人教版高中英語讀后續寫

情緒描寫環境描寫情緒描寫包括人物的感受、情緒，是讀后續寫中必不可少的細節描寫之一。合理的情緒描寫與刻畫，可以凸顯人物的性格、人際關系的特征，以及烘托故事高潮，進而突出語篇主題等。因此，合理的情緒描寫在讀后續寫中是非常有必要的。情緒描寫的四種方法例：Lisawasdelightedthatyoucouldstay.你能留下來，麗薩很高興。分析：直接用形容詞delighted表示麗薩開心的心情。1.直接利用恰當的表示情感的形容詞、副詞、名詞或介詞短語等表達人物的喜怒哀樂2.利用環境細節“融情于景”烘托人物的情感例：Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(TheGiftoftheMagi)德拉停止了哭泣，擦干了臉，她站在窗前，一臉沮喪地看著一只灰貓沿著灰籬笆在灰色的后院里散步。（《麥琪的禮物》）分析：句中連續3次使用了形容詞gray，體現了德拉的難受和不開心。例：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.簡看不到路，只能走了很長時間。她爬到一個高處后，轉過身，希望能看到湖泊。令她驚訝的是，除了森林，她什么都看不到，遠處是白雪覆蓋的山頂。她突然意識到自己迷路了。分析：句中turnaround,hopingtoseethelake，通過動作描寫，說明簡滿懷期望；Tohersurprise，利用介詞短語體現簡的吃驚；shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop，寓情于景，體現簡的無望和失落。3.利用恰當的動作描寫反映人物的情緒例1：“Absolutely!”repliedJohn,excitementshininginhiseyes.約翰答道：“一定！”，他興奮得兩眼放光。分析：利用名詞excitement和獨立主格結構，描寫約翰的興奮激動。4.利用高級句式和修飾成分細化感情細節例2：Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.熊怒火中燒，開始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍擊護欄。分析：利用so…that倒裝句型，描寫熊生氣的樣子。情緒描寫語料積累1.喜樂高分詞塊：inagoodmood心情很好beallsmiles喜笑顏開incheerful/highspirits興高采烈betickledpink非常高興roarwithlaughter放聲大笑inseventhheaven極為高興sb’sfacelightsup喜形于色beamwithpleasure喜不自勝1.喜樂高分詞塊：beassweetashoney像蜜一樣甜grinfromeartoear滿面笑容bewildwithjoy/delight欣喜若狂dancefor/withjoy手舞足蹈onthetopoftheworld心滿意足brightenone’sheart使某人心情愉快toone’sdelight/joy令某人開心的是beseizedbyjoy歡欣鼓舞精彩好句：Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Hestoodbythedoor,withjoybeamingfromhiseyes.他站在門邊，眼睛里放出喜悅的光彩。Hesoonreturned,hiswholefacebeamingwithdelight.他很快就回來了，臉上洋溢著喜悅。1.喜樂根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Learningthechildren’sidea,Mrs.Meredithwasso1.

(高興的)thatshesmiledbrightly.Then,thechildrengotdowntopreparingpopcorn2.

(高興地).Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftfortheBernard’s3.

(高興地)tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernard4.

(手舞足蹈),withtearsfillinghiseyes.Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparents5.

(也非常高興).Later,6.

(令他非常高興的是),thepopcornwassotastythatitsoonsoldout.Hesoonreturned,hiswholeface7.

(洋溢著喜悅).8.

(笑聲在房間里縈繞).overjoyedcheerfullyjoyfullydancedwithjoywerealsoseizedbyjoybeamingwithdelightmuchtohisdelightLaughterlingeredaroundtheroom2.激動高分詞塊：flushwithexcitement激動得滿臉通紅with/inexcitement激動得conceal/hideone’sexcitement掩飾激動toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激動的是ascreamofthrill/excitement激動的尖叫聲containone’sexcitement抑制某人內心的激動aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮精彩好句：2.激動Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動，難以成聲。Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發。Theboystopped,hisheartthumpingwithexcitementandanticipation.男孩停住了腳步，他的心怦怦直跳，充滿了興奮和期待。Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個消息，一陣激動的戰栗傳到她的胃里。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮得不能自已。根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnewtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1.

(媽媽激動不已).Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2.

(抑制她內心的激動),andwould3.

(振奮起來)likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround4.

(興奮地).Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5.

(激動得尖叫起來),Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent.6.

(我們的眼里閃著激動的光芒),wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.awaveofexcitementtakingholdofMomcontainherexcitementcheerupwithexcitementlettingoutascreamofthrillWithoureyestwinkingwithexcitement3.悲傷高分詞塊：agloomyfeeling一種悲傷的情緒becutup傷心極了breakone’sheart傷心絕望bereducedtotears流淚cryone’sheart/eyesout悲痛欲絕withasinkingheart心情沉重feelblue情緒低落downinthedumps心情很難受3.悲傷高分詞塊：精彩好句：3.悲傷根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Iwasselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.ButIwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Onthedayofthecontest,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyselfandsufferedfromstagefright.IntheendIwalkedoffthestage,1.

(眼里飽含淚水).Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.Ididnotwinanyprizes.Ibitmybottomlip2.

(心里充滿悲傷).Idraggedmyheavylegs3.

(心情沉重地)andmovedoutofthelecturehall.4.

(我傷心地垂著頭，巨大的悲傷模糊了我的雙眼).Onenteringtheclassroom,5.

(悲傷如潮涌，淚水從臉頰滑落）.Thenextfollowingdays,6.

(我感覺正漂浮在悲傷的海洋里),notwantingtodoanything.myeyesfillingwithtearswithsadnessfillingmyheartwithasinkingheartIhungmyheadinsadness,greatsorrowcloudingmyeyesSadnesscameinwavesandtearsstreameddownmycheeksIfeltlikeIwasfloatinginanoceanofsadness4.恐懼高分詞塊：bestruckwithfear被恐懼擊中fearcreepsoversb.恐懼籠罩著某人one’sfaceturnspale臉色變白behalfdeadwithfear嚇得半死scare/frighten…todeath把……嚇死strikefearintothehearts使膽戰心驚shake/tremblewithfear/terror嚇得發抖bescaredoutofone’swits被嚇得魂不附體afloodoffearwellsupinsb.從心底感到害怕standrootedtothespotwithfear嚇得呆若木雞shakealloverinacoldsweat渾身發抖，冒冷汗精彩好句：4.恐懼Iaminfearandalmostscaredtodeath.我很害怕，幾乎要被嚇死了。Hewassofrightenedthathiskneesknockedtogether.他嚇得兩腿直哆嗦。Theideaofbeingleftaloneinthedarkbighousemadeherhairstandonend.她一想到要獨自被留在那所黑暗的大房子里，就毛骨悚然。Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.當看到那只兇惡的狼時，我嚇呆了，不敢動彈。Mollyfeltthatthebloodinherbodyfrozerapidlyatthesightofthedarkfigureoutsidetheglassdoor.莫莉看到玻璃門外的黑影，感覺體內的血液好像迅速凝固起來。根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.1.

(恐懼噴薄而出，將我緊緊包圍),andIwasunabletomoveaninch.2.

(驚慌失措中，我覺得兩腿發抖，手心冒汗).Besidemewasmywife,3.

(她被嚇得魂不附體).Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,4.

(她嚇得要死).Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.5.

(我們感覺渾身血液凝固了)rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.AburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspowerExtremelyfrightened,IfeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweatingwhowasscaredoutofherwitsshewasnearlydeadwithfrightWefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze5.憤怒高分詞塊：beinapassion在盛怒中flyintoafury勃然大怒resist/containone’sanger抑制怒火flushwithanger氣紅了臉makeone’sbloodboil使某人憤怒flyoffthehandle大發雷霆tremblewithanger氣得發抖aburstofanger一股怒火sb.’sfacefalls/darkens臉沉/黑了下來explodewithanger勃然大怒5.憤怒高分詞塊：betongue-tiedwithanger氣得說不出話來setoffone’sanger讓某人生氣fuelone’sanger使某人更加憤怒stormout/into氣沖沖地離開/闖入stampone’sfeetinanger生氣地跺腳hittheceiling/roof怒火沖天shake/boilwithanger/rage怒火中燒blowupatsb.沖某人發火bered-cheekedwithanger氣得臉通紅getmadatsb.生某人的氣精彩好句：Sheflewintoahowlingrage.她暴跳如雷。Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他連呼吸都噴著火焰和怒氣。Helookedasifheweregoingtoburstwithanger.他看上去快要氣炸了。Hegraspedthethinginbothhands,atideofrageburninginhisheart.他雙手抓著那東西，一股怒火在心中燃燒。Theteacherhadafacelikethunderwhenthechildrenbrokethewindowwhileplaying.孩子們玩耍時打碎了窗戶，老師怒不可遏。5.憤怒根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Thedooropenedandayoungmancamein.Shockedtoseeuspackingthingsintooursuitcase,theyoungman1.

(憤怒地大叫了一聲，眼里閃爍著惱怒的光).2.

(他大發雷霆)andwasstampingabout.Heaccusedusofillegallyenteringhisroomandthreatenedtocallthepolice,whichscaredmychildrentodeath.Justatthatmoment,myhusbandreturnedafterhisgroceryshopping.Hearingtheman’srudewords,3.

(一股怒火在他的心中燃燒).Itseemedthatnosettlementwouldbepossible,andthesituationreachedaboilingpoint.4.

(爭吵如火上澆油，于是他就像火山一樣爆發了).Eventually,5.

(無法抑制心中的怒氣),myhusbandstormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.letoutayellofanger,withhiseyesshiningwithannoyanceHewasinafuriouspassionatideofrageburninginhisheartQuarrelsfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcanounabletocontainhisanger6.驚訝高分詞塊：精彩好句：Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.驚愕的表情在她的臉上蔓延開來。Itamazesmethatnoonethoughtoftheidea.讓我驚訝的是沒人想到過這個主意。Asparkofsurpriseflashesacrosshereyes.她的眼中閃過一絲震驚。Thewholebuildingshaking,Rachelstoodinherbedroomstiffeningwithshock.整個屋子都在搖晃，瑞秋嚇得站在臥室里僵住了。ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment.我一打開盒子，就驚奇地睜大了眼睛。6.驚訝根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming“Iwantthattelephone”overandoveragain.AlltheChristmasshopperslookedon1.

(震驚地).2.

(我的媽媽臉上閃過一絲驚愕),sheorderedangrily,“Getuprightnow.”Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltantrum.3.

(令我震驚的是)mymothersuddenlylaydownbesidemeonthefloor,likewisekickingandscreamingoutforastringofsuchitemsasshewaseagertopossess.Seeingthat,4.

(我呆住了，動彈不得).Alltheon-lookersgluedtheireyestous,5.

(驚掉下巴).Dumbfoundedinitially,theythenburstintothunderousapplause,showeringpraiseonmymother.inastonishmentAsparkofsurpriseflashedacrossmymother’sfaceWhatshockedmewasthatIwasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtothegroundwithjawsdroppingtotheground7.緊張高分詞塊：holdone’sbreath屏住呼吸pacebackandforth來回踱步swallowhard強咽口水onpinsandneedles如坐針氈allofaflutter焦慮不安losesleepoversth.為某事擔憂getstrungup非常緊張putsb.onedge讓某人感到緊張不安7.緊張高分詞塊：withone’sheartinone’smouth提心吊膽的murmurinatremblingvoice用顫抖的聲音小聲喃喃stammer/stutterunderone’sbreath結結巴巴地小聲說one’sheartfliesinto/isinone’smouth心提到嗓子眼兒have/feelbutterfliesinone’sstomach心里感到忐忑不安hide/conceal/holdbackone’snervousness/anxiety掩飾緊張/焦慮精彩好句：Mylipsquivered,bigtearsrollingdowncheeks.我的嘴唇顫抖著，大顆的眼淚順著臉頰滾落。Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，頭腦一片空白。Icouldn’tsleepbutkepttossingandturninginbedallnight.我徹夜在床上輾轉反側不能成眠。Hespokethroughclenchedteeth,strugglingtokeephisvoicesteady.他咬緊牙關說話，努力保持聲音穩定。Standinginfrontoftheline,Emilyfeltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.站在隊伍的前面，艾米麗感到喉嚨緊繃，手心出汗。7.緊張根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。WhenIfinishedmytestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.1.

(我在床上輾轉反側了一整夜，無法入睡).Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschooland2.

(緊張地)glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,3.

(感覺好像我的心都提到嗓子眼兒了).There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmyname.Inspired,Ipracticedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.WhenIwasstandingbackstage,4.

(緊張感席卷全身).Whenmynamewascalled,Icould5.

(感到心里忐忑不安).Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould6.

(感到手心冒汗，心跳加速).Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore7.

(不安的).8.

(我的心撲通撲通地好像要跳出來了).Atthatmoment,myeyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,whichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,theauditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers.Icouldn’tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenightnervouslyfeelingasifmyheartwereinmymouthnervousnesscamefloodingovermefeelbutterfliesinmystomachfeelmypalmssweatingandmyheartracinguneasyMyheartwaspoundinghard,asifitwereabouttopop8.羞愧高分詞塊：bestruckdeadwithshame尷尬得要死blushwithembarrassment難為情得臉紅hideone’sembarrassment掩飾某人的尷尬feelthebloodrush/rushingtoone’sface感到臉陣陣發燙beoverwhelmed/burdened/consumed/wildwithshame羞愧極了精彩好句：Herfacewashotwithshame.她羞得臉上火辣辣的。Shewascoveredwithshameatherfailure.她對自己的失敗感到無比慚愧。Hecametomyoffice,shamefaced,toapologize.他一臉愧色，到我辦公室來道歉。Withmyfaceburning,Idon’tknowwheretostart.臉上滾燙，我不知道該從何說起。Soshamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到非常羞愧，覺得臉上陣陣發燙。8.羞愧根據提示，將下面的語篇補充完整。Bynowwewerestandinginthelongholidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming“Iwantthattelephone”overandoveragain.“Becky,you’dbettergetupatonce,”mymothersaidwithatremblingvoice,1.

(漲紅的臉上寫滿了窘迫).Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltan