怎樣讓書面表達(dá)文采飛揚(yáng)05高考英語書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則4：評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。第5檔（20——25分）：②應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

③語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力1.多實(shí)少虛:nice2.短語優(yōu)先：Icannotbearit.Iwantit.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitalIcannotputupwithit.Iamlookingforwardtoit.３棄舊取新:Ｗeallhavethesamechance.Therearemoreopponents.1.較高級(jí)詞匯possessopportunityexist學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。1.It’sverydangerousforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic.2.Studentsareriskingtheirliveswhenthreadingtheirwayamongcars.社會(huì)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對(duì)學(xué)生的交通安全教育。1.Thestudentsshouldbetaughtmoreaboutthetrafficsafety.2.Andalsoitisofgreatusetostrengthenthesafetyeducationoverthestudents.較高級(jí)詞匯(Exercises1)較高級(jí)詞匯(Exercises2)1.Weallthinkheisagreatman.2.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.3.Shewentthereinordertostudymusic.4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.Weallofhim.Theplantobeafailure.Shewentthere

studyingmusic.Ourschooltwenty–sixclassrooms.Thinkhighlyturnedoutforthepurposeofismadeupof較高級(jí)詞匯(Exercises3)5.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.6.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.7.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.You’llfindingmyhouse.Agoodideatome.thegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.havenotroubleAgoodideasuddenlyme.Thankstooccurredstruck非謂語各種從句with復(fù)合賓語倒裝獨(dú)立主格虛擬等等強(qiáng)調(diào)句型運(yùn)用多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)，句式靈活多變，可以使文章增色不少。2.豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises1)1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）3.Hecameinandtherewasababyinhisarms.(用with結(jié)構(gòu)),pleasegivemeane-mail.isthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.OnhisarrivingWhatsurpriseshimHecamein,

withababyinhisarms.4.(由于不知道他的電話，他沒法跟Mary聯(lián)系)(用非謂語）5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)

6.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.(使用倒裝）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat，hecan’tgetintouchwithTom

Notknowinghistelephonenumber

heknewwhathadhappened.豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises2)Tomlikessingingsongs,Mary.sodoes7.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（使用句型結(jié)構(gòu)）9.Becausetheweatherisfine,manypeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternhill.（使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）

bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.hespoke,excitedhefelt.豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises3)FollowedThemorethemoreTheweatherbeingfine一篇好的書面表達(dá)，還應(yīng)該行文連貫流暢，具有“邏輯美”。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊，使文章更為地道，更具“英語味”。記得使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，如:soon,immediately,suddenly,infrontof,nextto,ononehand,ontheotherhand,however,

though,otherwise,thanksto,asaresult(of),solongas,onconditionthat,

evenif/though,

what’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow…3.恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞1.Thisvillageisverysmall.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.

However,ithaschangedalotsince1978.LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalace.Theysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.

LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalacewhentheysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Withoutdelay,theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.

3.Yesterday，therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.

Yesterday，apolicemanstoppedacar－Hondaatthecornerofthestreet，

because

itnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.2.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.飛讓文采揚(yáng)達(dá)表面書語意要合情合理，過渡自然語句要有簡有繁，隨“意”而安語法要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，無懈可擊語言要地道流暢，書寫規(guī)范聯(lián)考書面表達(dá)欣賞：MakingEveryDayEarthDayAscanbeseenfromthebriefdialogue,theearthsuffersalotfromman’sbehaviouratpresent.Therearemanyproblems.Forinstance,wehumanbeingsaredestroyingtoomanytrees,whichleadstoairpollution.Besides,pollutedwaterissentintoriversdirectlywithoutbeingdealtwith.Furthermore,fewpeopleareawareofsuchproblemswhilemostofustakethemforgranted.聯(lián)考書面表達(dá)欣賞：However,ontheEarthDay,somemeasuresaretakentocarefortheearth.Notonlydopeoplespreadtheideaofprotectingtheearth,butalsosomethingwillbedone,suchasdealingwithrubbish,recyclingusedbatteryandsoon.Butthatisfarfromenough.IstronglycalloneveryonetotreateverydayastheEarthDayandtakecareoftheeartheveryday.Onlyinthiswaycanwehopeforabetterhometolivein.

Homework:聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：

1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。

聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：

1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Practice書面表達(dá)：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.書面表達(dá)：Nowitistakingonanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallone

with/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②

However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.

④

Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤

andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦

andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧

whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifulone

inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨

What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.

⑩

Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

2001年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。

Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclassesev