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議論文題型分類大全搞定這一步,穩穩上6.5分!2023/1/5TwoQuestions=Report原因分析+解決方案原因分析+有何影響原因分析+隨機(鬼才知道會問什么)造成的問題+解決方案---特別注意你有可能遇到其中任何一種組合TwoQuestions=Report注意區分這兩個問題,經常導致TR低分Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatproblemsdoesitcause?分析原因的原則1.不能只局限在中國;2.客觀的出發點(要有證據,別感慨);3.如果有比較級,要通過年代對比找到原因(至關重要);2023/1/5用來寫原因的topicsentences1.Thefirstreasonfortheshortageofyoungerteachersisthatateachingjobpayspoorly.2.Thefirstreasonwhybicycleridingisnolongerpopularisthatpeopletodayhavemuchmorechoicesfortransportation.3.Inaddition,theincreaseintheamountofrubbishisalsoaresultofpeopleusingmoredisposableproducts.4.Itistruethatpoorhealthofthegeneralpopulationisassociatedwithpeople’sbadeatinghabits.2023/1/5report類型的核心段(原因+解決方案版本)1.直接改寫原題,不需要背景引出(考察改寫能力)+承上啟下(可以只預告第一個問題/也可以兩個都預告)2.第一個原因分析。(idea--support)3.Anothercauseisthat……,第二個原因分析。(idea--support)4.(因為…很嚴重/因為…做某事很重要)~~~~someasuresshouldbetakento…….解決方案1+(sothat)結果解決方案2+(Inthisway,)結果5.總結重復原因/解決方案2023/1/5范文-12023/1/5Task2:Fewerandfewerpeoplechoosetoridebicycleswhengoingoutside.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatcanbedonetoencouragepeopletocycle?

范文-12023/1/5Owningabicycleandusingitfrequentlyseemstobemuchlesspopulartoday.Ibelievethatthegrowthinthesizeofcitiesandtheadvancedmoderntransportsystemarethemainreasonsforthis.Thegovernmentshouldtakestepstochangethissituation.

Thefirstreasonwhyridingbicyclesisnolongerpopularisthatcitieshavebeengrowingbigger.Thismeansthatthedistancebetweenhomeanddestinationshasemuchfarther.Ifpeoplekeepthehabitofcycling,thentheywillfinditreallytime-consumingandenergy-consuming.Whentheyfinallygettotheschooloroffice,theywillprobablyfeelexhaustedandcanhardlyconcentrateontheirworkorstudy.

范文-12023/1/5Anothercauseisthatagreatervarietyofmeansoftransportareavailabletodailycommuterstoday.Inthepast,ridingabicyclewasthemainchoiceformanypeopletogotoworkorforfun.Today,however,peoplelivingincitiesandtownscanhaveawiderrangeofchoices,includingmorebuslines,taxiesandeventheUberservice.Anyoftheseismoreefficientandcomfortablethancyclingandthereforethistraditionalwayoftransporthasbeenlosingpopularity.

Itisundeniablethatridingabikeisbeneficialforboththeindividualandsociety,someasuresshouldbetakentoenticeandencouragepeopletobemoreactiveinthischoice.Firstly,thegovernmentcouldbuildspeciallanesforcyclists,sothattheycanridesafelyandquickly.Inaddition,monetaryrewardsshouldbeprovidedtopeoplewhoridetheirbicyclesmoreoften.Inthisway,morepeoplewouldhavetheincentivetousethisold-fashionedwaytocommute.

范文-12023/1/5Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofmoderncitieshasledtoadecreasingnumberofpeopletravelingbybicycle.Ibelievethatmeasuresmentionedabovecouldeffectivelyreversethissituation.

范文2分析Alotofyoungpeopledonotknowhowtomanagetheirmoneywhengraduatingfromhighschool.Whatdoyouthinkarethereasons?Whatcanbedonetoteachthemthisimportantskill?2023/1/5范文2分析這篇文章的兩個原因寫成了一個段落,因為各自展開比較少。為了保持段落平衡,合成一段比分開寫更合理。2023/1/5范文2分析Manyyoungpeopleareleavingschoolwithoutabasicandvitalunderstandingofhowpersonalfinancesoughttobemanagedintheadultworld.Thislackofknowledgeisduetoalackoflifeexperienceandlimitededucationwhichcanbesolvedintwosimpleways.

Onemainreasonwhysomanyyoungpeopleareunabletomanagetheirownfinancesuponfinishinghighschoolisthattheyhavebeenlivingalongwiththeirparentsforfree.Asaresult,theyhaveneverneededtoearnasalaryorsavetheirmoneyinordertopaybills.Anothercauseisthatschoolsdonotfactorpersonalfinancialmanagementintotheircurriculum.Schoolsfocusinsteadonclassicsubjects,suchasmaths,geography,historyandlanguages,whichmeansimportantlifeskillsarenotbeingtaught.Bothteachersandparentsarefailingtoprepareyoungpeoplefortherealworld.

2023/1/5范文2分析Therearetwooptionsforsolvingyoungpeople’sinabilitytomanagepersonalfinances.Firstly,parentsshouldspendtimewiththeirchildrenteachingthemhowmoneyisearned,budgetedandusedforeithersavingsorexpenses.Onesimplestepcouldbeforparentstostartbyteachingyoungchildrenhowtomanagetheirpocketmoneyand,astheirchildgrowsup,expandintomoreserioushouseholdexpenses.Secondly,schoolsshouldincorporatelifeskillsintotheircurriculumforfinalyearstudents.Inthisway,childrenwillbeabletolearninasupportiveenvironmenthowtheirfinancesneedtobebudgetedandmanagedtoavoiddebtproblemslaterinlife.

Inconclusion,youngpeoplelackfinancialmanagementskillsduetothenegligenceofparentsandschools,whichcanonlybesolvedifbothtakemoreresponsibilityforequippingschoolleaverswiththerightskills.2023/1/5解決方案--切實可行1.政府---至關重要(收稅/花錢/頒布法律);1).Thegovernmentcouldimposehighertaxeson……sothat…….2).Whatthegovernmentshoulddoistoinvestin…../financiallysupport…../spendmoneydoing……….3).Thegovernmentoughttorequire…..to…...2.家長3.學校4.公司5.authorities2023/1/5report類型的核心段(原因+有何影響版本)1.直接改寫原題,不需要背景引出(擴充或者縮減原題)+承上啟下(最好兩個問題都預告)2.Oneofthereasonsisthat第一個原因分析。(idea--support)3.Inaddition,第二個原因分析。(idea--support)4.過渡句---Tomyknowledge,thereare完全取決于你自己(好/壞/雖然….但是…..)5.總結(重復原因/影響)2023/1/5Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearechangingcareersduringworkinglife.Whatdoyouthink

arethereasons?Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegative

developmentforsociety?

2023/1/5Inthepast,manypeopleusedtostayinthesamejobfortheirlifetime.Today,however,jobhoppinghasethenewnormal,which,frommypointofview,isduetoacombinationofreasonsandseemstohavesignificantnegativeeffectsonsociety.Onemainreasonformorepeoplechangingcareersistheincreaseintheirjobchoices.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnology,thereareagreatnumberofnewoccupationswhicharebelievedtobemoreappealingincreativityorflexibility.InChina,forexample,anincreasingnumberofwhite-collarswithrepetitivedailyroutineshaveswitchedfromworkingintheofficetostartingtheirownbusinessesontheinternet.2023/1/5Anothercauseofcareermoveisthecontinuouslyrisinglivingcostinmostcountriesaroundtheworld.Asthepriceforalmosteverythinghasbeensoaring,thereisenormousfinancialpressureimposedonadultswhowanttoprovidetheirfamilieswithhighqualityoflife,whichdrivesthemtoseekbetterpayingjobs.Oneofthemosteffectivewaystoachievetheirfinancialambitionisbelievedtohopfromonecompanytoanother.

Althoughitmayberewardingfortheindividualtochangejobs,therewillbeseveralundesirableesforsociety.Firstly,asmorepeopleconsiderswitchingtheircareers,thereislikelytobeawasteofmoneyandtimespentonthetrainingofnewemployees,whichasaresultwillnegativelyaffecttheprofitabilityandproductivityofcompanies.Inaddition,jobhoppingmayalsocauseaburdentothegovernment,becausepeoplebetweenjobsmaybedependentonthefinancialassistanceprovidedbypublicfunds,whichwillleadtoinsufficientinvestmentinmoreimportantservices,suchaseducationandhealthcare.2023/1/5試著自己寫個結尾段2023/1/5report類型的核心段(問題+解決方案版本)1.直接改寫原題,不需要背景引出(擴充或者縮減原題)+承上啟下(我認為這會導致……的問題,他們能夠被解決)2.第一個問題擴展(idea--support)3.Inaddition,第二個問題擴展。(idea--support)4.針對這兩個問題提出解決方案5.總結(問題+解決)2023/1/5report類型的核心段(問題+解決方案版本)Ariseinthestandardoflivinginacountryoftenonlyseemstobenefitcitiesratherthanruralareas.Whatproblemsmightthisdifferencecause?Howmighttheseproblemsbereduced?

2023/1/5report類型的核心段(問題+解決方案版本)Therehasbeenasignificantriseinlivingstandardsofpeopleinmanycountries,suchasbettereducationqualityandsmalleredisparity.However,itseemsthatsuchimprovementsaremostlyenjoyedbyurbandwellersratherthanthoselivinginthecountryside,which,inmyopinion,willresultinmanyundesirableesforbothcitiesandruralareas.

2023/1/5report類型的核心段(問題+解決方案版本)Asurbanliveskeepingincreasinglyappealing,alargenumberofpeoplewillbedrawntocitieseitherinsearchofmoreemploymentopportunitiesorseekingsuperiorhealthcare.Thiswilldefinitelyposetremendouspressureonbothlocalsandersofbigcities,suchasrisinglivingcosts,frustratingtrafficcongestion,andintensecompetitionforjobs.

2023/1/5report類型的核心段(問題+解決方案版本)Asforruralareas,theproblemscausedarealsosignificant.Tobespecific,therewillbeasevereshortageoflabourforceworkingintheagriculturalindustry,withtoomanypeoplemigratingfromvillagestotownsandcities.Asaresult,farminglandwouldbeleftuncultivatedandcropyieldswouldsignificantlydecline,possiblyfollowedbyariseinfoodpricesnationwide.

2023/1/5report類型的核心段(問題+解決方案版本)Ithink,therefore,thatmeasuresshouldbetakentonarrowthegapoflifequalitybetweenurbanandruralareas.Firstly,taxreductionandexemptioncouldbeapossiblesolutiontotheproblemoflabourdrain.Inotherwords,bothindividualsandbusinesseswillchoosetostayifthereissuchafavorable(preferential)policy.Secondly,thegovernmentcouldalsomakepeoplewillingtostaywheretheywerebornandgrewupbyimprovinglocallivingconditions,suchasbudgetingmoremoneytowardseducationandhealthservices.

Inconclusion,theproblemscausedbythedisparitybetweencitiesandvillagesareconcerningpeopleofbothplaces.Theycanonlybesolvedifthegovernmenttakesmoreresponsibilityforclosingthegap.

2023/1/5Report類型的第一段一般不需要背景句,題目中的現象本身就是背景,所以只需要直接開始改寫的工作就可以了。2023/1/5report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語)1)Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudents’behavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Poorstudentbehavior

seemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.Parentsandschoolsshouldberesponsibleforsolvingthisproblem.(提前總結型過渡:預告了原因和解決)2023/1/5report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語)2).Childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimesthanbefore.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Howshouldtheybepunished?Thenumberofcrimescommittedbychildrenandteenagershasbeenincreasing.Ithinkthattherecouldbe

severalreasonswhythisishappening

andthattheyoungercriminalsshouldbepunisheddependingonwhattheyhavedone.(空話型過渡)2023/1/5report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語)3).Someemployersthinkthatformalacademicqualificationsaremoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalqualitieswhentheylookforanemployee.Whyisitthecase?Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?Formaleducationalqualificationsarebelievedtobemoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalitytraitswhenacompanyisrecruitingnewstaffs.Thiscriterionofchoosingemployeescanbeexplainedbythefollowingreasonsandfrommypointofview,itisapositivedevelopmentforbothjobseekersandcompanies.(空話型過渡)2023/1/5report類型的介紹段(基本句型的切換)4).Theaverageweightofcitizenshasbeenincreasinginmanycountr

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