高考英語應用文復習邀請外教出行作文（15分）

假定你是高二（1）班的李華，計劃本周末和同學們去北京奧林匹克森林公園進行徒步活動，請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：1.活動安排：（如活動時間，行走路線等）；2.需要做的準備工作；3.詢問對方意向。注意： 1.詞數不少于60;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.?開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Interaction（交際性：互動）

Willyoubeavailable?Wouldyouliketogiveitatry?Isthisappealingtoyou?Astrongappealtoyou,isn’tit?Soundsgreat,doesn’tit?Tone（交際性：語氣）

LessformalHow’severythinggoing?

Arrangement（內容：介紹活動安排）

Start/end/lengthActivity—walkingMorethanwalkingpurpose(route,distance,time,pace)(game,party,barbecue...)所用語言關鍵詞匯Iamwritingtoinviteat/in/onthisSaturdaytheOlympicForestParkwalk/hike(jog,run...)Grade2Class1建議：advice(Uncountablenoun)；adviseV.sbtodosuggestion(CountableNoun);suggestV.(that)sb(should)do準備：prepare...fortheactivity;preparation××Class1,Grade2我寫信想邀請您參加我們的徒步走活動。徒步活動定在周日早晨8點開始,大約三個小時。我們會走公園一半的路，會很累。我建議您穿合身的衣服和包頭鞋,這樣你就會走得輕松而舒服。一定帶上水和帽子，萬一天氣熱太陽曬。如果有時間，您能來嗎？如果有問題，請聯系我。我寫信想邀請您參加我們的徒步走活動。IamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusinhikingthisSunday.TakeahikingwithusHikewithus徒步活動定在周日早晨8點開始,大約三個小時。Thehikingisscheduledtokickoffat8.amthis

upcomingSundayandrunfor3hours.Asplanned,thehikingwillkickoffat...我們會走公園一半的路，會很累。Wewillcoverhalfof(therouteof)thepark,whichisdefinitelytiring/challenging.Wewillcoverhalfof(therouteof)thepark,whichissupposedtobetiring/challenging.我建議您穿合身的衣服和包頭鞋,這樣你就會走得輕松而舒服。Isuggestyouwearfittedclothesandclosed-toeshoessothatyouwillhavearelaxingandcomfortablehiking.Tomakesureyouwillhavearelaxingandcomfortablehiking,fittedclothesandclosed-toeareyourperfectchoice.一定帶上水和帽子，萬一天氣熱太陽曬。Dobringsomewaterandwearacapincaseitishotandthesunisburning.您能來嗎，如果有時間？Willyoumakeittojoinusifyouareavailable?Willyoucomeandjoinusifitisconvenientforyou?Whynotgiveitatryiftimeisavailableforyou?如果有問題，請聯系我。Ifyouhaveanyquestion,feelfreetoask/contactme.Don’thesitatetoaskme.范文賞析DearLucy,IamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusthisSundayforawalkingactivityintheOlympicForestPark,whichisthelargestparkinBeijing.Therearemanywalkingpaths,withlengthsof3k,5k,and10kwithinthepark.Andweplantowalk10k.Itwillbeverychallenging.Ifyou’reinterestedinit,pleasemeetusat9:00onSundaymorningatthesouthgateofOlympicForestPark.

Ifyouwanttobreatheinthefreshairandgetmuchexercise,whynotcome?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua要點一：活動安排交際性：寫作目的陳述Asforpreparation,you’dbetterwearsneakerstoguaranteeyourcomfortandawind-jacketincaseitiswindy.Inaddition,youcantakesuncreamtoprotectyourskinfromthesunlight.Abottleofwaterisalsonecessary.

Ifyouwanttobreatheinthefreshairandgetmuchexercise,whynotcome?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua要點二：所需準備要點三：詢問意向高分作文賞析15分要點齊全；結構合理活動內容和準備工作都很清晰學生很明顯使用了本學期學習的詞組很多。過程性學習痕跡明顯語氣略顯客氣14分書寫漂亮，要點齊全；結構合理活動內容和準備工作都很清晰；詞匯豐富，句式多樣，沒有錯誤；交際得體，體現了很強的語言運用能力建議該學生使用顏色比這個略淺的筆14分要點齊全；結構合理活動內容和準備工作都很清晰詞組表達很豐富；非謂語，從句使用也很正確書寫還有進步的空間語氣略顯客氣12分書寫漂亮，要點齊全；結構合理活動細節以及準備工作都很豐富；句式多樣，交際得體。不過其實仔細看一下，這篇文章從開篇的willbestartat8to12，together用成動詞；后文中還有諸如therehave；toourdelightisthat等表達使用不當；最后joinwithus.建議該同學注意改錯。不過這篇作文正好說明書寫的重要性同話題作文假如你是李華，你們學校將舉辦新年聯歡會。請你給外教Linda女士寫一封郵件邀請她參加。郵件內容包括：1.通知聯歡會事宜。2.希望Linda表演節目。3.詢問對方意向。

DearLinda,Howisitgoing？I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoourNewYear'sParty．MyclassmatesandIplantohaveapartytocelebratetheNewYear．WearegoingtohavethepartyinourclassroomonDecember29th．Thepartywillstartat2o'clockintheafternoon．Attheparty，wewillsingsongs，playgames，anddance．Ihopeyoucancometoourpartyifyouareavailablethen．Nothingisneededtopreparefortheparty,for