專題復習高考寫作指導假設你是艾學習，上個星期天去市圖書館看書時發現以下問題，你寫信向館長Mr.Wang反映：1.實用性的書、新書太少；2.書架上的書比較混亂；3.閱覽室的光線對視力有害；4.管理員工作時彼此閑聊。書面表達DearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi答題卡DearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

Ifoundsomeproblemsinyourlibrary.Tostartwith,Ididn’tfindtoomanybooksthatarepractical,andnewbooksmightbetoofew.Inaddition,booksontheshelvesarealittlebitoutoforder,whichmakesithardforreaderstofindwhattheyneed.Whatisalsonotgoodisthelightfromoutside,thelightisalittledark,whichcaneasilydoharmtothereaders’eyes.Moreover,thefactthattheworkerschatwitheachotherreallymakesmedisappointed.Afterall,theirvoicesnotonlydisturbthereaders’readingbutalsotheirmoods.Theyhaveabadeffectontheimageofyourlibrary.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi學生習作StudentADearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

Ifoundsomeproblemsinyourlibrary.Tostartwith,Ididn’tfindtoomanybooksthatarepractical,andnewbooksmightbetoofew.Inaddition,booksontheshelvesarealittlebitoutoforder,whichmakesithardforreaderstofindwhattheyneed.Whatisalsonotgoodisthelightfromoutside,thelightisalittledark,whichcaneasilydoharmtothereaders’eyes.Moreover,thefactthattheworkerschatwitheachotherreallymakesmedisappointed.Afterall,theirvoicesnotonlydisturbthereaders’readingbutalsotheirmoods.Theyhaveabadeffectontheimageofyourlibrary.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.

Yours,AiXuexi評點StudentA

要求考生根據所給情景，用英語寫一篇100個單詞左右的短文。

情景包括目的、對象、時間、地點、內容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。

本部分滿分25分，所需時間約為30分鐘。NMET的要求NMET書面表達評分原則1、先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定檔次。第五檔：21~25分第四檔：16~20分第三檔：11~15分第二檔：6~10分第一檔：1~5分

0分語言地道，規范覆蓋所有內容要點2、主要內容：內容要點；詞匯和語法的數量和準確性；上下文的連貫；語言的得體性應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯有效地使用了語句間的連接成分3、拼寫和標點是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。4、詞數少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。NMET書面表達評分原則Somethingimportant

foragoodarticleStructureInformationShinningpoints給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Introduction點題；一兩個句子；概括性；暗示或開門見山2.Body

中心敘述部分；層次分明3.Ending

小結；呼應主題；要求或呼吁structure給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分IntroductionWhy?Findsomeproblems2.Body

Fourproblems3.Ending

Purpose:expectsomeimprovementsstructurePreparenecessaryinformationProblems:1.實用性的書、新書太少；1.newly-published,practical2.書架上的書比較混亂；

2.ontheshelves,inamess,

outoforder3.閱覽室的光線對視力有害；3.readingroom,light,dim,doharmto4.管理員工作時彼此閑聊。4.workers,chatwith,whileworkingAddpossibleinformationHowdoyoufinditProblemsBadeffectsWhensearchforsomethingnewnotenoughnewbookscannotattractreadersWhenlookforwhatIwantoutoforderhardtofindtherightbookWhilereadingdimlightdoharmtoeyesWhilereadingchattingworkerscannotenjoyreadingDearMr.Wang,LastSunday,Iwenttodosomereadinginyourlibrary.

OverthetimeIwasthere,Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.Therefore,I’dliketovoicemyopinions,which,Ihope,wouldbeusefulforyoutocreateamorecomfortableplaceforreaders.First,therearefewnewandpracticalbooksontheshelves,andmostbooksarenotpopulartoday.Second,somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder,makingitdifficultforreaderstofindwhattheywantquickly.Third,theassistantsdidn’toffergoodservices.Instead,theywerealwayschatting.Inaddition,poorlightinthereadingroomisbadforeyes.

So,forthesakeofreaders,Isuggestthatyouchangeallthosementionedassoonaspossible.Yours,AiXuexiOnePossibleVersionPossiblePatternDearXX,……butIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_______for____.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,XX假設你是艾學習，上個星期天去市圖書館看書時發現以下問題，你寫信向館長Mr.Wang反映：1.實用性的書、新書太少；2.書架上的書比較混亂；3.閱覽室的光線對視力有害；4.管理員工作時彼此閑聊。Practice模板填空：DearMr.Wang,…butIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as/for__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_________________.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,

AiXuexiExercise假設你是李華，在出國交流學習期間，到當地一家電影院看了一場精彩的電影，但在觀影過程中發現了一些問題。請你根據下列提示用英語給影院經理寫一封信。1.因廣告過多，影片放映晚點；2.影片播放音量過大；3.安全出口標識不明，存在安全隱患；4.適當結尾。參考詞匯：安全出口－exit安全隱患－potentialsafetyhazardDearManager,I’manexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyourcinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverygood,but______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaPreparenecessaryinformation

1.因廣告過多，影片放映晚點；thefilmwasdelayed,toomanyads

2.影片播放音量過大；soundtooloud3.安全出口標識不明，存在安全隱患；theEXITsignsnotseenclearly,presentpotentialsafetyhazards.4.適當結尾。參考詞匯：安全出口－exit安全隱患－potentialsafetyhazardAddpossibleinformationHowdoyoufinditProblemsBadeffectsthedelayedfilmtooloudsoundEXITsignsnotseenclearlypotentialsafetyhazard假設你是李華，在出國交流學習期間，到當地一家電影院看了一場精彩的電影，但在觀影過程中發現了一些問題。請你根據下列提示用英語給影院經理寫一封信。1.因廣告過多，影片放映晚點；2.影片播放音量過大；3.安全出口標識不明，存在安全隱患；4.適當結尾。參考詞匯：安全出口－exit安全隱患－potentialsafetyhazardPractice模板填空：DearMr.Wang,…ThefirmwasgoodbutIdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthereIfoundsomethingunpleasant.First,_______as/for__________.Then,__________,makingitdifficultfor_____to______________.Inaddition,_________________.Itwasratherannoying.Tomakemattersworse,_____________so_____thatIcouldhardlybearit.Asa_____toyour_____________,I’mdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyour_____.I’mwritingtheletterinthehopethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.

Yoursfaithfully,

AiXuexiDearManager,I’manexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyourcinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverygood,but

IdidnotenjoyitbecauseoverthetimeIwasthere,Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.

First,thefilmwasdelayedasthereweresomanyadvertisementsatthebeginning.Itwasratherannoying.

Second,thesoundofthefilmwassoloudthatIcouldhardly

bearit.Third,theEXITsignscouldnotbeseenclearly,whichpresentedpotentialsafetyhazards.Andifsomethingterribleshoul