Howtopolishyourwriting?TakethecontuniationwritingforexampleJudgeyourwritingHowtoanalyzeyourcomposition?structure3Tcontent3AThreeaspectsTwocoherenceTopicsentenceApplyadvancedwordsApplyadvancedgrammarApplyadvancedmatreialstructure:3T01Threeaspects1.accordingtotheplots,eachparagraphcanbedividedintothreeaspects.2.eachaspectcanincludevariousdescriptions:

actionpsychological

enviromentallanguagedirect

structure:3T02Twocoherence1.thefirstsentenceyouwriteineachparagraph&thegivensentenceineachparagrah.2.theendingofthefirstparagraph&thegivensentenceinthesecondparagraph03Topicsentenceattheend:&

emphaticsentence

強調句invertedsentence

倒裝句02Content:3A01Applyadvancedwordsreplacethesimplewordswithadvancedwords1.noun：waysuprise2.adj:happysmart3.adv:veryquickly4.verb:likebegin5.prep:aboutbyapproachamazementdelighted

intelligentextremelypromptlybekeenonsetouttodoregarding

viaApplyadvancedgrammar

upgradeyoursentence:writecompoundsentencegrammar:1)threeclauses：attribute/adverbial/nounclause2)non-predicate3)specialsentence:emphatic/invertedsentence,subjunctivemood（虛擬語氣）/exclamatorysentence(感嘆句）Content:3A03Applyadvancedmaterialmakeyourcompositionvivid1.rhetoricaldevice:simile&metaphoreg:loveisthesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface.2.Inanimatesubject（無靈主語）.無靈主語（inanimatesubject），又叫做物稱主語，指的是使用沒有生命的事物充當句子的主語成分，例如情感、動作、時間、地點、物品等，這與中文表達中習慣“以人為本”的特點——即常常會把人這個行為主體作為句子主語的情況大相徑庭，體現了英語語言所強調的“客體思維”，使得語言描寫生動形象（vividdescription）。Topicsentenceattheend:emphaticsentence&invertedsentence

強調句

倒裝句031.accordingtotheplots,eachparagraphcanbedividedintothreeaspects.2.eachaspectcanincludevariousdescriptions:actiondescription;psychologicaldescription;envorimentaldescription;languagedescription;directdescription02Threeaspects01Twocoherence1.thefirstsentenceyouwriteineachparagraph&thegivensentenceineachparagrah.2.theendingofthefirstparagraph&thegivensentenceinthesecondaragraphstructure:3TApplyadvancedmaterialmakeyourcompositionvivid1.rhetoricaldevice:simile&metaphoreg:loveisthesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface.2.Inanimatesubject（無靈主語）.03upgradeyoursentence:writecompoundsentencegrammar:1)threeclauses：attribute/adverbial/nounclause2)non-predicate3)specialsentence:emphatic/invertedsentence,subjunctivemood（虛擬語氣）/exclamatorysentence(感嘆句）02Applyadvancedgrammar01Applyadvancedwordsreplacethesimplewordswithadvancedwords1.noun：wayapproachsupriseamazement2.adj:happydelightedsmartintelligent3.adv:veryextremelyquicklypromptly4.verb:likebekeenonbeginsetouttodo5.prep:aboutregardingbyviaContent:3AApplyadvancedwordsandgrammar1.Runningisaheavyexercise.Itcanimproveourbodyandimproveouremotion.

1.Runningisaintensiveexercise,whichnotonlycanimproveourbody,butalsocanenhanceouremotion.

2.BecauseIlikedbaseballverymuch,Itriedmybestandfinallysucceededinplayingit2.Extremelyattractedbybaseball,Isparednoeffortandultimatelyaccomplishedit.

3.Aftherhearinghiswords,Ithoughtitwasimportanttofinishmystudy.3.Hearingwhatheexpressed,Iattachedimportancetocompletingmystudy.

ApplyInanimatesubject（無靈主語）1.Ifeltnervousandscared.1)Awaveofandscareme.2)Iwasbynevousnessandscare.2.Akidwascryingatdusk.2.Duskakidcrying.3.wespenttenminutestodrivetotheschool.3.Tenminutes’driveustotheschool.

emotion/statetime/placeactionnervousnesswashed/sweptoversourrounded/overwhelmed/seized

witnessed/foundbrought:languagedescription,actiondescription,psychologicaldescription

:languagedescription,psychologicaldescription:actiondescription,psychologicaldescriptionP2ThreeaspectsP1:

languagedesription,actiondescription:languagede