高考快遞NMET書面表達評分標準：第五檔(很好)(21-25分)完全完成了試題規定的要求。—覆蓋所有的內容要點。—應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。—語法結構和詞匯方面有些錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構和較高級詞匯所致，具有較強的語言運用能力。—有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。2.

He

pretended

not

tosee

the

pretty

girl.hear

what

I

said.He

turneda

blind

eye

to

the

pretty

girl.a

deaf

ear

to

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said.Writing

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郵編：424100一、適當地使用一些單詞、詞組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采，豐富語氣的表現力。1.A

new

building

is

being

built

in

our

school.A

new

building

is

under

construction

in

our

school.It

is

raining

heavily.It

is

raining

cats

and

dogs.The

PRC

was

founded

in

the

year

1949.The

year

1949

saw

the

foundationof

the

PRC.二、盡量避免過多地重復使用某一單詞。I

like

reading

while

he

likes

playing

football.I

like

reading

while

he

enjoys

playing

football.When

summer

comes,

the

day

is

getting

longer

andlonger,

and

the

night

is

getting

shorter

and

shorter.When

summer

comes,

the

day

is

getting

longer

andlonger,

and

the

night

shorter

and

shorter.三、可適當地打破常規，用一些倒裝句、強調句或感嘆句,可以為文意的表達增添一點新意。The

girl

was

hardworking

and

careful,

and

she

passed the

test.Hardworking

and

careful,

the

girl

passed

the

test.I

hit him

in

the

face.It’s

I

who

hit him

in

the

face.I am

glad

that

you

have

made

so

much

progress.How

glad

I’m

that

you

have

made

so

much

progress.四、使用主從復合句、分詞、不定式等來代替簡單句，能使書面表達行文更加流暢有力。He

was

very

humorous.

We

all

like

to

play

with

him.He

lay

on

the

grass,

counting

the

stars

in

the

sky.We

are

studying

hard

in

order

to

pass

the

entrance examination.In

order

to

pass

the

entrance

examination,

we

arestudying

hard.He

lay

on

the

grass

and

counted

the

stars

in

the

sky.He

lay

on

the

grass,

counting

the

stars

in

the

sky.五、改變句子開頭方式，適當地把一些成份提前位于句子的開頭，使整個句子讀起來跌宕起伏，增加書面表達的表現力。A

temple stood

between

the

two

buildings

,

in

which

an old

monk

lived.Between

the

two

buildings stood

a

temple,

inwhich

an old

monk

lived.The

remains

of

Tom

is

floating

on

the

surface

of

theriver.On

the

surface

of

the river

is

floating

the

remains

of

Tom.As

he

was

deep

in

thought,

he

forgot

his

lunch. Deep

in

thought,

he

forgot

his

lunch.;表示時間;表示并列等。六、注意語句間的銜接與連貫，可使全文結構緊湊，層次清楚過渡自然。英語中的關聯詞語可以稱之為“篇章的紐帶”，這些關聯詞first,

later,

then,finally語可以是表示順序的，如now,

at

present,

in

the

past,

during

the

day的:and,

or或選擇的：because,

so,

thanks

tolaterAfter

graduation,

he worked

as

a

teacher,thenpost

office, he

quitted

his

job

and

did

business,he

became

a

millionaire.in

afinally;表因果的:first二00一年高考英語優秀書面表達賞析[原題]假設你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國的中小學正在減輕學生的學習負擔，來信詢問有關情況。請你根據下面提供的信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負給你的學習和生活帶來的變化。周末活動（減負前）周末活動（減負后）白天：上課、做作業白天：參加博物館、學習電腦、繪畫等晚上：做作業晚上：看新聞、讀書、看報就寢時間：11：30就寢時間：10：00Dear

Dick,How

nice

to

hear

from

you

again.

In

your

letter,

you

asked

meabout

the

reduction of

learning

load

in

China.

Now,

I’ll

tell

yousomething

about

it.In

the

past,

we

had

lots

of

homework

to

do

and

had

little

timeto

do

other

things.

Even

on

weekends,

we

went

to

school

and

didhomework

in

the

daytime,

and

still

did

homework

at

night.

Iusually

went

to

bed

at

11:30,

so

I

felt

sleepy

the

next

day.Now,

after

reducing

learning

load,

we

have

much

more

sparetime.

On

weekends,

I

usually

go

to

museums,

study

computer,and

do

some

drawing

and

so

on.

At

night,

I

often

watc