進(jìn)階練14書信作文（滿分范文）專練（解析版）

學(xué)校:姓名：班級：考號：

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1.（2023?上海?一模）假如你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你校學(xué)生會正在征集志愿者活動方案，請在以下

三項活動中選擇一項：

一、深入社區(qū)宣傳環(huán)保知識；

二、擔(dān)任“奉賢博物館”義務(wù)講解員；

三、去孤兒院為孩子們上興趣課。請你給學(xué)生會寫封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：

1.你的選擇及理由；

2.你準(zhǔn)備如何做。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearSir/Madam,

Ourschoolwillholdavolunteeractivity,whichmaybechosenfromthefollowingthreeprogrammes:

publicizingknowledgeofenvironmentalprotectiontocommunities,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxian

Museumandconductinginterestinglessonstokidsintheorphanage.Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefor

theFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.

TherearetworeasonswhyIchoosethesecondactivity.Tostartwith,ifsavaluableopportunityforstudents

tohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxianMuseum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.Besides,it's

beneficialforstudentstoimprovetheircommunicationskillsespeciallyEnglishspeakingbecausetherearemany

foreignersvisitingit.

IfI'mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefull

preparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.

Sincerely

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給校學(xué)生會寫封郵件在三個志愿者活動策劃中選擇某一項活

動，并闡述選擇的理由和要如何做。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

項目：programme一project

除止匕之夕卜：besides—moreover

珍惜：cherish^-treasure

尋求某人的幫助：asksbforhelp-seeksb5shelp

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.

拓展句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents,fromwhich

studentscanlearnalot.

【高分句型11Tostartwith,ifsavaluableopportunityforstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxian

Museum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.(運用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)

【高分句型2】IfI'mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefull

preparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.(運用了if弓I導(dǎo)的條件狀

語從句)

2.(2023?上海閔行?統(tǒng)考二模)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你們學(xué)校將組織一次高三學(xué)生參觀大學(xué)的活動，學(xué)生可以從“專業(yè)及課程

介紹(MajorandCourseDescriptions)”;"參觀圖書館、實驗室(LibraryLaboratoryVisiting)^^;“隨班學(xué)

習(xí)體驗(OnSpotStudying)^^和“與教授面對面(DialoguewithProfessors)”四個活動中選取兩個作為主要

活動，特此向高三學(xué)生征求意見。請你寫一封郵件給活動組織者，內(nèi)容須包括：

1.你最感興趣的兩個活動；

2.你對這兩個活動感興趣的理由。

【答案)Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iam

veryexcitedandhappy.WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsand

OnSpotStudying.

Firstofall,IamfondoftheactivityMajorandCourseDescriptions,whichcanhelpmehaveadeeper

understandingoftheuniversity'sprofessionalcoursesandclarifythedirectionformyfuturestudy.

Besides,IamdeeplyinterestedintheactivityOnSpotStudying.Intheactivity,Icantrulyexperiencethe

learningatmosphereoftheuniversity.Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthe

studentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday,whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangetheway

thatIlearninthemiddleschool.

Allinall,theactivityofvisitingtheuniversityisofgreathelptoourfutureplanning.Iamlooking

forwardtothearrivalofthatday.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給活動組織者寫一封信，說明你對學(xué)校組織的高三學(xué)生參觀

大學(xué)的活動中感興趣的兩個活動以及對這兩個活動感興趣的理由

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【詳解】1.詞匯積累

喜歡：befbndoJenjoy

高興的：happy—pleased一delighted

止匕夕卜：besides一whafsmore

機(jī)會：chance一opportunity

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamvery

excitedandhappy.

拓展句：Becauselhearthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,I

amveryexcitedandhappy.

【點睛】【高分句型1]WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsandOn

SpotStudying.（運用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）

【高分句型2】Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversity

takecourseseveryday,whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddle

school.（運用了how與whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句以及that引導(dǎo)的定語從

句）

3.（2023?上海黃浦?統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是海平中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明，你所在的社區(qū)將在暑假開設(shè)面向小學(xué)生的日間托管服務(wù)，現(xiàn)招募社區(qū)高

中生志愿者，要求每一位志愿者能根據(jù)自己的特長開設(shè)一門微課程。請寫一封應(yīng)聘信（信中請不要出現(xiàn)真實

的個人信息），信的內(nèi)容須包括：

1）簡單的自我介紹；

2）你準(zhǔn)備開設(shè)的微課程的名稱和主要內(nèi)容；

3）你開設(shè)這門微課程的理由。

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

IamLiMingfromClass1,Senior3ofHaipingMiddleSchool.Tmwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelp

theprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.

Iamverygoodatmathematics,andIoftenmakesomemicro-coursesforprimaryschoolstudents.Iplanto

setupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis'"Mathematicsinourdailylife,5.Thiscoursemainlyintroduceshowto

usemathineverydaylifesothatprimaryschoolstudentscanhaveadeeperunderstandingoftheimportanceof

mathematicsthroughexamples.

Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearningmathematics.

Whafsmore,mathematicsisrarelyusedinreallife,somanypeoplethinkthatlearningmathematicsis

meaningless.Ihopethiscoursecanhelpmoreprimaryschoolstudents,andIalsohopetogetthisopportunityto

improvemyself.

Yours,

LiMing

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封應(yīng)聘信應(yīng)聘社區(qū)高中生志愿者，內(nèi)容包括簡單的自我

介紹，準(zhǔn)備開設(shè)的微課程的名稱和主要內(nèi)容以及開設(shè)該課程的理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

計戈I：plan—intend

而且：whafsmore一moreover

機(jī)會：opportunity一chance

提高：improve一promote

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.

拓展句：I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionwhereIcanhelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity,

【點睛】【高分句型1】Iplantosetupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis"'Mathematicsinourdaily（運

用了“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型21Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearning

mathematics.（運用了why引導(dǎo)的定語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

4.（2023?上海長寧?統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華。學(xué)校將開設(shè)講座“上海老洋房”，現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求學(xué)生的意見。請給

負(fù)責(zé)的王老師寫封郵件，具體提出你的建議。內(nèi)容須包括：

1）你對講座內(nèi)容的具體建議；

2）簡述你的理由。

【答案】DearMr./Ms.Wang,

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Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents5adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheoldwestern-style

housesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.Hence,Iamwritingtosharemyviews.

First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.Besides,anotheraspectshouldbeincludedintothelectureistheprofoundculture

behindthesehistoricalbuildings.Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.Lastbutnotleast,

howaboutofferingtheaudiencesomeusefultipsastohowtopreservethesepreciousbuildings?Onlyby

knowingthatcanweprotectthemefficiently.

Asabigfanoftheseoldbuildings,Isincerelyhopeyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Respectfullyyours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以學(xué)生李華的身份為學(xué)校即將舉辦的“上海老洋房”講座提供

建議，提出講座應(yīng)該包含什么內(nèi)容，并指明提出這些建議的理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

關(guān)于：about一concerning

深厚的：deep-profdund

保護(hù)：protect—preserve

考慮：consider—>takesth.intoconsideration

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.

拓展句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses,whichundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.（運用了itis+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分

+that+其他成分的強(qiáng)調(diào)句句型）

[高分句型2]Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents9adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheold

western-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

5.（2023?上海青浦?統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是浦潤中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李青。你的學(xué)校即將舉辦“回眸五十年”紀(jì)念活動，你在學(xué)生會參與相關(guān)的準(zhǔn)備

工作，并負(fù)責(zé)向來賓介紹學(xué)校的變化，等等。請就此給你的英國好友Alan寫封郵件交流你的想法。你的

郵件必須包括：

1.介紹紀(jì)念活動的主要內(nèi)容；

2.描述你所見聞的學(xué)校變化；

3.簡述你對學(xué)校發(fā)展的期許。

（注：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名及學(xué)校名稱。）

【答案】DearAlan,

Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears^^attheendofthis

month.Iwillparticipateintherelevantpreparationsasamemberofthestudentunionandberesponsiblefor

introducingthechangesintheschooltoguests.Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.

Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststo

visittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.Asisknown,

ourschoolhasundergonetremendouschangesinthepast50years.State-of-the-artteachingequipmentandeven

artificialintelligencedevicestoassistinteachinghavebeenequippedinourschool.Besides,therearevarious

culturalclubsandcommunitiestoenrichourleisurelife.

Hopemyschoolwillbecomebetterandbetter!

Yours,

LiQing

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給你的英國好友Alan寫封郵件介紹你學(xué)校即將舉辦“回眸五

十年”紀(jì)念活動，內(nèi)容包括紀(jì)念活動的主要內(nèi)容、你所見聞的學(xué)校變化和對學(xué)校發(fā)展的期許。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參力口：participatein一joinin

止匕夕卜：besides—what飛more

希望：hope一wish

幫助：assist—'help

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears^^attheendofthis

month.

拓展句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventwhichiscalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears“atthe

endofthismonth.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,

leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.

（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.（運用了because引導(dǎo)的原因

狀語）

6.（2023春?上海?高三上海市大同中學(xué)校考階段練習(xí)）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150

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wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是啟明中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生古月胡，你校計劃引入一款人工智能批改系統(tǒng)來輔助教師批改作業(yè)與部分試

卷。有些同學(xué)表示支持，但也有部分同學(xué)表示了擔(dān)憂。因此學(xué)校委托學(xué)生會征詢大家對人工智能批改系統(tǒng)

的意見。

給學(xué)生會寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：

1）你對人工智能批改系統(tǒng)的看法；2）你的理由。

【答案1DearPresidentoftheStudentUnion,

Iamfortunatetolearnthatwiththeprogressofscienceandtechnology,ourschoolplanstointroducean

artificialintelligencegradingsystemtoassistteachersingradinghomeworkandsometestpapers.Somestudents

supportit,whileothersopposeit.

Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingto

achievingeducationalfairness.Moreover,itisnotonlytimelyandcost-effective,butcanalsoreceivecontinuous

andpositivefeedback,whichisofgreathelptoforeignlanguagelearners.Whatisthemostimportantforusis

thatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilitytoimprovestandardizedanswers.

Isincerelyhopethatthisartificialintelligencegradingsystemcanbeappliedtoourschoolassoonas

possible.

Yours,

GuYuehu

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)生會寫一封郵件表達(dá)對人工智能批改系統(tǒng)的看法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

進(jìn)步：progress—improvement

弓I入：introduce—bringin

幫助：assist—'help

支持：support一areinfavorof

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingto

achievingeducationalfairness.

拓展句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,which

contributestoachievingeducationalfairness.

【點睛】【高分句型1jFrommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,

contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語contributingto充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語）

【高分句型2】Whatisthemostimportantforusisthatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilityto

improvestandardizedanswers.（運用了What引導(dǎo)的主語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

7.（2023?上海浦東新?統(tǒng)考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校擬舉辦“漢語文化周”活動，現(xiàn)在向全校師生征集活動策劃案。請

給學(xué)生會寫一封郵件表達(dá)你的想法。你的郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1）介紹具體活動方案；

2）說明理由。

【答案】DearStudentUnion,

I'mwritingtosharemyideafortheupcoming"ChineseCultureWeek“eventatMingqiHighSchool.I

proposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.

Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowriteChinesecharacters

usingbrushandink.Thiswouldnotonlygivestudentsachancetolearnanewskill,butalsotoappreciatethe

beautyandmeaningbehindChinesecharacters.Secondly,wecouldholdascreeningofaniconicChinesemovie

orTVshow.Suchas"MonkeyKing"or"DreamoftheRedChamber”.Thiswouldprovidestudentswitha

glimpseintoChinesehistoryandculture,andfostercross-culturalunderstanding.Finally,wecouldinviteaguest

speakertotalkabouttraditionalChinesemedicine,suchasacupunctureorherbalremedies.Thiswouldallow

studentstolearnaboutalternativeapproachestohealthcareandbroadentheirperspectivesonhealthandwellness.

Ibelievethathostingtheseactivitiesduring“ChineseCultureWeek“wouldbebeneficialforseveralreasons.

Firstly,itwouldhelppromoteculturaldiversityandunderstandingamongourstudentbody.Secondly,itwould

providestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,whichisimportantintoday's

globalizedworld.Lastly,itwouldbeafunandengagingwaytocelebrateourschool'scommitmenttopromoting

culturalexchangeandeducation.

Thankyouforconsideringmyproposal.Ilookforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonthismatter.[241words]

Sincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的活動策劃案。要求考生向?qū)W生會寫一封郵件，表達(dá)自己對于學(xué)

校擬舉辦的“漢語文化周”活動所設(shè)想的活動策劃案。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：firstly一firstofall

機(jī)會：chance一opportunity

最后：finally—lastly/lastbutnotleast

提高、促進(jìn)：promoteenhance/improve

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考慮：consider一thinkabout

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.

拓展句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieswhichwillhighlighttraditionalChineseartsandculture.

【點睛】【高分句型11Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowrite

Chinesecharactersusingbrushandink.（運用了where弓|導(dǎo)定語從句）

【高分句型2]Secondly,itwouldprovidestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,

whichisimportantintoday?sglobalizedworld.（運用了which引導(dǎo)定語從句）

8.（2023?上海?盧灣高級中學(xué)校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

76.每年4月22日是世界地球日（WorldEarthDay）。為積極響應(yīng)世界地球日活動，你校學(xué)生會開展了宣傳

海報的評比活動。現(xiàn)已初評得出如下的前三名海報，并在全校范圍評選最佳海報。寫封郵件給你校學(xué)生會，

內(nèi)容須包括：

你選出的最佳海報及其簡介；

你的理由。

【答案】Dearstudentunion,

Ilikethesecondpicture.Fromthispicture,wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,green

forest,andthebluesky.Ancienttimes,howmanypoetspraisingtheearthbeautifulenvironment!Butnowthe

earthisinbadcondition.Forexample,insomeplaces,theairandwaterpollutionissoseriousthatitcausesmany

deaths.Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.

Ithinkthispictureisareminderofustoprotectourearth.Ihopewehumanbeingscanrealizetheproblem.

Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickinguprubbish,andgive

speechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.TodayisWorldEarthDay,andmillionsofpeoplehavecontributed

toprotectingtheenvironment.Butcanwesavetheearthonlybyoneday'swork?Thefutureofourplanet

dependsonourefforts.WhatweshoulddoistomakeeverydayEarthDay.Onlybytakinggoodcareofitevery

daycanwehopetoliveinharmonywithnature.Therefore,Ihopethispicturecanbethebestone.

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

干凈的：clear一cleam

同時：Atthesametime—Meanwhile

照顧：takegoodcareoJlookafter

號召：callon—callupon

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.

拓展句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecausetheirhabitatsaredestroyed.

【點睛】【高分句型1]wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,greenforest,thebluesky.（運用

了that連接的賓語從句）

【高分句型2】Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickingup

rubbish,andgivespeechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.（運用了動名詞短語并列作賓語）

9.（2023?上海徐匯?統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是明啟中學(xué)的李平。你的朋友Jenny來信說：隨著大學(xué)申請和期末考試的臨近，她十分忙碌，經(jīng)常

熬夜，沒有時間參加喜歡的社團(tuán)活動和社交生活，她感到難以平衡學(xué)業(yè)、課外活動和社會生活。請你寫封

郵件給她，內(nèi)容包括：

1.分析她面臨的主要問題；

2.提出相應(yīng)的建議和理由。

【答案】DearJenny,

WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan'tbalanceamongacademic,extra-curricular

activitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingaboutschoolwork,and

havingnotimetorelax.Don'tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.

Firstofall,Irecommendthatyouhaveabalanceddiet,whichcangiveyoumoreenergytostudyharderthan

before.Inaddition,itwouldbeofgreatbenefitifyoutakeanactivepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.That

way,youcanmakenewfriends,whichcouldmakestressoffyourshoulder.Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyou

turntoyourteachersfbrhelpsinceteachers9encouragementandstudymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.

Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionspracticalandwishyougetridofthosetroublesassoonas

possible.

Yours,

LiPing

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李平，你的朋友Jenny臨近大學(xué)申請和期末考試。她寫信向

你訴說了她的困擾：感到難以平衡學(xué)業(yè)、課外活動和社會生活。請你根據(jù)以下要點給她寫一封回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：tip^-advice/suggestion

表達(dá)：express^convey

能夠：can—ableto/becapableof

止匕夕卜：inaddition—besides

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Don'tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.

拓展句：Don'tworrybecauseIwillofferyousometips.

【點睛】[高分句型1]WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan'tbalanceamongacademic,

extra-curricularactivitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingabout

schoolwork,andhavingnotimetorelax.（運用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句和because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyouturntoyourteachersforhelpsinceteachers9encouragementand

studymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.（運用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句和since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）

10.（2023春?上海楊浦?高三同濟(jì)大學(xué)第一附屬中學(xué)校考階段練習(xí)）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin

nofewerthan120wordsaccordingtothe