddowhatisinterestingandmeaningfultomakeitmeaningful.Firstofall,ameaningfullifeisalsohealthy.Readingispartofourlife.Asaresult,wecan’tlivewithoutit.Ofcourse,exercisingisasimportantasreading.Astrongbodycanreducethepossibilityofthedisease.Wealwaysneedahealthydiet.Itisnecessaryforustoeatmorehealthilyandexercisemore.Weshouldeatvegetablesandfruits.Unhealthyfoodwillberefused.Second,wearesupposedtohaveasenseofduty.Theenvironmentisourhome.Werequirestoplantmoretreesandrecyclethewatserightnow.Also,animalsneedprotecting.Everylifeisvaluable.Wecan’thurtorkillthemforourneeds.Third,takingpartincharitycanmakeourlifemeaningful.Wecanserveasvolunteerstohelpthedisabledorcleanuptheparks.Wehopewecanimprovetheirlives.Lastbutleast,weshoulddevelopgoodmanners,suchasqueuinginlinesandbeingpoliteinpublic.Otherswillbecomfortablebecauseofthegoodmanners.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為話題作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：根據所給的材料，以“LiveaMeaningfulLife”為題寫一篇短文，介紹一下過有意義的生活該怎么做。注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：先承接短文開頭。第二步：直入主題，詳細地介紹過有意義的生活該怎么做。[亮點詞匯]①partof部分②besupposedtodo應該做③takingpartin參加

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②Wehopewecanimprovetheirlives.（省略that的賓語從句）③Lastbutleast,weshoulddevelopgoodmanners,suchasqueuinginlinesandbeingpoliteinpublic.（suchas用來列舉示例）11．（2023·江蘇蘇州·統考一模）在我們成長的過程中，總離不開一些人、一些事，比如父母、老師、學習、愛好等。他們像雨露一樣滋潤著我們，幫助我們成長，豐富我們的生命。請你以________Help(s)MeGrow為題寫一篇文章，談談自己成長中的變化，以及這個變化對你的意義。內容包括：1.你過去的狀態；2.你發生的變化；3.變化對你的意義。注意：1.詞數100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2.需先把標題補充完整，文章內容需涵蓋所有要點，可適當發揮；3.文中不得出現與考生相關的真實校名和姓名等信息。________Help(s)MeGrowAsweprogressthroughlife,avarietyofthingsorpeoplecontributetoourpersonalgrowthanddevelopment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WritingHelp(s)MeGrowAsweprogressthroughlife,avarietyofthingsorpeoplecontributetoourpersonalgrowthanddevelopment.IusedtobeashypersonwhoneverfeltcomfortablespeakinginfrontofacrowdandIoftenfeltlikemyvoicedidn’tmatter.Growingup,IwasoftenoverlookedandfeltlikeIwasnobody.ButallofthischangedwhenIdiscoveredmytrueloveforwriting.Ithelpedmefindmyvoice.Istartedtoexpressmythoughtsandfeelingsthroughmywritingfreely,whichhelpedmegrowmoreconfident.Throughwriting,IwasabletolearnmoreaboutwhoIwasandwhatIwantedinlife.Mygrowthandconfidencehavechangedmylifeforthebetter.Ihavebeenabletorealizemydreamswithcourageandfaith.WritinghasopenedupmanynewdoorsformeandhasmademeintothepersonIamtoday.【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇話題作文；時態：時態主要為“一般過去時”和”現在完成時“；提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注心不要遺漏“信息提示”中幫助我們成長的介紹要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖借用“隨著我們在生活中的進步，各種各樣的事情或人對我們的個人成長和發展做出了貢獻”來引出重點介紹的內容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，從“你過去的狀態、你發生的變化、變化對你的意義等”幾個方面重點介紹寫作幫助我成長具體情況；第三步，書寫結語，表達“寫作為我打開了許多新的大門，使我成為今天的我”的感悟。[亮點詞匯]avarietyof各種各樣的contributeto貢獻beableto能夠[高分句型]①Istartedtoexpressmythoughtsandfeelingsthroughmywritingfreely,whichhelpedmegrowmoreconfident.（which引導的非限制性定語從句）②Ihavebeenabletorealizemydreamswithcourageandfaith.（現在完成時，表達對現在的影響）12．（2023·江蘇鹽城·統考二模）當你跨越時間之門，打開歷史之窗，你會追隨誰的足跡？陽光中學英語廣播站推出一個專題為MyFavoriteHistoricalPerson的欄目，請同學們介紹他們心中最喜歡的中國歷史人物，請你就此寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：1.Generalinformation（name,age,birthplace...）2.Whydoyouchoosehim/her?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromhim/her?要求：不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現學校和考生的真實信息；詞數100個左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。MyFavoriteHistoricalPersonInthelonghistoryofChina,therearemanyfamoushistoricalpersons.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyFavoriteHistoricalPersonInthelonghistoryofChina,therearemanyfamoushistoricalpersons.Agreatnumberofhistoricalfigureshavemadegreatcontributionstothesocietyandsomeofthemreallyimpressedthemselvesonourmemory.Asforme,myfavoritehistoricalpersonisZhugeLiang,afamouspoliticianwithgreatachievementinliteratureintheThreeKingdomsperiod.HisintelligenceisacknowledgedbytheChinese.HehelpedLiuBeitogetovertheemergenciesandsuccessfullyestablishedShu.Moreover,variousarticleswrittenbyhimhavebeenpassedonuntilnow,impressingmewithhisloyaltyandhugeamountofknowledge.Therefore,Iregardloyaltyasthemostvaluablequalityandalwayskeeponlearningtobeaknowledgeableperson.Atthesametime,Ia