1、詞匯句詞匯句型升級型升級Writing Writing從改卷員的角度從改卷員的角度 誤解：高分誤解：高分=讀起來是好文章讀起來是好文章 正解：高分正解：高分=看起來像好文章看起來像好文章如何改卷：如何改卷：A.抓壯丁心態(tài)抓壯丁心態(tài)B.每天每天500篇以上篇以上C.5篇范文對照（篇范文對照（2、5、8、11、14分）分）D.掃兩點（錯點掃兩點（錯點&亮點）亮點）Writing關鍵三步關鍵三步 1.1.減少失誤（拼寫、語法、字跡）減少失誤（拼寫、語法、字跡） 2.2.語言升級語言升級- -詞匯和句型詞匯和句型 一、詞匯準確多變一、詞匯準確多變- -高級詞匯高級詞匯 二、句子變化多樣二、句子

2、變化多樣- -句型、語序、語態(tài)句型、語序、語態(tài) 3.3.多用關聯詞多用關聯詞詞匯句詞匯句型升級型升級Words, my swords!改，桑田變滄海改，桑田變滄海Writing詞句升級的詞句升級的重要性重要性 開頭句開頭句大眾臉大眾臉： With the development of science and technology, our life is more and more convenient. 開頭句開頭句明星臉明星臉： our life is of increasing convenience. 開頭句開頭句巨星臉巨星臉： the convenience of our daily

3、 life is on the rise.詞匯句詞匯句型升級型升級Words, my swords!詞匯升級詞匯升級16組組1.名詞化名詞化舉例舉例uThe bicyle is important for us. uThe bicyle is of importance for us.uThe bicyle plays an important role in our life. uThe bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.舉例舉例uAs far as I am co

4、ncerned. uAs far as I am firmly concerned.uAs far as the private cars are concerned, I firmly believe that 舉例舉例uI am offering thanks to my parents. uI am, from my bottom heart, offering my gratitude to my loving parents. 遣詞-N個“惡心”詞匯名詞：名詞：npeoplendisadvantagenadvantagenviewngovernmentngoalndevelopmen

5、tWriting表達表達“人們人們” 萬惡的萬惡的“people” Some people believe that education is important. Other people do not agree. because no people can grow without it. 1.1 1.1 直接去掉直接去掉 peoplepeople Some believe that education is important. Others do not agree. because none can grow without it.Writing1. 表達表達“人們人們” 1.2

6、“人們人們”作作主語主語的時候的時候 翻譯：一些人認為電子書對孩子是有好處的。翻譯：一些人認為電子書對孩子是有好處的。 Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for kids. Individuals/ folksWriting1. 表達表達“人們人們” 1.3 表達表達“在人們中在人們中” 這個問題引起了人們熱烈的討論。這個問題引起了人們熱烈的討論。 This has aroused hot discussion among people. the society the general public.Writing1. 表達表達“人們人

7、們” 1.4 當當“人們人們”與與“自然自然”相對的時侯相對的時侯 翻譯：人與自然的和諧共處翻譯：人與自然的和諧共處 Harmonious coexistence between people and nature human beings mankindWriting1. 表達表達“人們人們” 1.5 表達表達“年輕人年輕人”時時 young people The young people should shoulder the burden of developing our country. adolescents youthsWriting1. 表達表達“人們人們” Summary p

8、eople 1.1 直接去掉直接去掉 1.2 the society/ the general public 1.3 individuals/ folks 1.4 human beingWriting二、二、 表達表達“優(yōu)點優(yōu)點” advantage merits / virtue/ benefit/ strong points take advantage of sth? make full use of sths merits /virtue Writing二二. 表達表達“優(yōu)點優(yōu)點” merit /virtue 翻譯：我認為兩種意見都有好處而且可以共存。翻譯：我認為兩種意見都有好處而且可

9、以共存。 I believe that both views have their own _ and can coexist. merits/ virtuesWriting二二. 表達表達“缺點缺點” disadvantage demerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming 拖后腿？壞處？代價？短板？瑕疵？拖后腿？壞處？代價？短板？瑕疵？Writing二二. 表達表達“缺點缺點” demerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming 翻譯：我認為我們應該利用互聯網的好處而避免翻譯：我認為我們應該利用互聯網的好處而避免它的壞處。它的壞處。 From

10、 my point of view, it is wise to take advantage of internet while minimizing its drawbacks.Writing三三. 表達表達“觀點觀點” view view，opinion There are two opinions about this topic. perspective, standpoint , outlookWriting表達表達 “government” government The government should take effective measures to stop it. a

11、uthority/ authorities Its time for the universities to The university authoritiesWriting表達表達“goal” goal Our main goal in universities is to develop our academic performance. objective; ambition; target; destination; intention; aim; purpose;Writing表達表達“development” development With the rapid developm

12、ent of society modernization, globalization, industrialization 遣詞-N個“惡心”詞匯動詞：動詞：nthink encouragencause knownexpectntry/ want to do sth努力、打算努力、打算nfinish, complete完成完成nlike, be interested in喜歡喜歡nwill/ would ndisagree with 我想，認為，覺得，思考，。：我想，認為，覺得，思考，。：think harbor the idea that take the attitude that ho

13、ld the view that it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged thatWriting低分：低分：高分：高分：(2）句子，句子，as I am firmly convinced. (3) It can be assumed/concluded that+從句從句例句：例句：I think we shouldnt judge others by their looksWe shouldnt judge others by their looks, as I am firmly convinced. It can b

14、e concluded that we should 表達表達“認為認為”Writing表達：表達：“努力，想要做某事努力，想要做某事” want/ try to do I want/ try to pass the CET-4 this semester. endeavor to do sth. do ones utmost to do sth. spare no effort in doing sth. be motivated to do sth. be inspired to do sth. be willing (determined ) to do sth. be encourag

15、ed to do sth.Writing表達：表達：“喜歡喜歡” like, be interested in I like/ am interested in reading books in the spare time. be obsessed/preoccupied with, be fascinated by, be addicted to; exerts a tremendous fascination on sb sth. appeals to sb., sth. , Writing表達表達“將會將會” will/ would? 翻譯：石油資源會在未來幾十年被耗盡。翻譯：石油資源

16、會在未來幾十年被耗盡。 Petrol resource will be used up in a few decades. 6.1 is likely to 6.2 tends toWritingExercise 1 翻譯：大多數人認為，英語會變得更重要。翻譯：大多數人認為，英語會變得更重要。 Most people think that English will become more important. According to most individuals, the significance of English tends to increase. 遣詞-N個“惡心”詞匯形容詞：

17、形容詞：nimportantngood nBadnMany,more and morenhelpfulndifferentWriting表達表達“重要重要” 1 表達表達“重大，顯著重大，顯著” 翻譯：翻譯：iPod是蘋果公司最重大的發(fā)明之一是蘋果公司最重大的發(fā)明之一 One of the most _ inventions of Apple company is iPod. significant remarkable predominantWriting表達表達“重要重要” 2 表達表達“關鍵的關鍵的” 翻譯：勤奮是成功的關鍵翻譯：勤奮是成功的關鍵 Hard work is _ to su

18、ccess. essentialWriting表達表達“重要重要” 3 表達表達“不可或缺不可或缺” 翻譯：數碼產品已經成為日常生活不可或缺的翻譯：數碼產品已經成為日常生活不可或缺的一部分。一部分。 Digital products have become _ in daily life. indispensibleWriting表達表達“重要重要” 4 一個黃金詞組一個黃金詞組 翻譯：互聯網對開闊我們的眼界至關重要。翻譯：互聯網對開闊我們的眼界至關重要。 The Internet plays a _ role in widening our eyes. vital、decisive wide

19、n ones eyes? broaden ones horizonsWriting表達表達“重要重要” 5 一個鉆石句型一個鉆石句型 A is to B what perfume is to a flower. 眾所周知，興趣對于學習至關重要。眾所周知，興趣對于學習至關重要。 As is known to us, interests are to study what perfume is to a flower.Writing表達表達“重要重要” Summary important 1 significant/ remarkable/fundamental 2 essential 3 ind

20、ispensable 4 play critical/ crucial/ vital role 5 A is to B what perfume is to a flower.Writing表達表達“好好” good 1 表達表達“對對有好處有好處” 翻譯：上藝術班對孩子們是有好處的翻譯：上藝術班對孩子們是有好處的 Attending art classes is _good_ for kids. beneficial profitableWriting表達表達“好好” 2 表達表達“好生活、好工作好生活、好工作” decent 抓住這個好機會抓住這個好機會 catch this decent

21、 opportunity 工資待遇好工資待遇好 decent salaryWriting表達表達“好好” 3 表達表達“好主意好主意” a good idea decent wise sensible fascinating fantasticWriting表達表達“好好” 4 表達表達“優(yōu)秀優(yōu)秀”（好學生、好產品）（好學生、好產品） a good student outstanding extraordinaryWriting表達表達“好好” 5 表達表達“A比比B更好更好” A is better than B. A is superior to B. 翻譯：少數服從多數翻譯：少數服從多數

22、 Majority is superior to Minority.Writing 表達表達“壞壞” 1 表達表達“壞的，有不好后果的壞的，有不好后果的” harmful detrimental disastrousWriting表達表達“壞壞” 2 表達表達“A 比比B 壞壞” A is worse than B A is subordinate/ inferior to B.Writing表達表達“許多許多” 翻譯：很多人在金融危機中損失了很多錢。翻譯：很多人在金融危機中損失了很多錢。可數：可數： the vast majority of , the overwhelming majori

23、ty of numerous; an army of；不可數：不可數：mass; a vast amount of An army of investors had lost a vast amount of money in the financial crisis. Numerous investors had gain a mass profit.Writing表達表達“helpful” helpful It is helpful for us to eliminate this phenomenon. beneficial rewarding advantageous表示程度的副詞：表

24、示程度的副詞：very 如：如：very large house extremely large house tremendously large house remarkably large house 表達“現在” Nowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular. currently in contemporary society in this day and age表達“越來越” more and more adj= increasingly adj = n is on the rise more and more n = a growing number of n the number