1、Unit 1 Making Friends WritingOxford English 7A深圳市南山外國語學校（集團）科華學校 林祉珺Learning objectives123Use a mind map to brainstorm before writing. Write an email to describe a person.Learn the steps of writing an email in English.Warming up:Listen and thinkWarming up:cultural exchange touronline learning websit

2、esocial activities: sports; clubsListen and think：How can I make friends with people across the world ?Lets get to know a new friend.Warming up:Look and guess!Bobby is from _.He has _ hair.He lives with his parents, grandfather, two _ and one _.He takes the _ to school every day. His dream is to be

3、a _ engineer.His favourite sport is _.He also likes watching _ but he _ like _.Warming up:the USshort/yellowbrotherssisterBobbybuscomputerplaying basketballTVdoesntlistening to musicpause按下暫停鍵思考并填空Lets learn how to write an email!Recently Bobby is learning to write an email because he wants to make

4、some _ across the world.Writing task:e-friendsWriting steps:Get ready! (寫作準備)123Get set! (素材積累)Go! (動筆吧)Three stepsGet ready! (寫作準備)Tips:What do I want to say? How do I want to say it? Who is going to read my writing? What tone should I use? Step 1:To tell people about myself.By writing an email.My

5、e-friend.CasualYou can use contractions, e.g. hes/shes, doesnt.You can make use of exclamation marks(!) to show enthusiasm and emotion.Get ready! (寫作準備)Senders _email addressFriendly greetingBodyFriendly closingRecipients email address_Senders nameText type: Personal emailStep 1：AJDear Anna,Hi! I sa

6、w your blog on the Internet and Id like to be your e-friend. Myname is Jason. Im 12 years old. Im tall. I have short, black hair.I live in a flat in Beijing with my parents. My dad is an engineer and mymum is an English teacher.My school is far away from our home. I go to school by bus. My favourite

7、subject is Maths. I like my school and I have lots of friends there.I like flying kites in my free time. My favourite sports are volleyball andfootball.I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes,JasonGet set! (素材積累)Brainstorm ideas using a mind map. Use correct (and a wide range of ) phrases and expre

8、ssions.Step 2:About yourselfAbout your family and homeAbout your schoolAbout your personalities or other interesting informationAbout your hobbiesGet set! (素材積累)Step 2:Brainstorm ideas using a mind map pause按下暫停鍵，畫出思維導圖What does Bobby write to make friends?About yourselfGet set! (素材積累)Step 2:Useful

9、expressionsName: My name is Bobby. Im Bobby.Age: Im 13 years old. Im a 13-year-old boy.Country: Im from America. I was born in New York, USA.Height: Im tall. Im tall and slim.Look: I have short hair. I am a boy with short and yellow hair.with (prep.) e.g. Who is that boy with big eyes? pause按下暫停鍵，同義

10、替換，使句子表達多樣性About your family and homeStep 2:Members: I have two brothers and one sister. I have a big family. I live with my brothers and sister.Parents job: My dad is a doctor. My dad has a rewarding job as a doctor.Where you live: We live in a house near New York city. Our house is near New York c

11、ity.Pet: My dog Billy is cute.I have a lovely dog called Billy.Get set! (素材積累)Useful expressionspause按下暫停鍵，同義替換，使句子表達多樣性Writing Tip：Change the subject(主語) of a sentence.About your schoolStep 2:Where : My school is far from our home. I go to school by bus. It takes me 15 mins to get to school by bus

12、every day.Subject: I like Maths. My favourite subject is Maths.dream: I want to be an engineer. My dream is to be an engineer.Get set! (素材積累)Useful expressions冠詞：an artist; an author; an interpreter a scientist; a writer; a police officer pause按下暫停鍵，同義替換，使句子表達多樣性About your hobbiesStep 2:like: I enjo

13、y playing basketball. I am good at playing basketball.dislike: I dont like listening to music. I am not interested in listening to music.Get set! (素材積累)Useful expressionsWriting Tip：Use correct phrasese.g. like= be interested in/ be fond of / be crazy aboutpause按下暫停鍵，同義替換，使句子表達多樣性About your personal

14、ities or other interesting informationStep 2:I am energetic and cheerful.I can speak French and German.Get set! (素材積累)Useful expressionsAbout yourselfAbout your family and homeAbout your schoolAbout your personalities or other interesting informationAbout your hobbiesname: My name is /Im age: Im yea

15、rs old.country: Im from/ I was born inheight: Im short/tall.look: I have long/short/straight/curly/yellow hair. I have a round face and wear glasses.members: I havebrothers/sisters. I am a single child./ My grandmother lives with us. parents jobs: My dad is an engineerwhere you live: We live in/near

16、pet: My dog Billy is cute.location: My school is far from our home. I go to school by bus.subject: My favorite subject is dream: My dream is to be a /I want to be aMy favorite sports are/ I enjoy /My other hobbies areI dont likeI am energetic.I can speak five languages.Get set! (素材積累)Step 2:Step 3：G

17、o! (動筆吧！)Draft handwritingformatEditgrammarspellingDraft and EditABDear Anna,My name is Bobby. Id like to be you e-friend. Im from the US. Im short. I have short hair.I have a big family. My grandfather live withus. I have two elder brothers and one younger sister. We live in a house near New York C

18、ity.My school is very big. Its far from our house.I take the bus to school every day with my brothers. I like my school. My dream is to be a engineer.My favourite sport is playing basketball.I like swiming too. My other hobbiesare watching TV and reading books. I dont likelistening to music.Best wis

19、hes,BobbyStep 3：Go! (動筆吧！)Lets help Bobby to correct the mistakes.Theres one error in each paragraph.pause按下暫停鍵，修改文章錯誤ABobby Dear Anna,My name is Bobby. Id like to be you youre-friend. Im from the US. Im short. I haveshort hair.I have a big family. My grandfather live lives withus. I have two elder

20、brothersand one younger sister. We livein a house near New York City.My school is very big. Its far from our house.I take the bus to school every day with my brothers. I like my school. My dream is to be a an engineer.My favourite sport is playing basketballI like swiming swimming too. My other Hobb

21、ies are watching TV and reading books. I dont like listening to music.Best wishes,BobbyStep 3：Go! (動筆吧！)Draft and EditWriting task：假如你是Jack，你在某英語學習網站上看到了Linda發布的求友信息。請你根據下列給出的思維導圖，給Linda寫一封郵件，表明自己想要和她成為朋友的意愿，并介紹自己的基本情況。要求：1. 包括以上所有信息，可適當發揮，使文章意思連貫，條理清楚;2. 不少于60詞(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數)。To: Linda From: JackHi! I saw your post from an online learning website. _,JackFriendly openingId like to Friendly closingBest wishesCheersYours sincerelyTo: Linda From: JackHi! I saw your post from an online learning website. _,Jack假如你是Jack，你在某英語學習網站上看到了Linda發布的求友信息。請你根據下列給出的思維導圖，給Linda寫一封郵件，表明自己想要和