進階練16圖畫作文（滿分范文）專練（解析版）

學校:姓名：班級：考號：

一、圖畫作文

1.（2022?上海嘉定?高三專題練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

1.文體：夾敘夾議。

2.首先簡要描述圖片內容，然后闡述你認為應該培養孩子們的何種價值觀及理由。

【答案】Asillustratedinthecartoon,whenaskedwheretheywillgoonholiday,thestudentsshoutedtheir

variousoverseasdestinations,oneseeminglyfartherandmorecostlythananother.Thisvividlymanifestsatrend

whereadultsalwaysstrivetobeatotherpeoplebymeansofenjoyingamoreluxuriouslife.Whowillnotfeel

saddenedbythis?Wherechildren'soutlookonlifeisconcerned,weshouldfirstofalltrainthemtobefrugaland

economicalineverydaylife.Meanwhile,childrenshouldbeinstructedwithsuchspiritasindependenceand

diligenceratherthanshowingoffparents'riches.Then,ifanythingcouldbecomparedbetweenchildren,itmust

bewho'smademoreprogressinlearning,whoismorewillingtobehelpfulandmorereadytorespectdiscipline,

teachers,parentsandclassmates.Inthefinalanalysis,childrenshouldbetaughttopursuethejustandjustice

insteadoftheotherwayaround.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文。要求根據下面給出的中文說明，寫一篇120-150字的英語作文。1.

文體：夾敘夾議。2.首先簡要描述圖片內容，然后闡述你認為應該培養孩子們的何種價值觀及理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

教育：instruct—>educate

打敗：beat一defeat

各種各樣的：various-avarietyof

追求：pursue一goafter

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Inthefinalanalysis,childrenshouldbetaughttopursuethejustandjusticeinsteadoftheotherwayaround.

拓展句：Inthefinalanalysis,itisthejustandjusticethatchildrenshouldbetaughttopursueinsteadoftheother

wayaround.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Asillustratedinthecartoon,whenaskedwheretheywillgoonholiday,thestudents

shoutedtheirvariousoverseasdestinations,oneseeminglyfartherandmorecostlythananother.（運用了狀語從

句的省略）

[高分句型2]Thisvividlymanifestsatrendwhereadultsalwaysstrivetobeatotherpeoplebymeansofenjoying

amoreluxuriouslife.（運用了where引導定語從句）

2.（2022秋.河南南陽.高三統考期末）請觀察下圖，描寫圖中人物，闡釋圖畫的內涵，并抒發你的感悟。

注意：1.詞數100左右;

2.題目自擬。

【答案】參考范文：

Icanseetwoboys:oneisfocusedonthelosswhiletheotheriscentredonwhatisleft.Attitudesvaryfrom

persontopersontowardsthings.

Theboyontheleftisfeelingterriblewhenseeingthebottlehasfallentothegroundandthere9shardlyany

waterleft.Onthecontrary,theboyontherightisobviouslyhappytoseethere?sstillsomeleft,forhisfacelights

up.Apparently,oneboyisnegativeandpessimistic,buttheotherispositiveandoptimistic.

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Theoverallmessagewecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayasevery

cloudhasasilverlining.

【導語】這是一篇圖畫作文。要求考生描寫圖中人物，闡釋圖畫的內涵，并抒發自己的感悟。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

因為：as-because

高興的：happy—delighted

乘］下：leave-remain

看見：see-witness

2.句型拓展

同義句

原句：Theoverallmessagewecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayasevery

cloudhasasilverlining.

拓展句：Whatwecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayaseverycloudhasa

silverlining.

【點睛】［高分句型1］Icanseetwoboys:oneisfocusedonthelosswhiletheotheriscentredonwhatisleft.（is

用了what引導的賓語從句）

［高分句型2］Theboyontheleftisfeelingterriblewhenseeingthebottlehasfallentothegroundandthere9s

hardlyanywaterleft.（運用了狀語從句的省略）

［高分句型3］Theoverallmessagewecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayas

everycloudhasasilverlining.（運用了that引導的表語從句）

3.（2022春?上海?高三專題練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

請簡要描述圖片內容，并聯系生活實際談談你的感想。

相關詞匯：crow（烏鴉）

Whydon'tyoudrinkwaterasthebooktoldus?

【答案】Crowdrinkwater

Therewasonlyalittlewaterinabottlewhichhadalongandnarrowneck.Afatcrowcametothebottleand

drankthewaterbyastraw.Hewasenjoyingthewaterwhenanotherthirstycrowwentby.Accustomedtotheway

ofdrinkingwatertaughtinbooks,thethirstycrowwasverysurprised.Heaskedthefatcrow,“Whydon'tyou

drinkwaterasthebooktoldus?”Thefatcrowreplied,"'Becausethismethodcanmakemedrinkwaterfaster.^^

Inourdailylife,manythingswillalwayschangebeyondourimagination.Weshouldlearntoadaptflexibly.

Onlybyfindingtherightwaycanwesucceed.Ifwewanttomakeprogressduringourstudy,weshouldlearnto

inferratherthancompletelyfollowthefixedpatterninourstudy.

【分析】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文。要求考生簡要描述圖片內容，并聯系生活實際談談自己的感想。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

驚訝的：surprised—>shocked

方式：method一means

更快地：faster—>morequickly

呆板的：fixed-inflexible

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Accustomedtothewayofdrinkingwatertaughtinbooks,thethirstycrowwasverysurprised.

拓展句：Accustomedtothewayofdrinkingwaterwhichwastaughtinbooks,thethirstycrowwasverysurprised.

【點睛】【高分句型1】Therewasonlyalittlewaterinabottlewhichhadalongandnarrowneck.（運用了which

引導定語從句）

【高分句型2】Ifwewanttomakeprogressduringourstudy,weshouldlearntoinferratherthancompletely

followthefixedpatterninourstudy.（運用了if引導條件狀語從句）

4.（2022春?上海?高三上海市洋涇中學校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150words

accordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

一家服裝店的櫥窗外，兩只狐貍在對話：

—爸爸快看，媽媽在對我笑吶！

——走吧兒子，有人過來了。

請簡要描述這幅圖片，并就其傳達的信息和意義談談你的看法。

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【答案】Asitisdepictedinthepicture,twofoxesarelookingatafashionablecoatinfrontofaclothesshop.

Theyoungfoxisespeciallygladwhenseeingthefurcollar,saying,“Daddy,mymotherissmilingtome”,while

theoldfoxisratherworried,tellinghischildtogo,assomeonemaycometocatchthemforfur.Whatatragedy!

ThefirsttimeIsawthispicture,somethingcametomymindimmediately.

Foronething,itishumanbeingswhoareusinganimals5furstomakeclothing.Foranother,animalsaresad

toexperiencemisfortune.There9snodoubtthattheywishtoescapethisdestiny,buttheyaretoooftentooweakto

runaway,letalonetofightagainstthisfate.Thus,theawarenessofthesignificanceofprotectinganimalsshould

beenhancedandsomepropermeasuresshouldbetaken.Onlyinthisway,cananimalsandhumanbeingslivein

harmony.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文。請簡要描述這幅圖片，并就其傳達的信息和意義談談你的看法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

力口強：enhance—strengthen

擔心的：worried一concerned

高興的：glad—pleased

因此：thus^therefore

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：There'snodoubtthattheywishtoescapethisdestiny,buttheyaretoooftentooweaktorunaway,letalone

tofightagainstthisfate.

拓展句：Althoughtheywishtoescapethisdestiny,theyaretoooftentooweaktorunaway,letalonetofight

againstthisfate.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Theyoungfbxisespeciallygladwhenseeingthefurcollar,saying,4tDaddy,mymotheris

smilingtome”,whiletheoldfbxisratherworried,tellinghischildtogo,assomeonemaycometocatchthemfor

fur.（運用了省略句和as引導原因狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Onlyinthisway,cananimalsandhumanbeingsliveinharmony.（運用了部分侄U裝）

5.（2023春?上海?高二上海市南洋模范中學校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150

wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

下面的漫畫展示的是劇場中的場景。請以此為素材寫篇短文。你的作文必須包括：

?簡要描述漫畫內容；

?就其折射出的社會現象談談你的感想。

（注：文中不得出現真實的姓名及學校名稱。）

【答案】OperaisthetreasureoftheChinesenation,butfewerandfewerpeoplegotoseeit.

Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople's

reactionisverydifferent.Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonis

bowinghisheadtosleep.Thecartoonreflectsthatnowadaysyoungpeoplearenotinterestedintraditional

Chineseoperaculture.IthinkyoungpeopleshouldactivelypromotetraditionalChineseculture,especiallyopera

culture.Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold^^inoperaculture,

Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyand

informationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic'svisionandbe

lovedbythepublic.

Allinall,Chineseopera,especiallyPekingOpera,isthequintessenceofChineseculture.Thecontemporary

youthhavetheresponsibilityandobligationtocarryitforward,passonthequintessenceofChineseculture,and

makeitpopularathomeandabroad.

【分析】本篇書面表達屬于看圖作文，所給漫畫展示的是劇場中的場景。要求考生以此為素材寫篇短文。

文章必須包括：簡要描述漫畫內容；就其折射出的社會現象談談你的感想。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

對...感興趣：beinterestedin-haveinterestin—showinterestin

總之：allinall一inshort一inbrief

另夕卜，止匕夕卜：inaddition一furthermore一more。ver

反應，回應：reaction-response一reflection

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

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原句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople's

reactionisverydifferent.

拓展句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingthesameplay,towhichtwopeople'sreactionisvery

different.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowing

hisheadtosleep.（運用了由并列連詞while連接的并列句，前后形成鮮明對比）

[高分句型2]Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold^^inopera

culture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnology

andinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic'svision

andbelovedbythepublic.（運用了sothat引導的結果狀語從句）

6.（2022?上海?模擬預測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

請簡要描述圖片內容，并結合生活或學習中的例子談談你對該圖的理解。

【答案】Asthepictureshows,somesmallantsencounteredabigpitontheirway.Withoutpanic,they

quicklyfoundasolution.Theydecidedtoletsomesmallantsconnecttobuildabridgeatatime.Aftertheother

antspassedthebridge,theywouldpulltheremainingantsover.Theirsuccessdemonstratestheimportanceof

teamwork.

Inourdailylife,somepeopleliketoworkalonewhileothersenjoyteamwork.Inmyopinion,everyonehad

betterlearntoworkwithothersbecauseteamworkisdefinitelynecessaryandimportant.Forexample,inafootball

match,everymemberplaysdifferentrolewhichisimportant.Allmembersmustcooperatewitheachothertofight

againsttheopponentteam.Theycanonlywinwhentheydogoodteamwork,ortheywillbedefeated.

Insum,teamworkisveryimportant.Noonecouldliveindividually.Henceworkingtogethercouldmakeour

lifeeasier.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫類作文。要求考生描述圖片內容，結合生活或學習中的例子談談對圖片的

理解。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

遇至U：encounter—comeacross

在某人看來：inone'sopinion一inone'sview

重要的：important—^ital

總之：insum—inaword

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Insum,teamworkisveryimportant.

拓展句：Insum,teamworkisveryimportant,whichcanhelpuscompletethetaskfasterandbetter.

【點睛】[高分句型l]Asthepictureshows,somesmallantsencounteredabigpitontheirway.（運用了as引導

的非限定性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Inmyopinion,everyonehadbetterlearntoworkwithothersbecauseteamworkisdefinitely

necessaryandimportant.（運用了because引導的原因狀語從句）

7.（2022秋?廣東?高三廣東實驗中學校考階段練習）下面一組圖片展現了現代生活方式。請根據你對這組

圖片的理解用英語寫一篇短文。

TliSMCJDERZLIFE：

WORKPLAY

你的短文應包含以下內容：

1.描述圖片的內容；

2.分析該現象的原因；

3.結合生活實際，談談你的感想。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

【答案】Justasthepictureshowsvividly,infrontofthecomputersitsamanwhoisabsorbedincomputer

whetheratwork,athomeorinplay.Eventually,heevencannotridhimselfofthefantasyofusingthecomputerin

hisdream.

Manyfactorscombinetocausethephenomenon.Firstly,thecomputerfacilitatesourworkefficiencyand

entertainment,makingiteasyforustocontacteachother.Secondly,itdeprivesusofopportunitiestogetclose

natureandalienatesusfromourfamiliesandfriends.

Ithinkcomputerisnothingbutatool,sowecannotbeaslavetoitbutthemaster.Areasonable

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understandingoftechnologywillundoubtedlypavethewayforbetteringourlife.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖片作文。要求考生結合圖片寫一篇短文，內容包括：描述圖片內容；分析該

現象的原因以及結合生活，談談自己的感受。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

沉迷于：beabsorbedin—belostin

導致：cause—resultin

機會：opportunity—chance

我認為：Ithink一inmypointofview

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Eventually,heevencannotridhimselfofthefantasyofusingthecomputerinhisdream.

拓展句：Eventually,heevencannotridhimselfofthefantasyofusingthecomputerinhisdream,whichis

terrible.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Justasthepictureshowsvividly,infrontofthecomputersitsamanwhoisabsorbedin

computerwhetheratwork,athomeorinplay.（運用了who引導的限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Firstly,thecomputerfacilitatesourworkefficiencyandentertainment,makingiteasyforusto

contacteachother.（運用了現在分詞作伴隨狀語）

8.（2022春?上海?高三專題練習）Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

仔細閱讀下圖，針對圖片反映的情況，談談你的看法。你的內容必須包括：

1.簡要描述圖片；2.分析該情況產生的原因；3.談談你的看法和建議。

【答案JFromthepicturegivenabove,wecanobservethatarecruiterisgivinganoffertotheapplicantwith

highereducationaldegree.Meanwhile,anotherapplicantgraduatedfromavocationaltechnicalinstituteiswaiting

inlinewithaconfusedlook.

Thecartoonrevealsthatthesocietyhasbeenplacingahighervalueoneducationaldegree.Whatfactors

mightcontributetothisphenomenon?Answerstothisquestionmayinvolvemanyaspects,andhereareafew

guesses.Foronething,fromthesubjectiveaspect,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehighereducationaldegree

peoplehave,themorecompetenttheywillbe.Foranother,fromtheobjectiveaspect,withtheprofessionsin

modernsocietybecomingincreasinglysegmented,employeesarerequiredtoacquirehigherdegreetofulfilltheir

tasksefficiently.

AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardinaninterviewtoassessapplicants5

ability.Asforthecompanies,itisnotnecessarilyagoodprincipleaswell.Weshouldrealizethattheoperational

capabilityandserviceabilitycanhelpyoutofindagoodjob.

【分析】這是一篇圖畫作文。要求學生就圖畫反應的“學歷歧視”問題進行簡要介紹，并分析背后原因和給

出自己的觀點。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

困惑的：puzzled—confiised

導致：leadto一contributeto

就我而言：Inmyopinion—AsfarasIamconcerned

完成：complete—?fulfill

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardinaninterviewtoassessapplicants9

ability.

拓展句：AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardwhichassessesapplicants5abilityin

aninterview.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Fromthepicturegivenabove,wecanobservethatarecruiterisgivinganoffertothe

applicantwithhighereducationaldegree.（運用了過去分詞given作后置定語以及that引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Foronething,fromthesubjectiveaspect,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehighereducational

degreepeoplehave,themorecompetenttheywillbe.（運用了that引導的賓語從句以及“the+比較級，the+比較

級”句式）

9.（2022秋?上海?高三上海市行知中學校考開學考試）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150

wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題，現今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現象十分嚴重。請閱讀下面的

漫畫，按要求寫一篇文章。

內容要求：

描述漫畫內容：

分析漫畫所揭示的問題；提出你的看法。

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【答案1Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,waves

proudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthe

carpet,sweating.

Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeof

theirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.As

aconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreative

ideas.

Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadfor

children'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrento

overcomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobe

independentandbecometrulysuccessful.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文，孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題，現今父母包攬一切、孩子過

度依賴等現象十分嚴重，要求考生根據題目提供的漫畫，寫一篇文章。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

自豪地：proudly-withpride

承擔：shoulder一undertake

不遺余力：sparenoefforttodosth.一doone'sutmosttodosth.

在我看來：inmyopinion—?firommypointofview

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.

拓展句：Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthree,whoarewalkingonalongredcarpet.

［點睛］［高分句型1］Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhaveno

independentthoughtorcreativeideas.（運用了so..that引導的結果狀語從句）

［高分句型2］Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.（運用了部分倒

裝句型）

10.(2022秋?上海?高三上海市大同中學校考期中)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150words

accordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

請寫一篇短文，文章必須包括：

1.描述圖片

2.就“低頭族(phubbing)”這一現象談談你的看法

【答案】Thecartoonvividly