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主體段落：Line：起點趨勢終點Pie：一個餅切N塊大中小三者排列計總Bar：單圖例-線處理;多圖例-多條線+比較Table：縱/橫分類Map：方位3.結論段Aisno.1,BcomingasecondandCbeingthethirdBisno.2,followingAandfollowedbyC.三者排列句式ThechartsbelowgiveinformationaboutUSAmarriageanddivorceratesbetween1970and2000,andthemaritalstatusofadultAmericansintwooftheyears.ThemapbelowisofthetownofGarlsdon.Anewsupermarket(s)isplannedforthetown.Themapshowstwopossiblesitesforthesupermarket.east,west,south,northsoutheastmiddle/centerin/to/offbeclose/beneartobefarawayfromatthecrossgothroughheadforsub-branchwidenaroadnarrowbeterminatedappeardisappear/donotexistcrossroad/T-junctionringroadparallelbesited/situated/located/stand/lieinThemapshowstwoproposedlocationsforanewsupermarketforthetownofGarlsdon.Thefirstpotentiallocation(s1)isoutsidethetownitself,andissitedjustoffthemainroadtothetownofHindon,lying12kmstothenorth-west.Thissiteisinthecountrysideandsowouldbeabletoaccommodatealotofcarparking.ThiswouldmakeitaccessibletoshoppersfrombothHindonandGarlsdonwhocouldtravelbycar.AsitisalsoclosetotherailwaylinelinkingthetwotownstoCransdon(25kmtothesouth-east),apotentiallylargenumberofshopperswouldalsobeabletotravelbytrain.Incontrast,thesuggestedlocation,S2,isrightinthetowncentre,whichwouldbegoodforlocalresidents.Theoreticallythestorecouldbeaccessedbyroadorrailfromthesurroundingtowns,includingBransdon,butasthecentralareaisano-trafficzone,carswouldbeunabletoparkandaccesswouldbedifficult.Overall,neithersiteisappropriateforallthetowns,butforcustomersinCransdon,HindonandGarlsdon,theout-of-townsite(S1)wouldprobablyoffermoreadvantages.ThechartbelowshowsthetypesofmusicalbumspurchasedbypeopleinBritainaccordingtosexandage.原題：ThechartbelowshowsthetypesofmusicalbumspurchasedbypeopleinBritainaccordingtosexandage.Chart–bardiagramShow–indicateType—kind/categoryAccordingto---intermsofPeopleinBritain---BritishpeopleThebardiagram

indicatesthecategoriesofmusicalbums,including/namelypop,rockandclassicalmusic,consumedbyBritishpeopleintermsofgenderandage.Generallyspeaking,thepercentageofmenwhooftenbuymusicalbumsishigherthanthatofwomen,althoughmalesandfemalesshowsamepreferenceinbuyingmusicalbums.Accordingtothediagram,people,eithermalesorfemales,likerockmusicbest,whilepopmusicisalittlebitlesspopularandclassicalmusictheleastpopular.三者排列：Classicmusicistheleastpopular/fashionable/pervasive,rockbeinginthefirstplaceandpoprankingthesecond.Meanwhile,people’schoicesofbuyingmusicvaryconsiderablyacrossdifferentagegroups.Teenagersaswellasthoseintheirearlytwentiestendtobuymorepopmusicandrockmusicalbumsinsteadofclassicalmusicalbums.Thisisalsotrueforthoseagedbetween35and44.Interestingly,thoseagedbetween25and34seemtobewillingtotryavarietyofmusicforms,includingclassicalmusic.Olderpeople,saythosewhoare45orolder,preferclassicalmusictopoporrockmusic.Meanwhile,people’schoicesofbuyingmusicvaryconsiderablyacrossdifferentagegroups.Teenagersaswellasthoseintheirearlytwenties

tendtobuymorepopmusicandrockmusicalbumsinsteadofclassicalmusicalbums.Thisisalsotrueforthoseagedbetween35and44.Interestingly,thoseagedbetween25and34seemtobewillingtotryavarietyofmusicforms,includingclassicalmusic.Olderpeople,saythosewhoare45orolder,preferclassicalmusictopoporrockmusic.meanwhilevary=changeconsiderable—considerateaswellasinone’searlytwentiesmid/middlelateMeanwhile,people’schoicesofbuyingmusicvaryconsiderablyacrossdifferentagegroups.Teenagersaswellasthoseintheirearlytwentiestendtobuymorepopmusicandrockmusicalbumsinsteadofclassicalmusicalbums.Thisisalsotrueforthoseagedbetween35and44.Interestingly,thoseagedbetween25and34seemtobewillingtotryavarietyofmusicforms,includingclassicalmusic.Olderpeople,saythosewhoare45orolder,preferclassicalmusictopoporrockmusic.ThisisalsotrueforoppositeforInterestinglySayWhoare45orolder2oryoungerPrefer…to…countryGNPperhead(USdollar)DailycaloriesupplyperheadLifeexpectancyatbirth(year)Infantmortalityrates(per1000livebirth)Bangladesh140187740132Bolivia570208650124Egypt69029505697Indonesia58022964987USA1316036527412Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsofqualityoflifeinfivecountriesin1982.

countryGNPperhead(USdollar)DailycaloriesupplyperheadLifeexpectancyatbirth(year)Infantmortalityrates(per1000livebirth)Bangladesh140187740132Bolivia570208650124Egypt69029505697Indonesia58022964987USA1316036527412Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsofqualityoflifeinfivecountriesin1982.

countryGNPperhead(USdollar)DailycaloriesupplyperheadLifeexpectancyatbirth(year)Infantmortalityrates(per1000livebirth)Bangladesh140187740132Bolivia570208650124Egypt69029505697Indonesia58022964987USA1316036527412Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsofqualityoflifeinfivecountriesin1982.

Egypt,IndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilarintheirrangeofindicators,withEgypthavingthehighestqualityoflifeamongstthethree.However,Egypt’sinfantmortalityrate

wasslightlyhigherthanIndonesia’s

at97deathsper1000comparedto87inIndonesia.

Thefirstchartbelowshowstheresultsofasurveywhichsampledacross-sectionof100,000peopleaskingiftheytraveledabroadandwhytheytraveledfortheperiod1994-98.Thesecondchartshowstheirdestinationsoverthesameperiod.VISITSABROADBYUKRESIDENTSBYPURPOSEOFVISIT(1994-98)19941995199619971998Holiday1524614898178961970320700Business31553188324936393957Visitstofriendsandrelatives26892628277430513181Otherreasons98289610301054990Total2207221610249492744728828

DESTINATIONSOFVISITSABROADBYUKRESIDENTSBYMAINREGION(1994-98)WesternEuropeNorthAmericaOtherareasTotal199419371919178222072199518944914175221610199621877116719052494919972366115592227274471998245191823248628828ThetwotablespresentthemainpurposesanddestinationsofBritishcitizens’travelingabroadfrom1994to1998,byquotingtheresultsofasurveyinwhich100000personsweresampled.VISITSABROADBYUKRESIDENTSBYPURPOSEOFVISIT(1994-98)19941995199619971998Holiday1524614898178961970320700Business31553188324936393957Visitstofriendsandrelatives26892628277430513181Otherreasons98289610301054990Total2207221610249492744728828Ascanbeseenfromthetables,thetopthreereasonsfortravelingoverseasinallfiveyears,indecreasingorderofthenumberofvisits,wereforholidays,business,andvisitingtofriendsandrelatives.Inthemeantime,themostpopulardestinationforUKtravelerswereWesternEurope,followedbyNorthAmerica,whileotherregionsseemedfarlesspopular.DESTINATIONSOFVISITSABROADBYUKRESIDENTSBYMAINREGION(1994-98)WesternEuropeNorthAmericaOtherareasTotal199419371919178222072199518944914175221610199621877116719052494919972366115592227274471998245191823248628828Inaddition,between1994and1998,therehadbeenasteadyincreaseinthetotalnumberofvisitsbyBritishtravelers,exceptfor1995,duringwhichyeartherewasaslightdecreaseinthenumber(from22072in1994to21610).By1998,theoverallgrowthinthetotalnumberofvisitoverthefive-yearperiodwasapproximately30%.Meanwhile,asmightbeexpected,thenumbersofvisitsforeachcategory(eitherbypurposesorbyregions)showgradualbutevidentriseduringthesameperiod,withtheyear1995beingexceptional.Finally,thegrowthinthenumberofvisitsforNorthAmericaappearedmoredramatic,comparedwiththenumberforWesternEuropeandotherareas,perhapssuggestingthatincreasinglymoreUKresidentsprefertoorneedtotraveltoNorthAmerica.

Thechartbelowshowstheamountofleisuretimeenjoyedbymenandwomenofdifferentemploymentstatus.Leisuretimeinatypicalweek:bysexandemploymentstatus,1998-99020406080100Employedfull-timeEmployedpart-timeUnemployedRetiredHousewifeHoursofleisuretimemalesfemalesLeisuretimeinatypicalweek:bysexandemploymentstatus,1998-99020406080100Employedfull-timeEmployedpart-timeUnemployedRetiredHousewifeHoursofleisuretimemalesfemalesOnthecontrary,therewerenofiguresgivenformalespart-timeworkers,butfemalepart-timershad40hoursofleisuretime.What’smore,housewivesenjoyedapproximately54hoursofleisure.Therewerealsonofiguresshowntohousehusbands.

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