Unit3ENVIRONMENTALPROTECTIONUsingLanguageKent

REDUCINGWATERPOLLUTIONINTHELIRIVERWriteareportonanenvironmentalissueUsingLanguageItisoneofthemostwell-knowntouristdestinationsinChina’sGuangxiZhuangAutonomousRegion.

LiRiverLeadin1.Whatriverisit?Pollution2.Nowlet’slookatsomepicturesofLiRiver.Whatdoyouthinkofthem?3.WhatdoyouthinkmighthavecausedwaterpollutionintheLiriver?Thewastefromalargenumberoftouristsandenterpirses.Reading章節(jié)副標(biāo)題壹What’sthemainideaofthetext?ThetextmainlytalksaboutLiRiver’s_________and_____________________________.problemsmeasurestakentoprotecttheriverSkimming1.Itattractsmillionsofdomesticandforeignvisitorseachyear.2.Kitchensonboardwereusinglotsoffood，whichwasoftenthrownintothewater.3.Thecollectionandtransportofindustrialwastewasalsoimproved.4.Thelocalgovernmentsetupstrictregulationsregardingfurtherindustrialdevelopment.5.Withsuchcampaignsineffect.China’swaterwaysareheadingtowardsacleanandsustainablefuture.TFoilFhouseholdTTReadthetextanddecidewhetherthefollowingsentencesaretrue(T)orfalse(F).AnalysingStudythelanguagestructure.貳Para.1IntroducingthetopicPara.2Describingthe_______problemPara.3Presentingsome_______measuresPara.4Presentingfurther_______solutionsmeasures1.Readthetextandcompletetheparagraphsummaries.P333Studytheorganisationandlanguagefeatures.measures3.Drawamindmaptoshowthemeasuresthatdealwiththepollution.wastewatertreatmentfacilitiesRiverChiefSystem...mediaWritingUsewhatyouhavelearnttowriteareportonanenvironmentalissue1.MasterthestructureofthiskindofreportPart1：Introducethe_______Whatistheissue?Whydoesitneedtobedealtwith?Part2：Describethe_________Wheredoestheissueoccur?Whatareitscauses?Whateffectsdoesithave?Part3：Presentthe.Whatactionshavebeentakensofar?Whatfutureactionsareplanned?topic;problem；solution(s)2.Howtomakethearticlelogically表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but、however、despite、although/though/while…表因果關(guān)系：dueto/owingto/becauseof、thanksto、asaresultof、becausetherefore/thus、asaresult、so…that…表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：notonly…but，moreover/besides,inaddition表總結(jié)關(guān)系：inaword、tosumup、allinallTense時(shí)態(tài)：以simplepasttense（一般過(guò)去時(shí)）、simplepresenttense（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）、presentperfecttense（現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)）為主。personalreference（人稱）以thirdperson（第三人稱）為主。3.TenseandpersonalreferenceTense時(shí)態(tài)：以simplepasttense（一般過(guò)去時(shí)）、simplepresenttense（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）、presentperfecttense（現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)）為主。personalreference（人稱）以thirdperson（第三人稱）為主。3.Tenseandpersonalreference把垃圾扔進(jìn)對(duì)...有負(fù)面有負(fù)面影響導(dǎo)致這個(gè)問(wèn)題造成嚴(yán)重的水問(wèn)題throwgarbageintohaveanegativeeffectoncontributetotheproblemleadtoseverewaterqualityissues4.Usefulexpressionsfromthepassagepassage破壞自然環(huán)境改善水質(zhì)制定嚴(yán)格規(guī)定宣傳環(huán)保意識(shí)damagethenaturalenvironmentimprovethewaterqualitysetupstrictregulationsspreadenvironmentalawareness一項(xiàng)綜合倡議實(shí)施定期檢查解決水污染隨著這些運(yùn)動(dòng)的展開acomprehensiveinitiativecarryoutinspectionsregularlytacklewaterpollutionwithsuchcampaignsineffectItisreportedthat…據(jù)報(bào)道Dozensofpeoplehavecometorealize…許多人意識(shí)到…Sthusedtobe…butuptonowithasbeen…某物過(guò)去…但到目前為止它…Therefore,itisessentialthat…因此，很重要…Moreover，peopleareexpectedto…而且，人們應(yīng)該…5.Usefulsentencepatterns東湖曾經(jīng)是一處旅游勝地，假設(shè)你是李華，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇報(bào)道并呼吁社會(huì)關(guān)注當(dāng)?shù)卣卫頄|湖污染問(wèn)題。1.曾經(jīng)的情景（景美、水清、魚兒嬉戲、游客多）；2.后來(lái)的狀況（生活廢水污染、游客亂扔垃圾）；3.當(dāng)?shù)卣呀?jīng)采取措施來(lái)拯救西湖，情況有所好轉(zhuǎn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4Usewhatyouhavelearnttowriteareportonanenvironmentalissue.

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Writingsteps1Studythetaskcarefully1.Theme：WhatcausedthepollutionoftheEastLakeandhowtoreduceit2.Typeofwriting：areport3.Tense：Thesimplepresenttenseandthesimplepasttense4.Person：thethirdperson(it,they、people、government)2StructureParagraph1：TheEastLakeinthepastandnow（引出東湖受污染的主題）Paragraph2:HowtheEastLakewaspolluted（描述東湖受污染的因素，使用分層類表達(dá)方式）Paragraph3:Thesolutionstoreducingthepollution（可以以描述政府的做法收尾）優(yōu)點(diǎn)：語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)流暢，靈活使用從句，錯(cuò)誤較少，三段式覆蓋了要點(diǎn)。缺點(diǎn)：第一段太長(zhǎng)，造成頭重腳輕，部分語(yǔ)句可以調(diào)整到第二段，效果會(huì)更好。范文點(diǎn)評(píng)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：按照三段式完成了寫作，同時(shí)融合了報(bào)告的模板，內(nèi)容詳實(shí)。缺點(diǎn)：本文單詞的大小寫（粗心）、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤較大，修改后文章會(huì)很好很多。范文點(diǎn)評(píng)本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，且語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)流暢多樣性，如果第二段能擴(kuò)大措施句就更好。范文點(diǎn)評(píng)精彩范文

EastLakeusedtobeabeautifulplace,wherethewaterwasclearandfishesswamhappily.Travellerscamefromalloverthenationtovisitit,enjoyingitsbeauty.However,thewaterhassufferedfrompollutiongreatly.

Millionsoftonsofwastewaterfromfactoriesaroundhavebeenkeptpouringintoitdayandnight.Moreover,rubbishisoftenthrownintoitbythevisitors,whichhaspollutedthelakebadly.

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