2023年安徽省六安市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英

語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級(jí):姓名:考號(hào):

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficials.You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.這種做法的意義何在？

2.這些大學(xué)生能給農(nóng)村帶去什么？

3.大學(xué)生能從中得到什么？

2.假設(shè)你是李芳，給好朋友Lily寫一封信。內(nèi)容如下：

1.邀請(qǐng)她五一放假其間來(lái)北京游玩

2.簡(jiǎn)單介紹北京的名勝古跡

3.希望對(duì)方回信交流意見

ALettertoaFrien

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledIsGoodAppearanceMoreImportantthanCapability?Youshould

writeatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.現(xiàn)在許多長(zhǎng)相漂亮的求職者盡管沒有很強(qiáng)的能力仍能找到很好的工

作，因此一些人得出結(jié)論說(shuō)外貌比能力更重要

2.我的看法

IsGoodAppearanceMoreImportantthanCapability?

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteapassageof

atleast150wordsinthetitleofCheatinginExams.Pleasefollowtheoutline

givenbelow.

1.許多人對(duì)考試作弊持否定態(tài)度，認(rèn)為這是不誠(chéng)實(shí)的表現(xiàn)。

2.也有人認(rèn)為考試作弊情有可原。

3.你的觀點(diǎn)。

5.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicComputerGameAddiction.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,and

baseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1.13:00起床,吃中飯

14:00去網(wǎng)吧玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲

17:00晚飯網(wǎng)吧叫外賣；開始通宵練級(jí)

9:00nextmorning回宿舍休息

上述安排為高校一個(gè)大學(xué)生的作息時(shí)間表，說(shuō)明反映的現(xiàn)象

2.產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因及其危害

3.如何解決該問(wèn)題

ComputerGameAddiction

6.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledIs

aDiplomaEverything?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtothe

outlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.目前社會(huì)存在著迷信文憑現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對(duì)此的觀點(diǎn)

IsaDiplomaEverything?

7.1.大家希望構(gòu)建一個(gè)和諧社會(huì)，但社會(huì)上存在一些與和諧社會(huì)不相符

合的現(xiàn)象

2.分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的不良影響

3.從自身應(yīng)如何做起

8.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

Gambling.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

belowinEnglish:

1.Whatisgambling?

2.Theharmofgambling.

3.Howshallwedealwithit?

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

commentingontheevaluationofteachers*performancedonebythestudents.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese.

1.不少大學(xué)讓學(xué)生參與任課老師教學(xué)情況的測(cè)評(píng)。

2.對(duì)此改革措施校方、教師、學(xué)生的看法不一。

3.學(xué)生測(cè)評(píng)教師的益處以及可能產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題。

EvaluationbyStudents

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledWhatDoYouThinkofChallenge.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.挑戰(zhàn)的意義。

2.如何迎接挑戰(zhàn)。

3.我的看法是……

WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Sinceexercisesmaycontrolconditionssuchasdiabetesandhighblood

pressure,someoldpeopledon'tneedtoiftheybeginanexercise

program.

12.

BobandJessicawereontoLondon.

13.

Scientistsaregrowingconcernedaboutothergasesproducedfrom.

14.Thequestionaboutsatisfactionwithpayandbenefitsisnotincludedin

the12questionsbecauseit'simportanttoallemployees,whetheror

not.

15.

Accordingtotheprinciplethatthepoweroutputfromawindturbinerisesas

acubeIfwindspeed,higher-speedwindsaremoreeasilyandinexpensively

captured.

A.YB.NC.NG

16.

Bythe17thcenturyafewpubliclibrarieshad.

17.Workplace2020

—BySusanPaynter

It'sasummermorningintheyear2020andnotyet7:30a.m.JaneHanson,

flushedfromherearlymorningrunalongtheriver,setsdowninherwork

stationathome.Sheisstillinhersweats,andthisisthefirstdayallweekshe

hasslidherkneesunderadesk.

ForJaneandmillionsofotherso-calledknowledgeworkers,thejobis

whereversheis.Today,it*sathome.Agraphicsdesigner,Janehasacurrent

assignmenttodevelopanewlogoforasportsshoeforaclient.She*sdelight

edtohavetheproject,sinceitgivesherachancetoworkwithAki,herin

ternationalpartnerinYokohama（橫濱），Japan.Today,Aki'sfacepopsupon

hercomputerscreenasshechecks"see-mail,"atypeofcommunicationthat

replacedE-mailafewyearsago.Withaclick,Janecancallupthevideoimage

andvoiceofeachpersonwholeftheramessagethepreviousnight.

Thismorning,JanecallsAkibackandtheyseeandheareachotherviavideo

phone.Theycollaborateonaninteractivescreenalmostasiftheyarestanding

sidebysideatthesamedrawingboard.

Jane'shusband,George,canoftenbefoundworkingathomeaswell.uGoing

totheoffice"hasbecomeanoption,notanecessity,withtheadventofthe

wirelesscomputer.Georgeteachesatanearbyuniversity,andoften

broadcastshislecturesviasatellite.Butthismorningheisatanon-campus

seminar.Thekidsarealsooutofthehousetodayattendingclassesatanearby

languageandsciencelab.Janeisgratefultohavethehousetoherselftoday

assheandAkiworkonthelogo.

TheVirtualOffice

Twentyyearsfromnow,asmanyas25millionAmericans-nearly20percent

oftheworkforce—willstretchtheboundariesbetweenhomeandworkfar

beyondthelinesdrawnnow.Technologyhasalreadysoacceleratedthepace

ofchangeintheworkplacethatfewfuturistsarewillingtopredicthard

numbers.Butnearlyalltrend-trackersagreethatmuchofthenextcentury's

workwillbedecentralized,doneathomeorinsatelliteofficesonaschedule

tailoredtofitworker'slivesandtheneedsoftheirfamilies.Eveninternational

boundariesmayblurastheeconomygoestrulyglobal.

Between1990and1998,telecommutingdoubledfromabout3percentto6

percentoftheworkingpopulation-orabout8.2millionpeople.Thenumbers

areexpectedtodoubleagaininfarlesstime,withasmuchas12percentof

thepopulationtelecommutingbytheyear2005,saysCharlieGrantham,

directoroftheInstitutefortheStudyofDistributedWorkinWindsor,

California.

Wirelesscomputersandseamlesscommunicationssystemsarealreadyinthe

worksandfuelingthetrend.Thevideophoneisnotfaroff,anadvancethat

manyfuturistsbelievewillmakeevenmorecompaniescomfortablewith

employeesworkingfromhome."Now,wecommunicateatthelevelofradio,1'

saysGeraldCelente,authorofTrends2000anddirectorofTheTrends

ResearchInstituteofRhinebeck,NewYork.E-mailandthetelephonearc

primitive,heargues,andmakepeoplefeelcutofffromco-workers.Butonce

everyonecanseeeachotheronthescreen,long-distancerelationshipswill

feelmoreintimate.

Whatabouttheoffice?”Today'sofficesareadirectdescendantofthefactory,*'

saysGilGordon,aconsultantbasedinMonmouthJunction,NewJersey,who

hasspentnearlytwodecadesadvisingcompaniesonhowtoinstitute

telecommutingandmoreflexibleworkpatterns.nTheymaybebetterlighted,

butthey'remuchthesame."

Still,Gordondoesnotthinktheofficebuildingwillvanishaltogether.Rather,

theofficeof2020willbejustoneplace

A.YB.NC.NG

18.

ThegrowingresistancetoAmericancultureinFranceresultsfromthe

frustrationsoverIraqwarand.

19.

Whomightdisliketheideaofarrangingbooksbytheircolors?

A.Thosewholikepaintingonthebookshelves.

B.Thosewhotendtoarrangeanythingscientifically.

C.Thosewhoarecolor-blind.

D.Thosewhousuallycannotrememberthecolorsofbooks.

20.

Acidrainhasmadenumerouslakessoacidicthatthey.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(34)

A.Consumerswereresponsive.

B.Consumerswerehostile.

C.Consumersturnedcautiousofit.

□.Consumersdidn'tcareallthetime.

22.聽力原文：Doyouknowhowtoadvertiseforahank?Ifyouaskpeople

aboutthefunctionsofabank,theywouldprobablysaythatthebankiswhere

youcandepositmoneyandcashacheck.Butifsmuchmorethanthese.And

wchavetotellpeoplethisinouradvertisement.

Thereareseveralthingstothinkaboutforabankadvertisement.Thefirst

problemistodecidewhoshouldbeouraudience.Shouldouradvertisement

beaimedatadultswithfullemploymentonly?Orshoulditalsoappealto

students,housewives,retiredworkers,orevenchildren?Itisagoodideato

addressthelargestpossibleaudience.Ifweintroducethenameofourbankto

childrentheywillneverforgetit.

Thenextquestionishowtoattractpeopleofdifferentsocialgroupstoour

bank.Theusualtipistoofferfreegifts,forexample,portableradiosorT-

shirtsfortheyoungandgoldpensforbusinessexecutives.Thatalwaysworks.

Butwhatdowegivetoourbestcustomers?That'sanotherquestion.What

aboutleatherdiaries,forexample?

Banksareverycompetitive.Wehavetothinkofsomethingnewtoofferour

customers.Thafsthethirdproblem.Oursisoneofthefirstbankstohave

drive-inserviceandtoopenonSaturdays,butnowmanybanksdo.Most

banksalsoofferavarietyofcheckingandsavingaccountsandafullrangeof

investmentplanstosuittheneedsoftheircustomers,aswellasthe24-hour

ATMbankingwhichmakesitmuchfasterandeasierforcustomersto

withdrawcashordootherthings.Toattractmorecustomerstoourbank,itis

essentialthatwehavesomethingthatnootherbankoffers.

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A.Businessexecutives,housewivesandcollegestudents.

B.Parentsplanningfortheirchildren'seducation.

C.Adultswithorwithoutfullemployment,students,housewives,andretired

people.

D.Bestcustomersonly.

23.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeach

passage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestions

willbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebest

answerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽力原文'I'mhavingproblemslivingwithColin.We'vebarelyspokento

eachotherinamonth,andwhenwedo,it'stofight.Itstartedwhenwefirst

movedin.Ihadalotofthings,andColinwasn'tthrilled.He'snoteasyto

please,youknow.Iputallmystuffintheclosetinthekitchen.Thismadehim

reallyupsetbecausehewantedtoputhissurfinggearinthere.What'smore,

Ilikeaneat,orderlyapartment,butColinissocarefree.Hispartofthe

apartmentisalwaysamess.That'sokifhe'sjustmessyinhisroom,butwe

alsosharelivingspace,suchasthekitchen,sittingroom,bathetc.Ihavetried

talkingtohimaboutthis,butthenhestartsyellingatmeabouthowmyfriends

arealwayscomingoverwhenbehasalotofworktodo.Idon'tknowwhatto

do.TheheadresidentpromisedtotalktoColin.Iwillseehowitgoes.IfI

stillhaveaproblemattheendofweek,Iwillaskforaroomtochange.

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A.Theman'sprofessor.

B.Theman'sroommate.

C.Aneighbor.

D.Theman'sbrother.

24.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeach

passage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestions

willbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebest

answerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽力原文■Oneofthereasonsforoursuccessasaspeciesisourabilityto

eatandthriveonalargevarietyoffoods.Manyanimalspecieshavebecome

extinctorareonthevergeofextinctionpartlybecausetheylackthis

adaptability.Theyneedtofeedonparticularfoodplantoraparticularkindof

animalorinsect.Ifthissourceoffoodisforanyreasonremovedthenthe

animalconcernedisunabletochangetoadifferentdiet.Graduallyitbecomes

extinct.Buthumanbeingsarealmostentirelyfreefromthelimitationofany

particularfoodrequirements.Weareabletosurviveonawidevarietyoffoods

bothanimalandvegetable.Forexample,theEskimosarealmosttotallymeat

eaters:seal,bear,whalemeatandfishform,theirwholediet;theAborigines

ofAustralia,livingindesertregions,haveleanttosurvivebymakinguseof

differentinsectsasfoodtosupplementtheirdietofwildfruitsandroots.

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A.Itisanabilitybothmanandanimalspossess.

B.Itisthereasonforman'ssuperiorityoveranimals.

C.Itisoneofthereasonsforman'ssuccessasaspecies.

D.Itisaproofofoursuperiorintelligence.

25.(29)

A.Tobringelectricityintohishouseforlighting.

B.Tohavefun.

C.Toattractthunder.

D.Toconductascientificexperiment.

26.

[B2]

27.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2long

conversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbe

askedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbe

spokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,

youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichis

thebestanswer.

聽力原文：M:Myclassmatesarelookingforwardtothissummer.Theyall

wanttogohome.Theyhavebeenverybusywiththeirstudythissemester.

W:Iunderstand.Perhapstheyarecountingthedays.

Q:Whatcanbeinferredabouttheman'sclassmates?

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A.Theyarecountingthenumberofthevacationdays.

B.Theyaregoingovertheiraccounts.

C.Theyareanxiousaboutgoingbacktoschool.

D.Theyareexcitingaboutgoinghome.

28.(36)

A.45minutes.B.60minutes.C.90minutes.D.40minutes.

29.(32)

A.OfftheBigIsland.

B.NearChallis.

C.InCoalinga.

D.Offthesoutherncoast.

30.(25)

A.Itallowsthemtomeetstudentsfromotheruniversities.

B.Itpromotestheconceptofself-learning.

C.Itallowsmoreflexibilityinstudents*schedules.

D.Itdoesn'trequireanyexaminations.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

Onthebasisoftheirmodels,scientistsareoftheopinionthat.

A.theclimateoftheworldshouldbebecomingcooler

B.itwilltakethousandsofyearsfortheinertiaofthecarth*sclimatetotake

effect

C.theman-madewarmingeffecthelpstoincreasethesolareffect

D.thenewIceAgewillbedelayedbythegreenhouseeffect

32.

AccordingtoNewton'sprinciple.

A.theforceofgravitykeepsplanetsorbitingaroundthesunratherthanflying

off

B.thesunisthemostmassiveobject,makingup99.8percentofthemassof

thesolarsystem

C.theamountofmassdeterminehowfasttheobjectstravelastheyorbiteach

other

D.Plutoreceivestheleastforceofgravityfromthesunofalltheplanetsin

thesolarsystem

33.

Itisimpliedthat,inthelongrun,mostLatinosinArizonawill.

A.bejobless

B.bebadly-paid

C.dolow-skilljobs

D.dohigh-skilljobs

五、5.ErrorCorrection。題）

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六、6.ErrorCorrection。題）

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參考答案

l.MyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficialsNowadays

manycollegegraduatesfindithardtofindajobupongraduation.Eventually

someofthemchoosetoworkasvillageOfficialsintheruralareas.Ithinkit

isagoodidea.Whatcancollegegraduatesofferthecountryside?Inmy

opiniontheycanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothebackward

ruralareas.Forexampletheycanhelpthevillagersinvariousaspectssuchas

howtofarmscientificallyandeffectivelyhowtomakeuseofthelocal

resourcesthusleadingthepeasantsonthewaytoawell-offlife.Atthesame

timecollegegraduatesmaygainagreatdealfromtheirvillagepositions.By

goingdeepintothemassesinthecountrysidetheymaylearnsomegood

qualitiesofthelaboringpeoplesuchasindustrioushard-workingetc.Inthis

waytheywillbeabletotrainthemselvesandaccumulatenecessary

experiencefortheirfuturework.InconclusionIaminfavorofthisidea.For

itnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcitiesbutalsoprovide

thecollegegraduateswithachancetoservethesociety.(186words)My

OpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficialsNowadaysmany

collegegraduatesfindithardtofindajobupongraduation.Eventually,some

ofthemchoosetoworkasvillageOfficialsintheruralareas.Ithinkitisa

goodidea.Whatcancollegegraduatesofferthecountryside?Inmyopinion,

theycanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothebackwardrural

areas.Forexample,theycanhelpthevillagersinvariousaspects,suchashow

tofarmscientificallyandeffectively,howtomakeuseofthelocalresources,

thusleadingthepeasantsonthewaytoawell-offlife.Atthesametime,

collegegraduatesmaygainagreatdealfromtheirvillagepositions.Bygoing

deepintothemassesinthecountryside,theymaylearnsomegoodqualities

ofthelaboringpeople,suchasindustrious,hard-working,etc.Inthisway,

theywillbeabletotrainthemselvesandaccumulatenecessaryexperiencefor

theirfuturework.Inconclusion,Iaminfavorofthisidea.Foritnotonlycan

easethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcities,butalsoprovidethecollege

graduateswithachancetoservethesociety.(186words)解析：按照指令

所給出的3個(gè)問(wèn)題，我們可以將這篇作文寫成4段。第1段指出，在新

的嚴(yán)峻就業(yè)形勢(shì)下，大學(xué)畢業(yè)生當(dāng)村官顯然是一個(gè)很有意義、值得肯定

的做法。第2段回答問(wèn)題：這些大學(xué)生能給農(nóng)村帶去什么?他們可以將

利。技知識(shí)帶到農(nóng)村，改變農(nóng)村的落后面貌,帶領(lǐng)農(nóng)民走上致富的道路。

第3段回答問(wèn)題：大學(xué)生能從中得到什么?通過(guò)深入農(nóng)村基層，接觸廣

大農(nóng)民群眾，他們可以學(xué)到勞動(dòng)人民勤勞苦干、艱苦樸素的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，

為將米的工作積累寶貴的生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)。第4段作為結(jié)論，應(yīng)當(dāng)首尾呼應(yīng)點(diǎn)

題，扼要重復(fù)自己的看法：大學(xué)畢業(yè)生當(dāng)村官不但能夠減輕國(guó)家的就業(yè)

壓力，而且可以回報(bào)社會(huì)、服務(wù)社會(huì)，不失為一個(gè)好主意。

2.ALettertoaFriendDearLilyIthasbeenalongtimesincewemetlasttime.

IlearnthatyouwillhavesomedaysoffinMay1stholiday.Whynotcometo

appreciatethebeautifulscenesinBeijing?AseverybodyknowsBeijingasa

cityofgreathistoricalsignificancehasneverlostitsattractionfortourists.

TiananmenSquaretheGreatWalltheSummerPalacetheTempleofHeaven

MingTombstheFragrantHill...IntheendlesslistofscenicspotsIstrongly

recommendyoupayavisittotheSummerPalace.Locatedonthenorthwest

outskirtsofBeijingithasbeenconsideredthebest-preservedimperialgarden

intheworld.TheLongevityHillandKunmingLakethemajorlandscapeof

thegardenharmoniouslycombineartificialandnaturalbeautyinto

picturesquescenery.Ibelieveyouwillbefascinatedbythefinelydecorated

buildingspavilionsbridgesandtowers.Travelingdoesbenefitusinmorethan

oneway.Howdoyouthinkofmysuggestion?Iamlookingforwardtoyour

reply.YourssincerelyLiFangALettertoaFriendDearLily,Ithasbeena

longtimesincewemetlasttime.Ilearnthatyouwillhavesomedaysoffin

May1stholiday.WhynotcometoappreciatethebeautifulscenesinBeijing?

Aseverybodyknows,Beijing,asacityofgreathistoricalsignificance,has

neverlostitsattractionfortourists.TiananmenSquare,theGreatWall,the

SummerPalace,theTempleofHeaven,MingTombs,theFragrantHill...In

theendlesslistofscenicspots,Istronglyrecommendyoupayavisittothe

SummerPalace.LocatedonthenorthwestoutskirtsofBeijing,ithasbeen

consideredthebest-preservedimperialgardenintheworld.TheLongevity

HillandKunmingLake,themajorlandscapeofthegarden,harmoniously

combineartificialandnaturalbeautyintopicturesquescenery.Ibelieveyou

willbefascinatedbythefinelydecoratedbuildings,pavilions,bridgesand

towers.Travelingdoesbenefitusinmorethanoneway.Howdoyouthinkof

mysuggestion?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiFang

解析：①審題及布局.這是篇書信體作文，主要目的是邀請(qǐng)朋友來(lái)北京

游玩。在布局上，注意英文書信格式，具體內(nèi)容根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱

展開即可.第一段問(wèn)候過(guò)后邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方來(lái)北京度假；第二段介紹北京的名

勝古跡，這是寫作的重點(diǎn)，可以按條目列舉景點(diǎn)，并選擇一處著重推薦；

第三段說(shuō)明旅行益處頗多，詢問(wèn)朋友看法，希望其回復(fù)。②語(yǔ)言。本文

是一篇寫給朋友的書信，首尾兩段語(yǔ)育應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)潔、清晰，側(cè)重于口語(yǔ)化.第

二段涉及風(fēng)景的介紹和描述，語(yǔ)言要鮮明貼切，生動(dòng)形象，盡量避免重

復(fù)用詞；作為書信，本文多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，輔以現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)與一般將來(lái)

時(shí)。

3.1sGoodAppearanceMoreImportantthanCapability?[1JNowadaysmany

jobseekerswithgoodappearancebutlowerabilitiescanstillgetdecentjobs.

[2]Basedonthisfactsomepeopledrawaconclusionthatgoodappearancls

GoodAppearanceMoreImportantthanCapability?[1]Nowadays,manyjob

seekerswithgoodappearancebutlowerabilitiescanstillgetdecentjobs.[2]

Basedonthisfact,somepeopledrawaconclusionthatgoodappearanc解

析：本篇是論述題，要求對(duì)某一種觀點(diǎn)（外貌比能力更重要）提出肯定或

否定的看法，并加以論證。此類作文的基本寫作模式是：介紹某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)

-提出自己的意見-論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作重點(diǎn)是論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。

假如我們支持“外貌比能力更重要”的觀點(diǎn)，怎么落筆?我們可以把論點(diǎn)

設(shè)置為：盡管能力很重要，但如果沒有較好的外貌，一個(gè)人也難以獲得

成功。理由：①第一印象影響深遠(yuǎn)，這是人之常情。在能力相差不大的

時(shí)候，決定因素就是外貌。②有能力的人如果不注意形象，會(huì)招致誤解，

影響工作。比如占代的龐統(tǒng)就因?yàn)槊渤蟊粍浞值揭粋€(gè)偏僻地方當(dāng)小縣

令。結(jié)論：外貌也是生產(chǎn)力，我們沒有理由不注重自己的儀表。

當(dāng)然，更多人會(huì)選擇“公認(rèn)”的論點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為能力比外貌更重要。可以把論

點(diǎn)設(shè)為：盡管外貌漂亮具有優(yōu)勢(shì)，但長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)來(lái)看，還是能力更重要。理由：

①任何實(shí)際問(wèn)題的解決都需要能力，光靠外表于事無(wú)補(bǔ)。盡管賞心悅目

的外表可以給人較好的第一印象，但如果能力不夠，不能勝任工作，照

樣還會(huì)被淘汰。②有能力的人在工作中能夠展現(xiàn)自信，會(huì)越來(lái)越呈現(xiàn)出

自己的人格魅力，越來(lái)越受歡迎；而僅有美貌沒有內(nèi)涵的人，接觸久了

就會(huì)越來(lái)越喪失魅力。③外在的美是具有時(shí)效性的，會(huì)隨時(shí)間的推移而

喪失，而注重能力的提高，可以使自己不斷得到充實(shí)。

Analysis

[1]描寫outline提到的現(xiàn)象。

[2]介紹outline提到的觀點(diǎn)。

[3][4]說(shuō)明自己的態(tài)度，ZE面提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，說(shuō)明能力更為重要。secureyouto…使用得當(dāng)，可以為文

章增添色彩。

[6]從能力與外貌二者隨時(shí)間推移此消彼長(zhǎng)的角度論證能力比外貌更重

要。

[7]簡(jiǎn)要總結(jié)文章的小心論點(diǎn)。

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7.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety?Thereismuchdiscussion

todayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Alongwiththe

developmentofscienceandtechnologyoursocietybecomesmoreandmore

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contrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywhereno

awarenessofpublicsanitationbreakingflowersrudelyandsoon.③

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lives.④Foronethingtosomeextentwecannotenjoyagoodenvironment

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itinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfriendsthattheymaylaughat

us.Lastbutnotleastinthequality-orientededucationtodayitbreachesthe

standardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussed

abovewemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentofour

societyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelementwhichmakesour

wholesocietylikeafamily.⑥Itneedsustochangefromourselvesandfrom

nowon;itrequiresustodoeasythingsagainandagain;itdemandsusto

influencethepeoplearoundus.?Themorewedothenearerwearetoour

harmonioussociety.HowtoConstructtheHarmoniousSociety?Thereis

muchdiscussiontodayabouthowtoconstructaharmonioussociety.Along

withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,oursocietybecomesmore

andmorebeautifulandcomfortable.②However,therearesomethingsthat

areincontrastwiththeharmonioussocietysuchasspittingeverywhere,no

awarenessofpublicsanitation,breakingflowersrudelyandsoon.③

Althoughthiskindofphenomenaisseldom,yetitinfluencesourqualitiesof

lives.④Foronething,tosomeextent,wecannotenjoyagoodenvironment,

andIbelievethatthereisnoonewhowanttoliveinascrapheap.Foranother,

itinfluencesourfiguresinfrontofourforeignfiiendsthattheymaylaughat

us.Lastbutnotleast,inthequality-orientededucationtoday,itbreachesthe

standardofusbeingawelcomeperson.⑤Fromwhathasbeendiscussed

above,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthatthedevelopmentof

oursocietyalsoneedsourspiritsreinforceharmonyelement,whichmakes

ourwholesocietylikeafamily.⑥Itneedsustochangefromourselvesand

fromnowon;itrequiresustodoeasythingsagainandagain;itdemandsus

toinfluencethepeoplearoundus.⑦Themorewedo,thenearerweareto

ourharmonioussociety.解析：①簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明構(gòu)建和諧社會(huì)是當(dāng)今社會(huì)關(guān)注

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②用兩個(gè)表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)折，說(shuō)明社會(huì)上還存在一些與和諧社會(huì)不相符

的現(xiàn)象，并舉出實(shí)例。no