Unit5IntothewildDevelopingideas—writingJiangsuYanchengWetlandNationalNatureReserveisfamousfordifferentkindsofbirds,includingthered-crownedcrane.Whatdoyouknowaboutit?Howaboutitsappearance,habitat,diet?Viewtheshortvideotofindmore.Readtheparagraphandanswerthequestions.1.Whatdoesthered-crownedcranelooklike?2.Wherecanyoufindit?3.Wheredoesitmigrateto?4.Whatdoesiteat?5.Whatsymbolicmeaningdoesthered-crownedcranehaveinChineseculture?Pre-writing1.Whatdoesthered-crownedcranelooklike?2.Wherecanyoufindit?3.Wheredoesitmigrateto?Ithaswhitefeathersexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Italsohasbrightredskinonthetopofitshead.ItcanbefoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.Itmigratestoeast-centralChinawhentheweathergetscold.4.Whatdoesiteat?5.Whatsymbolicmeaningdoesthered-crownedcranehaveinChineseculture?Iteatsfish,snailsandwaterplants.IthasasymbolicmeaningoflonglifeandgoodluckinChineseculture.Findtheusefulexpressionsintheparagraphandunderstandthemcarefully.它有……高。它的名字來自……它獨(dú)有的特征是……它的食物包括……它是……的象征。Itis…tall.Itgetsitsnamefrom…Itsuniquefeatureis…Itsfoodincludes…Itisasymbolof…Findtheusefulexpressionsintheparagraphandunderstandthemcarefully.以……而命名身高/體重為…………能活……年……能跑……快以……為食各種各樣的……被看作……胃口好它代表了……benamedafter…withaheight/weightof……canlivefor…years…canranataspeedof…feedon…avarietyof…beregardedas…h(huán)aveagoodappetiteItstandsfor…Readtheparagraphaboutthered-crownedcrane(丹頂鶴)andfillintheblanks.Appearance:thinandlonglegs,snowywhitefeathers,about140cminheight,weighupto32kilograms,...Habitat:different/variousplaces,isfoundinEastAsia,desert,forests,grasslands,warmandhumidbushes…Migration:TheymigratetoChinainwinter.Whenitbecomeswarm,itmigratestoSiberia.Diet/Food:haveagoodappetite,variousgrains,leaves,waterplants,insects,fish…Otherinformation:Itisasymbolof…Itstandsfor…Chooseananimalyouwanttowriteaboutandmakenotes.Animal:____________Appearance_________________________________Habitat_________________________________Migration_________________________________Diet_________________________________Otherinformation_________________________________□

Usefulexpressions·

Itis…tall.·

Itgetsitsnamefrom…·

Itsuniquefeatureis…·

Itsfoodincludes…·Itisasymbolof…While-writing寫一篇動物簡介Ⅰ.技能指導(dǎo)1.寫作指南：

此類文章以說明為主要表達(dá)方式，用來介紹動物的類屬、生活習(xí)性、生存狀態(tài)、外貌特征等，也可以是某種動物的生存現(xiàn)狀或者歷史的描述。審題“四確定”確定體裁和格式確定主體時態(tài)確定中心人稱確定段落科普說明文客觀事實(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時介紹動物第三人稱第一段：外貌特征

第二段：生活習(xí)性第三段：象征意義2.常用表達(dá)：（1）開頭One

of

my

favourite

wild

animals

is...They

live

in...我最喜歡的野生動物之一是……它們生活在……Because

of...,

the

number

of...

is

on

the

decline.由于……，……的數(shù)量在下降。We

have

realized

that

the

habitats

of

wild

animals...They

are

in

great

danger.我們已經(jīng)意識到野生動物的棲息地……它們處于極大的危險之中。A

variety

of

animals

have

been

killed

for

their

meat,

skins

and

fur.為了獲得肉、皮和毛，人們殺害了各種各樣的動物。（2）主體...are

very

cute

animals,

whose

fur

is...……是非常可愛的動物，它們的毛是……Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

body.它們的尾巴和身子一樣長。They

mainly

feed

on...它們主要以……為食。（3）結(jié)尾Protecting...can

not

only...，

but

also...保護(hù)……不但能……，而且能……As

for

me,

I

have

volunteered

to...Meanwhile,

the

government

should

take

effective

measures

to

protect

endangered

animals.對我來說，我已經(jīng)志愿做……同時，政府應(yīng)該采取有效的措施來保護(hù)瀕危動物。Therefore,

we

should

seek

for

solutions

to

protecting

wild

animals.因此，我們應(yīng)該尋求保護(hù)野生動物的解決方案。根據(jù)要求寫一篇瀕危動物西伯利亞鶴(又名“雪鶴”)的短文。1.外貌特征：140cm高；羽毛幾乎雪白；沒有羽毛的臉是淡紅色的。

2.棲息地:通常在東亞；冬天大多數(shù)遷徙到中國，極少數(shù)遷徙到伊朗。3.飲食習(xí)慣：胃口好，種類多，食魚、食蟲、食水草根莖等。4.象征意義：在中國文化中，代表優(yōu)雅、純潔、好運(yùn)和長壽。思路指引1.文章主要介紹一種動物，可以從外貌(appearance)、體型(tall、small、tiny等)、棲息地(habitat)、是否為遷徙(migration)動物、以什么為主食(food)以及其他信息(otherinformation)(是否瀕危,是否為國家保護(hù)動物……等方面來介紹。動物資料檔案思路指引2.語篇結(jié)構(gòu)：第一段：總體介紹；第二段：介紹某種動物的外貌、棲息地、飲食等；第三段：介紹當(dāng)前面臨的困境，并呼吁對其進(jìn)行保護(hù)。注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞，使行文連!貫,表達(dá)流暢。Thegiant...isananimalthatlivesin...Itfeedson...Manytreesarebeingcutdownandmoreandmoreforestsarelost,makinganimalslosetheirhomestolivein.Asforestsarebeingcutdown,itshabitatisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Toprotect...,measuresshouldbetakentosetupsomenaturereserves.Finally,weshouldletpeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingendangeredanimals.Inaword,wemusttakesomemeasurestoprotectrareanimalsfromextinction.實(shí)用表達(dá)

TheSiberiancraneisalsoknownasthesnowcrane.Itisabout140cminheight,generallyshorterthanthered-crownedcrane.Itsfeathersarenearlyallsnowywhiteexceptforsomeblackonesthatareonlyvisibleinflight.Itsfeatherlessfaceisreddishincolour.Appearance西伯利亞鶴,又名“雪鶴”。

140厘米高，一般比丹頂鶴矮。

羽毛幾乎雪白，除了一些黑色的，只有在飛行中才能看到。

沒有羽毛的臉是淡紅色的。

西伯利亞鶴通常生活在東亞，其數(shù)量被稱為東方種群。

它們在冬天遷徙到中國。

其他小得多的人口在冬天遷移到伊朗。TheSiberiancraneisusuallyfoundinEastAsia,whereitsnumbersareknownastheeasternpopulations.TheymigratetoChinainwinterwhileothermuchsmallerpopulationsmigratetoIraninwinter.Habitat&Migration雪鶴胃口好，種類繁多，食魚、食蟲、食水草根莖等。Thesnowcranehasagoodanddiverseappetite,includingfish,insects,therootsandtubersofwaterplantsandsoon.DietOtherinformation在中國文化中，雪鶴是優(yōu)雅、純潔、好運(yùn)和長壽的象征。InChineseculture,thesnowcraneisasymbolofelegance,purity,goodfortuneandlonglife.

TheSiberiancraneisalsoknownasthesnowcrane.Itisabout140cminheight,generallyshorterthanthered-crownedcrane.Itsfeathersarenearlyallsnowywhiteexceptforsomeblackonesthatareonlyvisibleinflight.Itsfeatherlessfaceisreddishincolour.TheSiberiancraneisusuallyfoundinEastAsia,whereitsnumbersareknownastheeasternpopulations.ThesemigratetoChinainwinter.OthermuchsmallerpopulationsmigratetoIraninwinter.Thesnowcranehasagoodanddiverseappetite,includingfish,insects,therootsandtubersofwaterplantsandsoon.InChineseculture,thesnowcraneisasymbolofelegance,purity,goodfortuneandlonglife.AppearanceHabitatMigrationDietOtherinformationⅡ.情景再現(xiàn)

寫一篇關(guān)于瀕危動物——金絲猴（golden

monkey）的短文。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.棲息地：主要在中國；

2.外貌：金黃色，有點(diǎn)灰；尾巴和身體一樣長；

3.生活環(huán)境：海拔1,500—3,000米的森林；

4.生活習(xí)性：群居，吃野果、樹葉等；

5.它們的數(shù)量在減少，呼吁人們停止獵殺金絲猴。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___【審題謀篇】【詞匯儲備】1.

____n.軟毛fur2.

_____adj.灰色的grey3.

____n.尾巴tail4.

_____v.獵取hunt5.

________以……為食feed

on【句型運(yùn)用】1.

金絲猴主要生活在中國。___________________________________Golden

monkeys

mainly

live

in

China.2.

金絲猴受到中國政府的保護(hù)。_____________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.3.

它們的毛是金黃色的，略帶灰色。________________________________Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.4.

它們的尾巴和身體一樣長。___________________________________Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.5.

雄性金絲猴又大又壯。__________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong.6.

雌性的要小得多。________________________________The

female

ones

are

much

smaller.7.

金絲猴生活在海拔1,500—3,000米的森林中。______________________________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.8.

它們喜歡群居生活。_______________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups.9.

它們以野果、樹葉等為食。____________________________________________They

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.10.

但是現(xiàn)在它們的數(shù)目越來越少。________________________________________________But

now

their

number

is

getting

smaller

and

smaller.11.

我們希望人們停止獵殺金絲猴。__________________________________________________We

hope

that

people

will

stop

hunting

golden

monkeys.【句式升級】1.

用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語合并句1和句2。_________________________________________________________________________________Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.2.

用while合并句5和句6。______________________________________________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.3.

用and合并句8和句9。_______________________________________________________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups

and

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.【連句成篇】

將以上句子連成一篇語言流暢、用詞準(zhǔn)確、邏輯嚴(yán)密的短文。The

golden

monkeys

Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.

Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.

Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.

The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.

Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.

They

like

living

in

family

groups

and

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.

But

now

their

number

is

getting

smaller

and

smaller.

We

hope

that

people

will

stop

hunting

golden

monkeys.一

常用表達(dá)第一段陳述現(xiàn)象:動物數(shù)量減少,瀕臨滅絕。Thenumberofanimals____________________________(正變得越來越少).____________________________________________(多種動物瀕臨滅絕)，whichconcernsusgreatly.第二段分析原因,逐一列舉。3.Thereasonsforthatare_________(如下).4.Humanactivitiesmainly___________________(造成這一結(jié)果).保護(hù)動物的書信、倡議書或演講稿isbecomingsmallerandsmallerAvarietyofanimalsareindangerofbeingextinctasfollowscontributetotheresult5.______________________________________________(一些動物棲息地已經(jīng)遭到破壞)，whichmostlyresultsfromhumanactivities6.Peopleoftenusechemicalstokilltheplants(that/which)animal________________(以.....為食).7.Somebusinessmenkillanimalsto____________(謀求利潤).第三段說明解決方法,政府采取措法,倡議全民行動,保護(hù)動物8.It'surgentto________________(采取措施)toprotectanimals.9.We__________________(應(yīng)當(dāng))protectthenaturalenvironmentbypreservingtheforests.aresupposedtoSomehabitatsofanimalshavebeendestroyedfeedonmakeaprofittakemeasures10.It'sbetterto_____________________(過低碳生活)toreduceenvironmentalpollution.11.Lastbutnotleast,everybodyshould_____________________________________(提高保護(hù)動物的意識).12.Thegoodnewsisthatthegovernment____________(已采取行動)toprotectendangeredanimals.13.Asmalleffortcan_________________________(有很大的影響/作用).14.It'swhatwedo___________(重要).livealow-carbonliferaisetheawarenesofprotectinganimalshastakenactionmakeabigdifferencethatcounts二、書面表達(dá)（一）假如你是李華,準(zhǔn)備參加某英文報紙關(guān)于"拯救大熊貓"的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文投稿。1.現(xiàn)狀:大熊貓瀕臨滅絕。2.原因:人類活動、氣候變暖等。3.措施:自擬(至少兩點(diǎn))。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearEditor,Nowadays,giantpandasare1._________________________(danger,extinct),whichconcernsusgreatly.

Thereasonsforthatare2.__________(follow).Firstly.somehabitatsofgiantpandashavebeendestroyed,whichmostly3.____________(result)humanactivities.Secondly,theclimateis4.______________________________(get,warm).Thegoodnewsisthatthegovernmenthastakenactiontoprotectgiantpandas.