Processwriting

AWonderful______ Whichpicturemayshowyourfeelingswhenreferringtowritingacomposition?Lead-inCrazyUnhappy

HappyWhat'syourprobleminwriting?Learnsomeusefulstructuresandexpressionsforwriting.Learnhowtowriteacompositionabouttraveling.Learnhowtoenjoythebeautyofnature.LearningObjectivesAttheendofthisclass,studentsshouldbeableto:AWonderful__________要求：1.請把題目補充完整再作答。2.注意緊扣主題，語義連貫，語句通順，書寫規范。3.不得使用真實姓名和校名，如需使用名字，請用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名統一使用YunnanInternationalSchool.4.字數不少于60字。

【Brainstorm】

Whatcanbewrittenintheblank?Forexample:AWonderfulfriendbookplacemoviestorygiftpartydaytrip【Analysethewritingrequirement】以AWonderfulTrip為例1.文體：本文敘述精彩的旅行，應為____________;2.時態：全文都為回憶過去發生的事情，應該用______________;3.人稱：本文為介紹自己及同伴的旅游，應該用__________________________;記敘文一般過去時第一人稱和第三人稱

【WritingContents】

Howmanypartsshouldbewritten?Andwhatshouldbeincludedineachpart?PartOneBeginning(When,where,who...)PartTwoPartThreeBody(What,how,howlong...)Ending(Howdoyoufeel...)

【WritingSkills】

Whichoneisbetter?A.Iwanttoseeyouagain.B.I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.A.Hisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.B.Tohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.A.IthinkitisinterestingtolearnEnglish.B.IfinditreallyinterestingtolearnEnglish.1.善用詞匯2.活用多種句型她還小，搬不動這么重的箱子。A.Sheisveryyoung.Shecan'tcarrytheheavybox.B.Sheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.C.Sheissoyoungthatshecan'tcarrytheheavybox.D.Sheisnotoldenoughtocarrytheheavybox.3.妙用關聯詞1).表示關聯或遞進and,besides,aswellas,both...and,what'smore,notonly...butalso...2).表示選擇or,either...or...3).表示轉折but,however,although/though,afterall,anyway...4).表示因果because,so,therefore,since,asaresult,for...5).表示結論allinall,inaword,inshort,generallyspeaking...Haveatry!!!

【UsefulStructures】PartOne---Beginning自我介紹Hi,mynameis...;Hello,I'm...過去時間表述Lastweekend;lastsummervacation;afewdaysago...去了北京gotoBeijing;takemetoBeijing;spendaholidayinBeijing;haveawonderfultripinBeijing;enjoyoneselfinBeijing..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewriteyourbeginning:

Lookatthepictures,writedownthekeywordsthatcometoyourmind.Thenchoosesomepicturestodescribeyourtrip.PartTwo---BodyMangshiGoldenToweramazing,beatuful,thousandsofpeople..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewriteyourbody:【UsefulStructures】PartThree---Ending心情happy/excited;tiredbuthappy....收獲enjoynature;relaxoneself;broadenone'shorizon...難以忘懷unforgettable;rememberitforever...期望再來lookforwardto;can'twaitto/canhardlywaitto..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewriteyourending:Self-editingandPeer-editingDirectionforediting:Arethereanymistakesinspellings,tensesorstructures?Isthewritinghaveagoodwordchoice?Isthewritingcreativeandcoherent?Didyouusethevariousstructuresorjustrepeatedones?Demonstrationsomestudents'writingAWonderfulTrip

Hello.I'mGina,astudentinYunnanInternationalSchool.Lastsummervacation,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents. BeijingisthecapitalofChina,ithasaverylonghistoryandattractsmillionsofpeopleeveryyear.Weflewthere,becauseit'sfastandcomfortable.Astheoldsayinggoes,“OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.”So,wewenttotheGreatWallonthefirstday.Itwassoamazingthatittookmybreathaway.WehadagoodtimeinthePalaceMuseumtheotherday.ThereweresomanypeopleandItookalotofphotosthere.Besides,weenjoyedthefamousBeijingroastduck.Itwasre