課題續寫情感描寫指導積極情緒描寫（Continuationwriting）教學課時第1課時教學目標Aftertakingthislesson,studentswillbeableto：1.familiarwithcontinuationwritingstepsandtechniques;2.mastersomeusefulexpressionsaboutpositiveemotions.教學重難點Teachingkeyanddifficultpoints:GetstudentstofullyunderstandtheexpressionsGuidestudentstomastertheexpressionsaboutpositiveemotionsandmakeuseincontinuationwriting;教學方法1.municativeteachingmethod2.Activitybased

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method3.Individuallearning4.Cooperativelearning學情分析’sworse,thereisalotplotsincontinuationwritingbiningmixedemotionalexpressionsandstudentsalwaysfailtoexpresstheemotioncorrectly.教學過程二次備課（方法手段、改進建議）TeachingproceduresStep1:LeadinTeacherguidesstudentstofamiliarwithcontinuationwriting.Step2:presentation知識點一開心、高興的常用詞、句詞組類：incheerfulspirits心情愉快；becontentwith對...感到滿意；bedelightedat對...很高興；setone'sheartatrest使某人安心；brightensb'sheart使某人心情愉快；bepowerfullyattractedto被強烈地吸引；bejoyfulover/about因...而高興；dance/jumpforjoy高興地跳起來；tearsofhappinessflowingdown流下幸福的淚水；asatisfiedlook/anencouragingexpressionappearedonherface滿意的表情/一個令人鼓舞的表情出現在她的臉龐上；【精彩典例】1.（湖南師范大學附屬中學20232024學年高三摸底考試）MychildrenhappilyacceptedandwarmlytookSteventovisithisnewhomeanddiscussedmakingroomforSteven.我的孩子們高興地接受了邀請，并熱情地帶史蒂文去他的新家，討論為史蒂文騰出空間。2.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.他容光煥發。3.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。4.Asmileplayedaroundhismouth.他的嘴角掛著一絲笑意。5.Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。6.Theyranaroundaftereachother,theirfacesirradiatedwithjoy.他們互相追逐著，臉上充滿了喜悅。7.Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高興得難以形容。8.Iwasoverjoyedandranthreestepsatonce.我欣喜若狂，三步并作兩步就跑了過去。9.Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。10.Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。11.Iwasfloatingonair.我高興得飄飄然。12.Flowersaresmilingbrightly,birdsarecryingjoyfully.Myheartisassweetashoney.花兒在微笑，鳥兒在快樂地鳴叫，我的心情就像吃了蜜一樣的甜。13.WhenIturnedaround,IfoundJohnwasgrinning.我轉過身時,發現約翰正咧著嘴笑。知識點二興奮、激動的常用詞、句詞組類：feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness感覺既興奮又開心；canhardlyconcealhisexcitement幾乎無法掩飾他的興奮的心情；quiteflushedwithexcitement激動的滿臉通紅；toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激動的是；conceal/healone’sexcitement難掩激動；containone’sexcitement抑制內心的激動；aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮；ascreamofthrill/excitement激動的尖叫聲；cheerup振奮起來；【精彩典例】1.（廣東省六校20232024學年高三聯考試題）NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeedassignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirstpublicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.在我最瘋狂的夢中，我從來沒有想過我確實被分配了實習工作，在學校生活節目中表演，而我第一次在電視上公開露面是在五天內。2.（2024屆浙江省強基聯盟適應性考試試題）Hejumpedhighandhuggedeveryteammateexcitedly.Everyonecouldseetearswellinginhiseyes.他高高地跳起來，興奮地擁抱著每個隊友。每個人都能看到他的淚水。3.（2024屆江蘇省蘇州市南京師大實驗學校調研）Atthenews,Davehadtoholdbackhistearsofjoyandcouldn'thelpjumpingup.聽到這個消息，戴夫不得不忍住喜悅的眼淚，忍不住跳了起來。4.Herfaceisred,excitementintheheart,asadeerjumpingwithjoy.她激動的滿臉通紅，心里像有只小鹿，在歡樂地蹦跳。5.Therewasasparkleofexcitementinhereyes.她的眼中閃爍著激動的光芒。6.Iwassoexcitedinside,likearoughsea.我內心十分激動，像波濤洶涌的大海一樣。知識點三美好事物的描寫1.（2024屆廣東省四校高三第一次聯考試題）Withthesunpeekingoverthehorizon,John’sfaceglowedwithgratitude.太陽在地平線上掠過，約翰的臉上洋溢著感激之光。2.Therearemanykindsofflowersbloomingintheeroftheparkeveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公園里都開滿了各式各樣的鮮花，香氣伴著微風四處彌漫。多么香甜啊!3.Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飄在藍天中,就像安靜的魚兒在廣闊的海洋中暢游。4.Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛藍色的天空和成群飄動的金色云朵所吸引了。5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點點的云雀在翩翩飛舞。6.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽下山,溫和的光線落在肩頭。Step3:practiceTeacherasksstudentstomakesentencebyusingtheexpressionsintheclassandshareingroups.Step4:consolidationTeacherguidesstudentstosummarizethecontentlearnedinthislesson.板書設計Continuationwriting積極情緒描寫知識點一開心、高興的常用詞、句dance/jumpforjoy；tearsofhappinessflowingdown；asatisfiedlook/anencouragingexpressionappearedonherfacehappilyacceptedandwarmlytook知識點二興奮、激動的常用詞、句feelamixtureofexcitementandhappinessaripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitementascreamofthrill/excitementcheerup知識點三美好事物的描寫Withthesunpeeki