預(yù)測(cè)10保護(hù)視力據(jù)悉，我國(guó)青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學(xué)生有視力方面的問題。為引起全社會(huì)的重視，教育部于今年春季已將近視防控納入中小學(xué)日常行為規(guī)范。從控制讀寫時(shí)間、控制電子產(chǎn)品的使用、堅(jiān)持戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)、保證睡眠時(shí)間等方面做了明確規(guī)定。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】話題作文：（一）人們常說“眼睛是心靈的窗戶”，然而當(dāng)下青少年的視力卻不好。保護(hù)視力的方法有很多，例如，每天做兩次眼保健操、多吃水果蔬菜、充足的睡眠等。寒假即將到來，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，介紹寒假里你將采取哪些護(hù)眼方式保護(hù)視力。要求:1.字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右；2.內(nèi)容適當(dāng)，行文連貫，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名；4.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞：protectEyesarethewindowsoftheheart,whilenowadaysmanyteenagershavepooreyesight._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Eyesarethewindowsoftheheart,whilenowadaysmanyteenagershavepooreyesight.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesightinmydailylife.Firstly,youshouldnotuseyoureyescontinuouslyforlongperiods.Afteryouhavereadforalongtime,abouttwohoursorso,youshouldtakearestbylookingatsomethingmoredistant,forexamplegreentrees.Secondly,youshouldkeepyourbookaboutafootawayfromyoureyeswhenyoureadit.Youshouldalsokeepinmind,“Don’treadinadimlightorinthesun;don’treadinamovingbusorinbed.”Lastbutnottheleast,whenyouareathome,doingeyeexercisesregularlywillhelpyoukeepgoodeyesight.【解析】【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，寫出在家保護(hù)視力的一些方法，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，本文應(yīng)該用第二人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，提出建議可以多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。（二）6月6日是第25個(gè)全國(guó)愛眼日，今年宣傳的主題為“視覺2020，關(guān)注普遍的眼健康”。疫情期間，同學(xué)們?cè)诩议L(zhǎng)時(shí)間接觸電子產(chǎn)品，視力健康問題引起普遍關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你以“SavingOurEyesight”為題寫一份倡議書，號(hào)召青少年愛眼護(hù)眼，呵護(hù)“心靈之窗”。寫作要求：1.分析造成青少年視力減退的原因。2.提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議。參考詞語(yǔ)：wrongposition(姿勢(shì)),readinbed,sitstraightSavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,“Eyesarethewindowtothesoul(心靈).”However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.【答案】例文SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,“Eyesarethewindowtothesoul.”However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?Themainreasonisthebadhabitsofusingeyes.Forexample,manyofusreadinwrongpositionssuchasreadinginbedorkeepingoureyestooclosetothebooks.Besides,spendingtoomuchtimeonthescreenandtakinglessexercisealsocausepooreyesight.Nowsomethingmustbedonetoprotectoureyes.First,sitstraightwhilereading.Second,don’tforgettorestduringtheworkingtime.It’salsohelpfultorelaxoureyesbyseeingsomegreentreesordoingeyeexercises.Lastbutnotleast,eatingsomefoodisgoodforoureyeslikecarrotsorfish.Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，要求以“拯救我們的視力”為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：分析造成青少年視力減退的原因；提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章開頭已給出，接著分析會(huì)造成這個(gè)問題的原因；第二段介紹保護(hù)視力的建議；最后一段總結(jié)概括。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。材料作文：（一）習(xí)近平主席呼吁：“共同呵護(hù)好孩子的眼睛，讓他們擁有一個(gè)光明的未來。”為此，學(xué)校廣播站邀請(qǐng)你寫一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)視力的倡議書，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇文章：現(xiàn)狀越來越多的孩子帶眼鏡；超過70％的初中生近視；父母、老師為此擔(dān)憂；建議學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)，每隔一小時(shí)，看看綠色植物；讀書寫字，保持正確姿勢(shì)；不在太陽(yáng)下看書；不躺在床上看書；做眼保健操；多進(jìn)行戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)；健康飲食；參考詞匯：近視的：short-sighted要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文章不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息Nowadays,pooreyesightisbecomingaproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考例文

Nowadays,pooreyesightisbecomingaproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.It’samazingthatthesituationisgoingfrombadtoworse.Itistimethatwetaketheproblemsseriously.Atpresent,moreandmorestudentswearglasses.Over70%ofthemiddleschoolstudentshavepooreyesight.Bothparentsandteachersareworriedaboutit.Inordertohavegoodeyesight,weshouldhavesomegoodways.First,whenwearestudying,lookatgreenplantseveryhour.Second,whenwearestudying,keepcorrectposture.Andremember:don’treadinthesunorinbed.Third,weshoulddoeyeexercisesatleasttwiceaday.Wecanalsotrytodosomesportsinoursparetime.Wehadbettereathealthyfood.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇文章關(guān)于保護(hù)視力的倡議書。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第一人稱為主。寫作時(shí)不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，保證單詞語(yǔ)法正確，條理清晰。（二）青少年近視問題已經(jīng)成為重要的社會(huì)問題。國(guó)家教育部部署在2021年3月開展了春季學(xué)期近視防控宣傳教育月活動(dòng)，主題為“共同呵護(hù)好孩子的眼睛，讓他們擁有一個(gè)光明的未來”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“HowtoProtectYourEyesight”為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：寫作要求：（1）文中要包括所有提示內(nèi)容，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。（2）文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名，校名和人名。（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）參考詞匯：ataclosedistance,outdooractivities,abalanceddietHowtoProtectYourEyesightAsisknowntoall,itisveryimportanttokeepgoodeyesight.Buthowtoprotectyoureyesight?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoProtectYourEyesightAsisknowntoall,itisveryimportanttokeepgoodeyesight.Buthowtoprotectyoureyesight?Ihavesomesuggestions.Firstly,you’dbetterhaveashortbreakafteryoureadbooksataclosedistanceforthirtyminutes.Secondly,exerciseisalsoimportanttokeepgoodeyesight.Itisnecessaryforyoutodooutdooractivitiestwohoursaday.Thatmeansyouneedtoexerciseintheopenairmorethan10hourseveryweek.Thirdly,ahealthyeatinghabitisimportantaswell.Youaresupposedtoeatmorevegetables,fruits,milk,eggsandlesssugar.Don’tbepickywithyourfood,abalanceddietisveryimportantbothforyourhealthandforyoureyesight.What’smore,youshouldkeepaproperdistancebetweenyoureyesandyourbookswhilereading.Lastbutnotleast,remembertodoeyeexercisesregularly,itwillhelpyoutokeepgoodeyesight.Ifyoufollowthesesuggestionsandformagoodhabit,youaresuretohavegoodeyesight.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“HowtoProtectYourEyesight”為題寫一篇短文，介紹如何保護(hù)自己的視力，要包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；介紹保護(hù)視力的方法時(shí)要有條理，可使用祈使句等句式來增加文章亮點(diǎn)。要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。（三）據(jù)調(diào)查，我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視問題越來越嚴(yán)重。近視會(huì)影響學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，保護(hù)視力已刻不容緩。請(qǐng)以HowtoProtectOurEyesight為題寫一篇短文。要求：1.80-120詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名及所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.用眼習(xí)慣（端正看書姿勢(shì)，適度使用電子產(chǎn)品，注意用眼時(shí)長(zhǎng)……）；2.如何防護(hù)（聽從醫(yī)生建議，多吃蔬菜，多做眼保健操，多看綠色植物……）；3.……（參考詞匯：eyesightn.視力：myopian.近視；shortsightedadj.近視的）HowtoProtectOurEyesightAccordingtorecentsurvey,theproblemofhavingmyopiaamongstudentsinChinahasbecomemoreandmoreserious.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asweallknow,eyesareveryimportantforus.Herearesomewaystoprotectoureyes.First,wehadbetternotreadinthesun.Itisalsoimportantforustoreadandwriteincorrectposture.Second,don’tplaywithmobilephonesinbedforalongtime,otherwise,itwillcausemyopia.Third,doingeyeexercisesisalsohelpful.What’smore,weshouldeatmorefruitsandvegetablesaswellasgoouttolookatsomethinggreenduringtheclassbreaks.Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourfuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)生近視的短文。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段敘述如何保護(hù)視力。最后一段總結(jié)，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)好我們的眼睛。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題，寫作中注意應(yīng)用所給單詞和短語(yǔ)。注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)使用連接詞。電子郵件：假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jenny因視力減退感到不安，向你傾訴。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件給她，談?wù)勀阍诒Ｗo(hù)視力方面的一些做法，并提出建議。要點(diǎn)提示：1.近視原因：閱讀壞習(xí)慣、使用手機(jī)時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)、……2.提出建議：戶外活動(dòng)、做眼保健操、……3.……要求：1.文中必須包括以上內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名和其他真實(shí)信息；3.詞數(shù)不少于80（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：eyesight視力

mobilephone手機(jī)DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】例文：DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.I’d

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helpful.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)和提示要點(diǎn)，寫出自己認(rèn)為造成近視的原因以及提出的建議等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。書信作文：假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Nancy最近視力減退嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要求和提示，用英文給她寫一封信，分享你在保護(hù)視力方面的一些做法。提示：（1）dosportsoutsidetheclassroom；（2）trytoavoidusingthemobilephone；（3）doeyeexercises；（4）……要求：（1）文中須包含全部要點(diǎn)，至少補(bǔ)充一條自己的做法；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、充實(shí)；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；（4）詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearNancy,I’msorrytohearthatyoureyesightisgettingpoor.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearNancy,I’msorrytohearthatyoureyesightisgettingpoor.I’dliketotalkaboutmywaysofprotectingeyesight.Atschool,Ioftendosportsorplayoutsidetheclassroomafterclass.Athome,Itryhardtoavoidusingthemobilephoneorcomputer.Thelightfromthescreensisharmfultooureyes.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingmyeyes.Lastly,Ihavemyeyesexaminedeverytermtomakesuretheyarehealthy.Ihopemywaysarehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按信的格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，寫出自己在保護(hù)視力方面的一些做法：在教室外做運(yùn)動(dòng)、盡量避免使用手機(jī)和做眼保健操等。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫、充實(shí)，條理清晰。演講稿：（一）據(jù)調(diào)查，成都市約90%的中學(xué)生有視力方面的問題，每年6月6日是全國(guó)愛眼日（NationalEye-CareDay）。為了宣傳愛眼護(hù)眼的重要性，你所在的學(xué)校正在開展為期一周的愛眼護(hù)眼活動(dòng)。你將在此活動(dòng)上做一次相關(guān)主題發(fā)言，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要求：1.結(jié)合圖示分析近視原因以及如何防治；2.呼吁同學(xué)們愛眼護(hù)眼。注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包括圖片提示所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名;3.100詞左右。參考詞匯：heritable可遺傳的。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：June6thisNationalEyesCaringDay.Quitealotofstudentshavebecomenearsightednow.Therearemanyreasons.Firstofall,itisheritable.Second,somestudentscan’tstayawayfromelectronicdevices.Third,nearsightednesscanalsobeduetounhealthyeatinghabits.Inaddition,manystudentsdon’thaveenoughsleep.Becauseoftheirbadeyesight,theymayhurteasilywhenplayingsports.What’smore,theyfeeltiredwhentheyarereading.Inmyopinion,it’simportanttohavegoodeyesight.Weshouldhavearighthabitofusingoureyes.Forexample,we’dbettertakeabreakafterreadingfor45minutes.Wecandoeyeexercisesanddomoresports.Ihopeweprotectoureyeswellsothatwecanseethethecolorfulworld.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容及提示信息寫發(fā)言稿，分析近視原因及如何防止，呼吁同學(xué)們保護(hù)眼睛。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一、三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。可分為兩段式寫作：第一段引出話題并分析近視的原因及造成的不便；第二段給出防止近視保護(hù)眼睛的建議并呼吁同學(xué)們保護(hù)眼睛。要做到無單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。（二）每年的6月6日為“全國(guó)愛眼日（NationalEyeDay）”。現(xiàn)在，隨著課業(yè)的增多，很多學(xué)生忽視了對(duì)眼睛的愛護(hù)，導(dǎo)致視力越來越差。為提高學(xué)生保護(hù)眼睛的意識(shí)，學(xué)校將舉辦一個(gè)關(guān)于如何保護(hù)眼睛的演講比賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.列舉不良的用眼習(xí)慣；2.提出建議；3.強(qiáng)調(diào)保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，呼吁同學(xué)們健康用眼。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearclassmates,June6thistheNationalEyeDay,whichremindsustoprotectoureyes._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Dearclassmates,June6thistheNationalEyeDay,whichremindsustoprotectoureyes.Eyesarethewindowsofourmind.Withouteyes,nothingisleftbesideyoubutdarkness.Nowadays,moreandmorestudentsplayelectronicdevicesforalongtime.Theydon’tpayattentiontoeyehealth.Howcanweprotectoureyes?It’snotrighttokeepyoureyesworkingforalongtimewithouthavingarest.Wearesupposedtopayattentiontoeyehealthanddoeyeexerciseseveryday.What’smore,we’dbetternotreadinstrongorlowlight.Andweshouldtrytouseasfewelectronicproductsaspossible.Lastbutnotleast,dooutdooractivitiesandseegreenplantsveryoften.Followmyadviceandformagoodhabit.It’stimetosaygoodbyetothickglasses.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿，要求根據(jù)提示信息談?wù)撽P(guān)于如何保護(hù)眼睛。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要分別從不良的用眼習(xí)慣、保護(hù)眼睛的建議和呼吁學(xué)生們注意健康用眼幾方面入手。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。（三）據(jù)悉，我國(guó)青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學(xué)生有視力方面的問題。為引起全社會(huì)的重視，教育部于今年春季已將近視防控納入中小學(xué)日常行為規(guī)范。從控制讀寫時(shí)間、控制電子產(chǎn)品的使用、堅(jiān)持戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)、保證睡眠時(shí)間等方面做了明確規(guī)定。近日你校將舉行一次以“SavingOurEyesight”為主題的演講活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇80~100詞的演講稿。分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議。ReasonSuggestions1.readinwrongpositions:readinbed,...2.spendmuchtimeonscreens...3.……1.sitstraight2.takearestanddoeyeexercises3.……要求：1.短文要包括以上所有要點(diǎn)；2.行文連貫、條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書寫規(guī)范、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名；4.詞數(shù)：80~100。短文開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Boysandgirls,Asthesayinggoes,“Eyesarethewindowtothesoul.”However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.___________________________________________________________________________________________________