寫作專項提升第一講詞匯優美4角度英語2023高考總復習優化設計GAOKAOZONGFUXIYOUHUASHEJI詞匯1名詞(短語)名詞是表示人、事物、地點或抽象概念的名稱,屬于實詞,名詞分為專有名詞和普通名詞。名詞用得好,能顯示出深厚的語言功底,更能出眾脫俗。[示范1](2021·全國乙卷,書面表達)(一般詞)Ontheotherhand,therealsoexistsomeadvantages.(高級詞)Ontheotherhand,therealsoexistsomestrong

points.另一方面,也有一些優點。[示范2](2020·新高考全國Ⅰ卷,寫作)(一般詞)Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.(高級詞)Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovideanopportunityforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.這項活動受到高度評價,因為它不僅為我們提供了鍛煉的機會,而且使我們更有凝聚力。高中階段常見的名詞及名詞短語類寫作高級詞匯:①方法way→approach/means②困難difficulty→challenge/barrier③問題problem→issue④機會chance→opportunity⑤選擇choice→alternative⑥責任duty→responsibility⑦影響effect→influence/impact⑧后果result→consequence⑨缺點shortcoming→drawback⑩職業career→profession

優勢

advantage→strength/strongpoint

老人oldpeople→theelderly/theaged/theseniorcitizens

青少年youngpeople→youngsters/youths/adolescents

一個表現好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell-behavedchild

各種各樣的圖書allkindsofbooks→varietiesofbooks/awiderangeofbooks[對點過關訓練]先用所給的詞補全句子,然后對該詞進行升級1.(2021·全國乙卷,書面表達)網絡課程打破了時間和空間的限制。

breakthelimitationoftimeandspace.(course)

→

breakthelimitationoftimeandspace.

TheonlinecoursesTheonlinecurriculums2.(2020·新高考全國Ⅰ卷,寫作)這場比賽對參賽者的身體和精神都有很大的好處。所以我們都很重視,希望以后能有更多這樣的活動。Theracewasofgreatbenefittotheparticipants,physicallyandmentally.

,weallthinkhighlyofit,andexpectmoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.(result)

→Theracewasofgreatbenefittotheparticipants,physicallyandmentally.

,weallthinkhighlyofit,andexpectmoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.

AsaresultAsaconsequence3.傳媒對于輿論有很大的影響。Themedia

publicopinion.(effect)

→Themedia

publicopinion.

4.最重要的是,老人通常是最先品嘗桌上食物的人,因為他們在中國備受尊重。Mostimportantly,

thefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.(oldpeople)

→Mostimportantly

thefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.

hasapowerfuleffectonhasapowerfulimpact/influenceonoldpeopleareusuallythefirsttotastetheold/theelderly/theaged/seniorcitizensareusuallythefirsttotaste5.政府計劃為年輕人創造更多的就業機會。Thegovernmentplansto

.(youngpeople)

→Thegovernmentplansto

.

createmorejobsforyoungpeoplecreatemorejobsforyoungsters/youths/adolescents詞匯2動詞(短語)動詞分為及物動詞和不及物動詞兩類,在句子中作謂語和非謂語。及物動詞后面接賓語;不及物動詞后面不能接賓語。動詞或者動詞短語恰當靈活的運用,能生動形象地表達主語的動作或者狀態,動詞用的恰當高級,能為文章增色添彩。[示范1](2021·全國甲卷,書面表達)(一般詞)Knowingyouare

interested

inChina,Ibelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.(高級詞)Knowingyoutake

a

great

interest

inChina,I’m

firmly

convinced

that/I

firmly

hold

the

belief

thatyoucanlend

a

helping

hand

tosolvethesepuzzles.知道你對中國很感興趣,我相信你能幫我解決這些難題。[示范2](2020·全國Ⅲ卷,書面表達)(一般詞)Wewanttocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovel.(高級詞)We’d

liketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovel.我們想通過改編經典小說把你們的文化與我們的文化聯系在一起。高中階段常見的動詞及動詞短語類寫作高級詞匯:①知道know→beawareof②感謝thank→appreciate③擁有have→possess④看見see→catchsightof⑤記住remember→keepinmind⑥保持keep→maintain⑦提高improve→promote⑧完成finish→accomplish⑨應該should→besupposedto[對點過關訓練]Ⅰ.用高級詞匯替換下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020·全國Ⅲ卷,書面表達)Ourclassthought

oftheideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.

2.(2020·全國Ⅲ卷,書面表達)Wesincerelyhopeyoucanhelp

us.

3.Icouldhavewonthegamebutdecided

toletherwin.

4.Thiscouldcauseseriousdamagetothecountry’seconomy.

5.Weneedmoretimetoseehowthingsdevelopbeforewetakeaction.

cameupwith

dousafavor

madeupmymind

giverisetopromoteⅡ.用所給動詞的高級詞匯補全句子1.更糟的是,食用過多的糖可能會引起健康問題。What’sworse,eatingtoomuchsugar

.(cause)

2.她和丈夫一起買了一小塊地,開始自己種植食物。She

withherhusbandandbegangrowingtheirownfoods.(buy)

canleadto/resultin/giverisetohealthproblemspurchasedasmallpieceofland3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公園內亂扔垃圾。Allthevisitors

inthepark.(ask)

4.我們應不遺余力地美化我們的環境,因為它是全人類共有的。

,becauseitissharedbyallthehumanbeings.(tryone’sbest)

5.更重要的是,我們可以提出自己的想法,通過討論進一步學習。What’smore,we

andlearnmorethroughdiscussion.(thinkof)

wererequestednottothrowlitteraboutWeshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironmentcancomeupwithourownideas詞匯3形容詞(短語)形容詞是描述人或事物的特征、性質、屬性及狀態的一種開放性詞類。形容詞或者形容詞短語的恰當使用會渲染文章的色彩,為文章增加亮點。[示范1](2020·全國Ⅱ卷,書面表達)(一般詞)Thisfruit-pickingexperienceishelpfultousandteachesustheimportanceofworking.(高級詞)Thisfruit-pickingexperienceisbeneficialtousandteachesustheimportanceofworking.這次采摘水果的經歷對我們很有益,也教會了我們勞動的重要性。[示范2](一般詞)Heisanexcellentscientist,whohasmadeagreatcontributiontoourcountry.(高級詞)Heisanoutstandingscientist,whohasmadeagreatcontributiontoourcountry.他是一位杰出的科學家,對我們國家做出了巨大貢獻。形容詞及形容詞短語類寫作高級詞匯:①有益的good→beneficial②高興的glad→delighted③激動的excited→thrilled④富裕的rich→wealthy⑤幸運的lucky→fortunate⑥常見的common→universal⑦充足的enough→adequate⑧可用的useable→available⑨困難的difficult→challenging[對點過關訓練]Ⅰ.用高級詞匯替換下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020·天津卷,書面表達)Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.

2.(2020·新高考全國Ⅰ卷,寫作)Astherunningraceisvery

important,wehavetomakefullpreparationsinadvance.

3.Youcanfinddifferent

kinds

ofsweetfoodhere.

4.Youngpeopletodayfaceaverydifficultfutureatwork.

5.Sheseemsanunusuallyclevergirl.

delighted

ofgreatimportance/significance

avarietyof/various

challenging

intelligentⅡ.用所給形容詞的高級詞匯補全句子1.他的收入滿足不了他的家庭需求。Hisincome

.(enough)

2.學好英語對你未來就業至關重要。LearningEnglishwell

.(important)3.清晨早起對這位病人的健康非常有益。Gettingupearlyinthemorning

tothispatient’shealth.(useful)

isnotadequatetohisfamily’sneeds

issignificant/vitaltoyourfutureemployment

isofgreatbenefit

4.她是一位辛勤的老師,她工作非常勤奮。Sheis

andshe

.(hard-working)

5.每天下了班,我都筋疲力盡。Ialways

whenIamoffworkeveryday.(tired)

adiligentteacherisdiligentinherwork

feelexhausted詞匯4副詞及其他詞副詞或者副詞短語在句子中主要修飾動詞或者形容詞,往往作狀語,寫作時恰當得體地使用高中學過的、別人可能想不到的高級用法的副詞或者副詞短語,會給閱卷老師耳目一新的感覺。[示范1](2020·浙江1月卷,寫作)(一般詞)Inparticular,youarequalifiedenoughandexperiencedinpresentingyourideas,because

ofyourabundantskills.(高級詞)Inparticular,youarequalifiedenoughandexperiencedinpresentingyourideas,on

account

of/due

to/owing

to/thanks

toyourabundantskills.尤其是,你有足夠的資格和經驗來表達你的想法,因為你有豐富的技能。[示范2](2020·全國Ⅰ卷,書面表達)(一般詞)Inparticular,hewasverypatientthoughsometimesIhadnowaytosolvesomedifficultmathsproblems.(高級詞)Inparticular,hewasverypatientthoughonce

in

a

while/occasionally/from

time

to

timeIhadnowaytosolvesomedifficultmathsproblems.尤其是,他很有耐心,盡管有時我無法解決一些數學難題。常見的副詞及其他詞類寫作高級詞匯:①經常often→frequently②很少seldom→rarely③只有only→merely④然后then→subsequently/afterwards⑤仔細地carefully→attentively⑥適當地properly→appropriately⑦大約about→approximately/roughly⑧立刻immediately→shortly/rightnow/rightaway⑨當然certainly→definitely/undoubtedly[對點過關訓練]Ⅰ.用高級詞匯替換下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020·江蘇卷,書面表達)In

fact,documentariesaboutourcountryareplentifulbothathomeandabroad.

2.(2019·全國Ⅲ卷,書面表達)Iamverydelightedtotellyouthatamusicfestivalwillbeheldinourschool.

3.(2019·全國Ⅰ卷,書面表達)Inaddition,IcanexplaintheChinesepaintingsindetailandgivehelptoanyonewhoisinneed.

4.Mostofususepublictransporttogettowork.

5.A

few

days

ago,myfathercalledtoaskmetostudyandlivingconditions!

Actually/Asamatteroffact

morethan

aswellasThemajority

Theotherday1.人生在世總是有苦有甜。Youwillalwayshavethebad

intheworld.(and)

2.第二,你們說如果我提前付費的話就可以給我打折。Secondly,yousaythatthereisadiscount

.(if)3.下雨了,足球賽因此而延期了。Itrainedand

.(so)

Ⅱ.用所給詞的高級詞匯補全句子

aswellasthegood

suppose/supposing(that)Ipayinadvancethereforethefootballmatchwaspostponed

4.抓住這個機會,否則你會后悔的。Seizethechance,

.(or)

5.他不僅吸煙,而且還喝酒。Henotonlysmokesbut

.(too)

otherwise/orelseyou’llregretit

drinksaswellⅢ.用高級詞匯替換下面考生作文中的加黑部分假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Jack寫電子郵件問你高考后暑假的安排。請根據以下要