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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。ThreepairsofeyesallfocusedonthetwoticketstothebigquarterfinalsbasketballgameinDad’shand.Marcus,theoldest,Caleb,theyoungest,andI,noneofusofferedtogiveupthechancetogowithDad.EventuallyDadsaid,“Okay,I’llfigureoutafairwayofchoosingbetweenthethreeofyoubytomorrowmorning.I’lldecidewhodeservesitmost.Letmesleeponit.”Thenextmorning,Marcushurriedintothekitchenandasked,“Where’sDad?”“HeandMomwereout,”Calebanswered,takingabiteofabiscuit.“AndDadsaidweshouldallgetstartedonourSaturdaychoresassoonaswefinishbreakfast,”Iadded.“Chores!Hemustbekidding.”Marcussaidashesetdownhisglassofmilk.“Howcanweconcentrateonchoreswhenthebiggameisamereelevenhoursaway?”“Parents!Theyjustdon’tunderstand!”Iagreed,poppingthelastpieceofbreadintomymouth.“I’mgoingforthemorningnewspaper,”Marcusannounced.“There’sprobablyapreview(預告)oftonight’sgameinthesportssection.”“Waitforme!”Calebadded,slurping(發出咕嚕聲)thelastofhismilkanddashingafterhislittlebrother.Thebackdoorsnappedshutasthetwoboysracedout.Ilookedatthebreakfasttable:tinypuddlesofmilk,bitsofbiscuitshereandthere.Well,Ithoughttomyself,“ItlookslikeSaturdaymorningchoresstartrighthere.”Afewminuteslater,asIwaswashingoffthekitchencountertops,Iheardthefamiliar“thump...thump...thump”ofthebasketballcomingfromoutside.IglancedoutofthekitchenwindowandsawMarcusandCalebwereplayingbasketball.Frustrated,Iknockedonthewindow.Whentheboyslookedup,Iremindedthem,“Comeanddothechores!”“OK,justfivemoreminutes.”Marcusshouted.“Sure.Fivemoreminutes.”Ithoughttomyselfandwentbacktodothehousework.Fiveminutespassedprettysoon.AsIremindedthemofthetime,theyputoffagain.“Justonemoreminute.”IshookmyheadasIbegantoreplacethelidonthegarbagecontainer.Thenaflashofwhiteontheinsideoftheblackplasticlidcaughtmyattention.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Itwasanenvelopewiththebigword“Congratulations!”onthefront.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AstheexhaustedMarcusandCalebenteredthekitchen,Ihelduptheticket,thenoteandtheenvelope.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________籃球比賽門票故事續寫續寫分析第一段通過發現寫有“Congratulations!”的信封及里面的便簽,迅速推進情節,揭示父親設置的考驗,展現“我”從好奇到驚喜、震驚,再到領悟并認真完成剩余家務的心理與行動變化,為后文兄弟間的互動做鋪墊。第二段聚焦兄弟倆看到門票時的反應,從驚訝、失望到羞愧,以及“我”提出建議后的和解,生動呈現人物情感起伏,突出責任感這一主題,使故事在和諧氛圍中收尾。故事線父親提出以公平方式決定誰獲得籃球比賽門票,讓孩子們等待到第二天。第二天早上,孩子們得知要先做家務,可哥哥Marcus和弟弟Caleb一心想著比賽,不斷拖延做家務。“我”在做家務過程中發現垃圾桶蓋內的信封,得知先完成所有家務且展現責任感的人能得到門票,于是認真完成剩余家務。最后Marcus和Caleb進入廚房,看到“我”手中的門票,在“我”的解釋與提議下,大家達成和解,領悟到責任感比門票更重要。情感鋪墊開篇三兄弟對門票的渴望奠定競爭基調。Marcus和Caleb對家務的敷衍與對比賽的急切,凸顯他們的貪玩與缺乏責任感,與“我”的認真形成對比,為“我”獲得門票做情感上的反差鋪墊。當“我”發現信封時的驚喜,以及兄弟倆看到門票時的驚訝、失望,層層遞進,豐富情感層次,使故事更具張力。銜接句JustasIwasabouttocallouttoMarcusandCalebagain,myeyesfellonthemysteriousenvelope,settingthestagefortheunexpecteddiscovery.AfterIfinishedthelastbitofthechores,myheartwaspoundinginanticipationofshowingMarcusandCalebwhatIhadfound.AsMarcusandCalebfinallydraggedthemselvesintothekitchen,theirfacesstillflushedfromplayingbasketball,theyhadnoideawhatawaitedthem.BeforeIcouldexplainindetail,Marcusinterruptedwithalookofconfusion,tryingtomakesenseofthesituation.OnceIhadsharedthecontentofthenote,Caleb'sshouldersslumped,andMarcusletoutasigh,realizingtheirmistake.主旨升華句Thisexperiencetaughtusthattruerewardscomenotfromwinningasimplecompetitionbutfromdemonstratingresponsibilityandmaturityinourdailylives.Thepursuitofthebasketballticketbecameajourneyofself-discovery,showingusthatthevalueofresponsibilityfarexceedsthethrillofagame.Ourfamilylearnedthatmomentsofdisappointmentcanturnintovaluablelessons,andworkingtogetherwithasenseofresponsibilitystrengthensourbonds.Throughthisticket-relatedchallenge,werealizedthatbeingresponsibleisnotjustaboutcompletingtasksbutaboutmakingchoicesthatreflectourvaluesandcontributetothewell-beingofthewholefamily.Thestoryofthebasketballticketservedasapowerfulreminderthatinthegameoflife,theabilitytoberesponsibleistherealwinningtickettoafulfillingandharmoniousfamilylife.寫作示范一Itwasanenvelopewiththebigword“Congratulations!”onthefront.MyhandstrembledasItoreitopen.Thenoteinsideread,“Theticketgoestotheonewhounderstandstheimportanceofresponsibility.Finishthechores,andit'syours.”Arushofexcitementfilledme,butIalsofeltatwingeofguiltformyearlierreluctance.Iquicklysettowork,scrubbingeverycornerofthekitchen,makingsureitwasspotless.AsthetiredMarcusandCalebenteredthekitchen,Iheldupthetickettriumphantly.Theirjawsdropped.“Howdidyougetthat?”Calebexclaimed.Irecountedmydiscovery,andtheirexpressionsturnedsolemn.Marcussaid,“Weshouldhavehelped.Nexttime,let'sdividethechoresanddothemtogether.”Inodded,happywiththenew-foundsenseofunity.Weallagreedthattherealvictorywaslearningtoberesponsible,andwecouldenjoythegameonTVjustasmuch,sharingtheexperienceasafamily.寫作示范二Itwasanenvelopewiththebigword“Congratulations!”onthefront.Curiositygotthebetterofme,andIrippeditopen.Thenotestated,“Responsibilityisthekey.Finishyourchores,andtheticketisyours.”Iwaselatedyetabitembarrassedfornottakingthechoresseriouslyatfirst.Iimmediatelygotdowntobusiness,tidyingupthelivingroomandsweepingthefloors.WhenMarcusandCalebfinallycamein,sweatyfromtheirbasketballgame,Ipresentedtheticket,note,andenvelope.Theireyeswidenedinshock.“Noway!”Marcussaid.AfterIexplained,Caleblookeddowncast,andMarcusapologized.Ismiledandproposed,“Let'smakeachoreschedulefornexttime.Andfortonight,wecanwatchthegameonTVandcheertogether.”Theyagreedwholeheartedly,andwerealizedthatworkingasateamandbeingresponsibleweremoreimportantthanasingletickettoagame.【答案】Itwasanenvelopewiththebigword“Congratulations!”onthefront.“Theticket?”Ithought,asuddenjoyfloodingoverme.Ieagerlytorealongoneedgeoftheenvelopeandreachedinside.Itwasafoldedpieceofpaper,saying,“Let’senjoytonight’sgame!”Unfoldingit,Ifoundaticketinside,whichmademebeoncloudnine.Justthen,theth
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